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Reviews for Look Before You Leap

By : LadyFlame
  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on November 11, 2004
    You are TOO evil. Really. Stopping there? PAH! More, pwease!
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  • From ANON - thehomicidalmaniac777 on November 10, 2004
    Love it so far, hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - emaleth57 on November 10, 2004
    This is a very promising start. Well done. Can't wait for chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Blu on November 10, 2004
    Dun dun dun!!!!!
    Dont leave me hanging!!!!
    continue!

    ~Blu
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on November 10, 2004
    "Lady when you gotta pee ya GOTTA pee!" good movie that line is from. well doesn't draco have an interesting pp lip line. Not sure I would ever use that on a guy but I don't think I would ever be in a mens restroom. Interesting little ditty can't wait to read more.
    PAP
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  • From ANON - Mewa on November 10, 2004
    ack! it ended! cliffhanger!! stupid cliffhangers! but alas they always make a person come back for more!....like me! lol Cant wait to read the next chappie!! Update soon plz!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2004
    *Pounces*

    Mesa loves, I wanna read more, Please post....

    Love story please post. I really like the plot of this

    "love to see you fall i love to see you break i want you to understand that my soul is yours to take. Though lifes endevors you will see that you are the one for me. though death and pain i will gain the key to your heart. I love you now and forever to be, I wish you to see me for me. I love to watch you fall i love to watch you break... My soul is yours to take" C-Z

    You've made me need to pee...
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  • From on November 10, 2004
    *Giggles* Can't wait for chapter 2.....Go Draco Go! *waves pompoms and grins wickedly* Now I believe you mentioned a virtual love slave ^_~

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 10, 2004
    This is a very good start! I think I'm really going to like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter-- so hurry and post it, these cliff hangers make me wanna scream :)!!
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  • From ANON - Anni on November 10, 2004
    More! You must write more! Heh, I can tell this is gonna be hot.
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  • From ANON - EmeraldGrey on November 10, 2004
    Hello!
    Ya broke my heart in your review plea. (or plea's for reviews?)
    Usualy they are annoying, but your's was too sweet to pass up.
    (glares at the other 40 odd + readers who didn't even take the time to offer a review, grrr, hiss...)
    I'm a writer too, and, although it's nice to see that you're being 'read' (by the number of hit's you get)
    it's even nicer to see that others are:
    A) Enjoying hellhell outta what you wrote.
    B) At least following the story, and understanding what you are doing in it, with it, etc.
    C)Interested enough to give you some sort of feedback, even if it's just a "Hey! Great story! Love the bunnie! Can't wait for Chapter 2! YOU GO Girl! Ya know, stuff like that... =)
    D) Sometimes, even a flame can bring about a positive response! It's just in the way ya view it. =)
    Now, to your 'review'
    I liked your characterization, it was spot on.
    I could hear Hagrid's heavy brouge, and lol I could feel Harry's need for 'relief' because you write 'visual' verra well.
    Ya got me wondering, hmmm, just what is Malfoy smirking about?
    (Both in class, and in the, eh, loo?)
    Heh...Be a love and hurry Chapter 2?
    Hugs,
    Em

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  • From ANON - Pam on November 10, 2004
    Lol!! It sounds great so far! Can't wait for more^_^
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