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Reviews for A moment of passion

By : scwolf10k
  • From ANON - erin kite on December 18, 2004
    sqeeeee! that was so fluffy at th end but so deliciously hot all throughout. i loved it.
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  • From lckarlsson on November 10, 2004
    Hey there!

    I think this is really good! I would have liked maybe some more obstacles, and maybe a little more tension - perhaps a bit of jealousy from Ron, since Hermione was seeing Victor Krum for some time, when she claims that she has been in love with him since third year.

    But the smut was really good, and I really enjoyed your story, even if I'm not that big a fan of Ron/Hermione.

    Keep up the good work!

    Love Leonora
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on November 08, 2004
    hey there. thought i would take a gander at your story since you are such a reviewer of mine. the story was pretty good, but could use the touch of a proof reader. there were some errors in spelling and grammar but they are minor and easy to catch. there is one thing about your story that i think could help. it needs some background. it was good smut (pwp i think it's called) but there wasn't much emotion to it. i didn't feel connected because it was just sex. good voyeurism though. hehe
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