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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on January 20, 2005
    Great story. Don't know whether to feel sorry for Hermione or not. Do want to thump Ron on the head for being such a "man". Looking forward to more soon.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Kowols on January 20, 2005
    I truly love this story. The pacing is excellent!
    I keep hearing "Rondo Veneziano" in my head when I read this, especially when Severus is choosing his mask. Have you ever heard this musical group? The piece "Rondo Veneziano" is from an album they did about 1985 or so...so you know it's probably out of print by now.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

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  • From Pankhurst on January 20, 2005
    Incredible story, thoroughly enjoying it so far! I like that Snape seems compelled to provide a feast of the senses, seems to fit with his prickly but passionate nature.
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  • From ANON - karabdai on January 20, 2005
    I look forward to every update you post! This chapter is wonderful. Before Hermione's conflict about the gigalo and Ron was very angst worthy but in this chapter it really is almost hilarious. I can't believe the rationalization she uses to have her cake and eat it too. I love it!!! I can't wait for the roof to come falling down on the whole thing... I really sympathize with Hermione but it will be nice to see her get back some of her confidence and see how she and Snape plot to get them out of that situation. Her job situation is very intriuging too. I can't wait to know whats going on with that. Brilliant chapter as usual! I can't wait for your next installment.
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  • From ANON - June W on January 20, 2005
    Ch 14 - I hope this night makes Hermione more sympathetic to Ginny - I really hated Hermione in last chapter for "playing God" and threatening Ginny if she didn't single-handedly make her marriage to Harry work. Ugh! So Severus and Draco have money in other countries that they can access once they escape? Lavender won't report them to MOM? The boys can't be extradited to the UK? Thanks for the new chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing the reason Hermione is still stuck in her dead-end job. Write faster, write faster, please!
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  • From on January 18, 2005
    Such a brilliant story you have written. It's truly one of my favorites on here and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Moyra on January 09, 2005
    Great chapter you
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  • From ANON - June W on January 07, 2005
    Ch 13 - Hermione seems very messed up as well. At least she knows she's being a bit hypocritical - as if marriage counseling would help HER marriage any! Especially now that she has seen the before-Draco and after-Draco photos of Ginny. I wouldn't be surprised if this Harry - who interfered with Ron's auror career out of Harry's own concerns - also interferes with Hermione's lack of career advancement; after all, to Harry, Hermione's career is unimportant because she's supposed to be home taking care of Ron's babies. Right now, all my sympathies are going to Severus, Draco, and Ginny; I'd just as soon slap Hermione! VERY realistic reactions for all the characters.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on January 07, 2005
    I love your story. It seems to me that if I were Harry I would have probably been homicidal or would have joined voldie against muggles. Keep up the great story and looking forward to more soon.

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  • From ANON - Josh Cohen on January 04, 2005
    I really like this story. It captures the characters very well. And it redeems Malfoy, which is pretty tough to do.

    But what I think I like best is that it treats the characters like regular people. Regular people have sex. I mean, even in books where characters have sex with their husbands and wives, it's often hush-hush -- either the characters' thoughts are lampooned ("as he thrust into her, she wondered if she would have time to finish the laundry tomorrow morning") or we get the "throbbing organ" variety of sex scene or we get nothing at all, and we're meant to assume that the sex happened, and it was mutually satisfying. Many authors forget to address sex -- they forget that what happens between the sheets has a direct relationship to what goes on outside the bedroom as well. A direct relationship and a direct effect.

    This story doesn't forget that, and that's what I like most about it.
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  • From ANON - June W on January 04, 2005
    Ch 12 - yikes, it's going to get even WORSE than this???? Omigosh, you know how to pour on the angst. I just hope you don't kill off Draco, Severus, Hermione, Ginny, or Lavender. Feel free to kill Fudge and Moody, and Harry and Ron! I also hope Hermione backs off from trying to "fix" Ginny and Harry's marriage; Ginny is certainly justified in her complaints about Harry, and Hermione should have asked Ginny years ago what kind of presents she wanted. Looks like Hermione doesn't know Ginny either. THANK YOU for the new chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on January 04, 2005
    This could go to hell in a handbasket, but you're obviously angling for a happy ending. i love the plot so far, but woulk for more logic to it.
    -Baker
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  • From ANON - Moyra on December 19, 2004
    Very interesting developments here - Tonks can
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  • From ANON - Polar Thestral on December 13, 2004
    *snigger* How ironic. Hermione rants and rants at Harry for not communicating with Ginny, while she is also going to a giggolo because she can't communicate with Ron. Ha. *shakes head* I love how you are exploring the issues of hypocrisy in people, I know I've said it before, but it's so realistic. People can scoff and rant at other peoples vices without really seeing their own, or refusing to study them too closely at least. I'm enjoying this immensely, please come back soon :)

    B xxx
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  • From ANON - June W on December 13, 2004
    Ch 10 - hmm, if Lavender is expanding into the Americas and Asia, she can always claim to need Severus and Draco as "entertainment: for her overseas business contacts. An emergency portkey for each of her boys would keep them safe from Harry.... I think the sight of those unwashed dishes and "imps" would be enough to make me leave Ron without a backward glance. Thanks for the update!
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