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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Chester on April 04, 2016
    I am at a loss of words. Lavender set the whole thing up? And here I thought there was some altruistic reason. Just promise that Hermione will make her pay. Literally - lifetime patents and compensation for years? Or destroy the company with a bad potion? Oooohhhh!!! Because a simple hex is not enough.
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  • From ANON - Robin on April 01, 2016
    Hurray another chapter! I am so glad that they are so long. This means I get to enjoy your writing longer :-)
    And what a wonderful picture by vikingcarrot, I had to laugh when I saw Hermione's face (and the emoji)! And I am all for artistic freedom - writing and drawing - but the hair is not right, nope, as good as it looks, I would have loved to see Hermione's hair "fall about her shoulders in smooth waves, since her gown was very reminiscent of the old Hollywood glamour style." as you wrote.
    Keep up the story - and thank you for getting Mrs. Dushka in trouble *evil laugh* and Ron not putting his foot in his mouth (again).
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on February 29, 2016
    I'm really happy to see more of this story up! I'm anxious to see how they'll make it out!
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  • From ANON - Betz on January 31, 2016
    In addendum to my response to sera21's review, (SPOILERS SINCE YOU DIDN'T READ THAT FAR) if you kept reading, you would learn that Calpurnia Fudge, dear friend to Dolores Umbridge, interfered and coerced/blackmailed/pulled strings with most of the masters and mistresses around Europe to deny Hermione an apprenticeship because of that time the Centaurs carried Umbridge off. That is payback through high connections. And if that makes you angry, you're right, it should piss you off. But Severus helps Hermione secure an apprenticeship. But since you didn't read that far, you wouldn't know.
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  • From ANON - Betz on January 31, 2016
    Hi, Betz here. I would like to reply to sera21's review, but unfortunately, she did not supply an email in which to reply. And this archive's platform does not allow an author to reply to reviews individually. So sera21, I hope you come back and read this response.

    First of all, yes, it is pretty shitty of Molly to harp on Ginny and Hermione about having kids, but if you read later on (SPOILER ALERT SINCE YOU HAVEN"T READ THAT FAR) Molly forced Ron into asking Hermione to marry him. Also, Molly manipulated Harry into proposing to Ginny and giving Ginny a non-too-gentle shove into accepting Harry's proposal as well. Molly, in my fic, is a domineering mother figure who is seeking to control her children's lives in what she views is best for them. The nagging for Hermione and Ginny to have children is to lock them into marriage - which later (MORE SPOILER SINCE YOU HAVEN"T READ THAT FAR) is explained how Tom Riddle's mother died. Her husband divorced her once she was pregnant, she lived long enough to have the baby, then died. Marriages are contracts LIKE UNBREAKABLE VOWS, which can result in death if broken. Children are a form of BLOOD MAGIC that seals the contract. Breaking of the contract can result in death.

    Is it necessary for people to have children to have a deep and unshakable magical binding between them? Do they need to even be married? TO answer that with a yes or no question would be more spoilers for my story I haven't even published yet. I will not publish spoilers to future chapters I haven't posted yet because my story raises questions that make you angry. As Yoda once said, "Patience you must have, my young Padawan."

    As for Ginny leaving Harry, that would come out if you just kept reading. Since you didn't, I'll give you more spoilers for future chapters that are already published: DRACO TOLD HER NOT TO YET.

    I hope I have answered your questions in a satisfactory fashion.
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  • From ANON - sera21 on January 31, 2016
    Hey, so this review is up till chapter 4. So far the writing style has been very good and well paced however I find it a bit hard to belive some of the characters actions...and what mother tries to convince her 21 year old daughter that she absolutly should be getting pregnant ? That seems pretty far-fetched to me. I did have to cringe a bit when Hermione said that Ginny still had lots of time to get pregnant because her parents had kids in tehir late twentys. I am in my late twentys and really cant think of anything worse then a small screaming infant. And didnt Ginny or Hermione study? Did I miss that part? Neither of them were interested in actually learning more then they did at Hogwarts? There has to be some form of study to gain a mastership! Or did I miss that? I would especially expect something of that sort from Hermione. and the thing I cant understand most is why Ginny doesnt want to divorce Harry? She is clearly in love with Draco and nothing is working with Harry, WHY doesnt she just leave Harry??? I dont get it. And lastly, teh reason I will probably stop reading this story, wich up till now has been quite enjoyable if a little hard to identify with, Babies create a bond with a couple that you cant get divorced from. What. The. Fuck. So women who cant get pregnant never have that bond? Women who choose not to add to teh population overflow in the world cant get that deeper bond? A gay couple can never achieve a deeper bond? I know this is fiction but damn. This is some grade A b-s: Only through a baby can you attain a deep and eternal bond with your partner. WOW. I cant even.
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on January 30, 2016
    thank you for a new chapter. wonderful has always..
    love your stories

    wish i could meet up with the crew in L.V. but i don't think it will fit the budget this year.
    Have a blast an a sip for me
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  • From ANON - catia on January 19, 2016
    eu estou amando sua estoria ,quando acaba da um gostinho quero mais
    continuie beijo
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  • From ANON - catia on January 19, 2016
    eu estou amando sua estoria ,quando acaba da um gostinho quero mais
    continuie beijo
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  • From Severus1snape on January 18, 2016
    So, I have to ask myself - WHY did I not read this sooner?

    Oh, well - I did now!

    God.
    So, I really actually HATE Molly in this story. I should congradulate you, because nobody has ever made me feel that towards her before.

    Harry - Oh god, poor him. He
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  • From OracleObscured on January 16, 2016
    I'm looking forward to them testing those libido-enhancing potions. I'm also looking forward to the day she finally ditches Ron for good. They're just torturing themselves.
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  • From ANON - S. Malfoy on December 30, 2015
    Amazing story and a real eye opener into HG/SS. Thank you and please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on December 14, 2015
    thank you for a new chapter
    I have a bad feeling that ron is going to explode on Hermione regarding her relative being pregnant
    the person in the hospital could be her mother
    an death maybe unfortunately her aunt had pregnancy complications
    so sad
    waiting for more
    pb
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  • From Nichole-Hermione on December 14, 2015
    Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens
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  • From FieryPhoenix on December 14, 2015
    I'm really enjoying your story. Especially the incredible detail and background you add to everything. It makes for a lovely continuity of the magical world.

    I wonder if she will leave with Snape? I hope so, I think that they both deserve happiness.
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