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Reviews for Paper Faces on Parade

By : emnorth2002
  • From on January 09, 2005
    great story. i hope you plan to write more.
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  • From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on November 24, 2004
    Your Draco is soooo adorable. I actually smacked my hands against my face at the beginning of chapter 7 when it turned out that he was Leo. You officially ruined me for all men! Ruin my non-existant love life, why don't y'ah!
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  • From ANON - froggygirl on November 20, 2004
    That was brilliant! wonderful and so touching!!!
    write more!
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  • From ANON - Raffy on November 17, 2004
    I
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  • From ANON - Em on November 14, 2004
    I really loved your story. It was very touching and a pleasure to read. I'm happy that Hermione wasn't angry at Draco ^_^. I hope you continue to write many more stories about Draco and Hermione. You're a very talented writer.
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  • From ANON - del on November 12, 2004
    I enjoyed this so much! It's nice to read a refreshing story written by such a talented writer.
    I liked the pacing, but I would've like more showing than telling. The moments were still sweet, but I found the explanations of how things came to be rather explanatory and felt that it dragged for a bit. You had me feeling all these emotions and it went away during those moments.

    There was so much on Hermione's 'friends' and Harry's betrayal that I think that chapter on Hermione's life needed some closure. Just how Draco's journey to find her and make her his began and ended, so should the issuesrounrounding Hermione's friendships. There are some stories that end perfectly, teasing the readers enough for them to want more, yet giving them enough to be satisfied.

    I was also surprised that Hermione's "Marauder's Map" didn't make a comeback (perhaps, I read too quickly). It would be difficult to make one specifically for Hermione as they have none of her belongings, but didn't anybody wonder how she knew? Did Harry et al go through the pensieve? (I do apologize if I skipped anything.)

    And Crookshanks.. where's the kitty? Got me an orange kitty as well so I'm always on the lookout ;)

    Luna rocks in that scene, btw. ;) She was great.

    Thanks for writing, I truly enjoyed the story and I hope you write more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - iamin on November 11, 2004
    that was a *great* story!! i couldn't stop once i started.. it went a bit fast, id love to have read more of draco and hermione's relationship in hogwarts and at the black's mansion.. maybe you could write a companion story? Keep up the awesome writings!!!
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  • From ANON - jules on November 10, 2004
    Em-

    This is just a wonderful story. I especially like the showdown when Draco arrives to talk to Harry. The way you weave the Shakespearean elements together is very inventive.
    Great smut, tender affen, cn, cute little kids, costume ball, Sensitive!Darco & Hurt!Hermione - this has EVERYTHING!
    Great fan fic.
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  • From ANON - C.C. on November 10, 2004
    Em, Thank you so much for writing this fabulous fic! I haven't been able to find a remarkable fic like this for a long time. Now you've totally refresh my D/Hr passion. The last chapter made my eyes watery. You've started an intriguing journey for both Draco and Hermione in the beginning. Every detail of their thoughts, you've articulated impeccably. I especially love how you transformed their names with the adaptation of ancient literature. I'm in awe of your beautiful creation. I hope you'll continue to write D/Hr wit your brilliant mind.

    Yours truly,
    C.C.

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  • From ANON - lilil on November 10, 2004
    Wow! Fantastic! Nice plot great!
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  • From ANON - gryster on November 10, 2004
    You talented, talented thing!
    I can't even... gah. So lovely. From the angst to the fluff to the sweet slow build-up....
    To the extremely hot sex-scene. I can't believe that you managed to make that so hot by contrasting it to "nice-but-not-fantas bed bedroom antics between Harry and Hermione... I was gasping for breath just reading this.

    The Cunning Use of Flags... that's from Eddie Izzard, right? Right? (Do I get a cookie?)
    That was also very hot, by the way :)

    And then you made my day by writing that gorgeous fluffy ending.
    It's no wonder you're among my favourite authors.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on November 10, 2004
    This was sweet and fluffy and filled with wonderful insights thrown into the mix. I particularly like the relationship between Draco and Narcissa, as brief as it is. Harry is a wanker and Ron was a prat... but it's nice to see that Draco and Hermione could meet 'out of time/place' and just be themselves... together.
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  • From ANON - Ruth on November 10, 2004
    That was an awesome, wonderful, teary, sweet, loveable, scrumptious story!! I have read all of your stories and I must say that you are one of my favorite authors. At Any Cost is what got me hooked on Draco/Hermione, so I blame you for my addiction [ thanks ;) ]. Thank you for the wonderful stories, please write more. Maybe a sequel to this onEvenEven if there is no sequel, please write more stories!

    ~Ruth
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  • From ANON - Pinkpig on November 09, 2004
    This is by far one of the best Harry Potter fics I have ever read. I am so touched. Draco's dedication to Hermionie is so perfect. I'm so incredibly jelouse, yet happy for them at the same time. I love the detail in this fic and I love how incredibly realistic you made it. Please, please, please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Jiminea on November 09, 2004
    I love the wit and I love how you have depicted Hermione and Draco perfectly. It is so apt and right and romantic . The tenderness of Draco isn't found too often or cncinncingly in fanon; I am amazed how you written them both so psychologically in tune. The ending was delightful--it's hard to think that any other ship can be as beautiful or true as this one. Thank you ever so much for this treasure.
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