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Reviews for The Fall

By : Bravmiki
  • From ech1964 on April 12, 2009
    I know this story is complete. Yet I find myself wondering about the morning after, with promises of a life of happiness.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 11, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Chavela on September 21, 2006
    I have always loved your writing skills, I just happen to think you are a genius. Maybe more than one, cause I do not really become addicted to an ongoing story just from the opening first few chapters. But I am! Very addicted! I think I highly praised 'Sugar Quills' when I read that the first time, I even read it a few times after, I was so impressed! I had noticed this story some time ago, but hadn't read it yet, this morning I did, and just wow! Chapter three! Damn that was hot! The emotions of the first two chapters, were so real, I could feel the loneliness Hermione felt and the frustration from Severus! I think you capture the both of them very well! I am sad to not see more of this story, since I already love it so!

    *squee* I love this story so much! It is so damn awesome! PLEASE MORE SOON! I need more!

    I see also that you need a beta. I am more than willing to offer myself as one, if you still needing one. If you do , you can email me! Not a problem.

    PEACE ♥
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  • From ANON - jenny on June 22, 2006
    i hope this wasn't the last chapter
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 10, 2004
    Oh....i love it!
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  • From ANON - mikat on November 09, 2004
    I'm sorry to say I can' t really identify with your story. It is well written, but I think the characterizations are off. There are some things I did not understand. I cannot see Hermione staying at home as a full -time mom for four years. I cannot believe a sober Severus telling Hermione that she must allow him into her bed if she wants him to live at home. What kind of discussion is that? Hermione states that she is unhappy with her life, and Severus tells her to have sex with him as solution? Both of them do not seem very in character, also I do not really understand the point of the story, other than being a housewife is somewhat frustrating. Well I can imagine that, so why doesnt Hermione find a Nanny and goes to college?
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  • From ANON - Miss Stephanie on November 07, 2004
    Wow! Fabulous! Is this the end, or will there be more? I'd love to see more of your writing, whether on this story or in something else. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Kristy on November 07, 2004
    I like it. I like it a lot. Is it finished or are you going to take it further?
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  • From ANON - June on November 07, 2004
    The story hasn;'t been deleted - it's still here:
    http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=27383&chapter=4

    But it's under your old account name. Please update - need chapter 5!
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  • From Bravmiki on November 06, 2004
    I did post it before. During my search for a beta and my computer crashing, my stories were deleted. So I have reposted it. However, beta or no beta I'm posting more chapters. So bear with me...it's about to get rocky.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on November 06, 2004
    Okay, you have posted this before, or rather someone else has. I loved this story, but expected more chapters, not just the original chapter. What's up?
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