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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Fox on June 19, 2016
    Chapter 75.
    Thank you for an update. I've squeaked out loud. It made me so happy.
    I really like how you write about the trio settling in their new life. It's very soothing to witness. Draco and Ginny will be very happy, I'm sure. It's also fun to see Severus being a main attraction for local single witches, and at last being able to set his new potions business as he wanted.
    I'm not one bit sorry for Molly, she got what she deserves for all her meddling. I would say bad mother and bad luck.
    I greedily read every word you type in and can't wait for Hermione's investigation to begin.
    I want them to be together already, but at the same time I want your story to carry on for as long as possible. It's simply wonderful.
    Thank you
    Your Fox
    xx
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  • From ANON - Fox on June 10, 2016
    Dear Betz,
    The story is great. I honestly can't wait for more. I check for updates every few days just to make sure I don't miss anything.
    I usually read only completed stories, but I couldn't stop myself. No regrets -of course.
    Thank you, I'll be waiting for more.
    Fox xx
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on June 05, 2016
    Yeaa I'm all up to date
    your story is progressing wonderfully
    thank you for your continued dedication
    can't wait to read more
    patty
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  • From ANON - Fox on May 19, 2016
    Oh god.
    I hate it, that Harry knows so much already...I wish he didn't. And how exactly did he came to this conclusion?
    I hope Hermione will not be in too much trouble...
    Thank you
    Fox
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  • From luckylishy on May 02, 2016
    I just want to say that I thought it was hilarious that Snape kept getting hit on. this chapter made my day.
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  • From ANON - VS on May 01, 2016
    Poor Hermione! Short chapter, but full of emotion. You have me totally hooked and I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on April 30, 2016
    I didn't realize until after Hermione was running up the stairs that she was gunna go with them (I know, dumb of me) but when she dropped the vile, I'm pretty sure my roommate (probably sleepi MG or not?) Was wondering why sheheard a smacking sound. Bad cliffy but the best cliffy ever xD I deffddiinately can't wait till the next season!! Will it be another story...or just more chapters?
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  • From SickPuppy on April 30, 2016
    Loving, loving LOVING this! (Oh and Pawnography as the name of the chess catalogue? Inspired!). Hope the HP con goes well and we get some chapters! SP
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  • From Simplysubmissive on April 30, 2016
    Awesome story and I can't wait to read more. The lemons, they have something to do with Dumbleores will or how to clear the two don't they?
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  • From SickPuppy on April 29, 2016
    Good God - Fudge's treatment of Death Eaters ... words fail me! Only a little way but very keen for more. Sp
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  • From Fox on April 28, 2016
    My Dear,
    I've decided -you are evil! Why?
    1. How could you do this to Hermione and Severus??? That was such a disappointment...(for them of course more than for me...)
    2. How could you do this to me??? I know I've been naughty, but there are plenty of other readers of yours, who do not deserve being left hanging like that.
    And yes, as I was reading, I thought it seemed a lot like a tv program. Just like the last episode of the series of Game of Thrones, or something.
    I do hope it won't take you months to update, now I'm even more nervous than before.
    I'll keep waiting :(
    Fox

    P.S.
    Hurry up
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  • From Fox on April 23, 2016
    Dear Betz,
    I have admit to a horrible sin, I've been reading your story without reviewing! I apologise for my shameful behavior and promise to do better in future. I light of my past transgressions I feel, I have no right to ask for a quick update...I'll be waiting patiently in hope you'll grace us soon with another piece of your creativity.
    Your story is very original, wonderful and highly entertaining. I love how everything evolves and builds up so slowly, without artificial rushing it forward. It feels natural and believable, no loose ends and it's quite amazing how everything is so connected -just like in the real life/universe. Your story is a perfect microcosm.

    It triggers a lot of different emotions in me starting with anger at the injustice of the world, that punishes my favorite Potions Master for all his sacrifice. Then surprise at Hermione's situation and impatience at her guilt over Ron. Disgust and annoyance for Ron (I don't like him). Fury and resentment toward your Molly -how could she??? And eventually such happiness, that Ginny & Draco and then Hermione & Severus found each other and such dread that SS, DM and GW will leave without Hermione -I'm not sure I could even consider to stay behind...their last evening filled me with such sadness...I really wanted to cry...I really hate one last times and goodbyes. I do hope they will be alright and have a chance to be together before they grow old??? Please??? And that HG sacrifice will be rewarded by finding proof of their innocence -I do have a feeling it's something to do with the lemon tree.
    Thank you so much for your writing.
    Fox xx
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  • From ANON - Chester on April 23, 2016
    I love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on April 20, 2016
    Yummy drink, but awesome! I would love to come but poor college students can only do so much... have fun tho! Tell us all about it! And oh my god please don't leave us on a cliffy for too long!!
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on April 15, 2016
    I love the cooking recipes! I hope I'll be able to try them eventually. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm worried. ... .. I hope ...well of course what we all hope. THEY GOTTA SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN. Now that song at then end of fast and furious 7 is playing in my head and I might cry. Yet again.
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