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Reviews for Kedavra

By : Firepixi3
  • From ANON - Terri on November 17, 2004
    Awww, cliffy :(. More I say! I demand more! Though my favorite line so far has go to be "you ugly hippogriff
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  • From ANON - Rayvn on November 15, 2004
    Hm... As I've stated for most of my friends writing (go figure, I'm the only one who doesn't do this series), not knowing the characters or terms used is a damper for me with these stories. Writing-wise however, I was pretty impressed. For your first attempt ever you've done extremely well, and I'm not surprised to see that hit counter so high. No real spelling errors I saw either. ^_^ Way to go you.

    Lol, it doesn't look very smutty yet, and considering the pairings (and my own well known quirks), I'm relieved... Though I bet you'll handle that like a pro. All that pent up aggression and such. ^_~ Thanks for giving me the address to check this out! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - DKR on November 15, 2004
    The chapter was good, what I found incongrous though is your claim that harpy eagles have 9 foot wingspans (3 meters) that's rather large.
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  • From ANON - Pixie on November 15, 2004
    I like it dahling. Sorry it took me so long to read it, but I'm finally done with rehearsals, so I could read it.

    I think it'd probably be better if you made the chapters longer. Keep writing dahling, and good luck deciding between the dark and light!!

    ♥ *hmm, wonder if that works here...*
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 12, 2004
    I was interesting. I can't wait for more so update as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - luca on November 11, 2004
    This sounds promising...more please!
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  • From ANON - DarkKnightRadick on November 11, 2004
    The story seems to have started out well, with an interesting twist on who Harry's love interest is. I also found it interesting how you refer to Malfoy as the Slythryn Prince with the upcoming novel "The Half Blood Prince" from J.K. Rowling. Perhaps a bit of foresight on your part? Either way it's a good start.
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  • From ANON - Janus on November 11, 2004
    Looks as if this story is going to turn out well. I like the writing style and it will be great to see how the intense sexual scenes develop and play into the story. Keep me posted!
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  • From ANON - Crazyd on November 11, 2004
    Very vivid, great use of characters. your writing paints a lovely pic in in my mind, the words just dance of the page. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Terri on November 11, 2004
    Great story, well written and wonderful use of language and flow, I love how you depicted their characters and some of your choice of words are very witty and the scene with the desk was very amusing as well. You really pulled the story together and kept things tense and interesting in the first chapter. I am curious about what will be happening to Harry and the others and especially Hermione! Can't wait to see what's going to end up happening next!
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  • From ANON - Kalika on November 11, 2004
    It's awesome!! 5 out of 5!!! It's about time someone wrote a fucked up story about harry potter. ^.^
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