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Reviews for The Last Potion

By : RickyRoo
  • From ANON - evenstarblooming on September 20, 2003
    one of the best fan fics ever!!!!!!!!! i regret that elizabeth is not hermione, but its good anywyas. i luv it! keep writing
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  • From ANON - Thalia on September 19, 2003
    WOW. Absolutely lovely story so . . . . .please update!
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  • From ANON - Mys. Duende on September 15, 2003
    I just checked this fic out again last eve and was surprised and glad to see you had written two more chapters.
    The sex scene was a bit more perfunctory than I had expected (seeing as the chptr prior was dripping with sensual promise) but then perhaps Snape was trying to approach her in a distant manner so as not to provoke his want and need to have her again physically. I'm certain this will backfire on his - s - seeing that your cliffhanger left us with him knocking upon her door...what could this late night call be for? hm. ;)

    I really appreciated your little twist and revelation as we come to find out that he saved her life yet AGAIN. But before that, the scene starts out with a provocative question on Snape's part: "Was I everything you ever dreamed of?" and she then proceeded to belittle the reality of him in comparison to what perfection she had always imagined about his character. Walking away from him - leaving him with his flawed self. Which leaves us with a double message about Snape. Does he have a vested interest in this woman-no-longer-a-girl even though he continuous to acts cold and aloof?

    Btw, I've reviewed your fic quite a while ago on my site Dark Potions. Do keep up this story - it has potential!
    http://firefancies.com/darkpotions/main.htm

    ~Mys Duende
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  • From blueribbon on September 11, 2003
    I could not go without reviewing this.

    No other fic has ever made me want more and more like The Last Potion. Your writing is brilliant and your language perfect. The way you describe everything is so well done and done in a classy fashion. The sex scenes were very good indeed. The speech at the end amazed me, Elizabeth has been through a lot and I truly feel sorry for her character. As for Snape, well, Snape was so much in character it amazed me.

    I hand you a trophy, well done...

    ~blue ribbon~
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  • From ANON - kim on July 26, 2003
    Yes!!! you updated and with a real good chapter. Please update more. I really enjoy this story and would like to see it all the way.
    Thanks
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  • From ANON - Jen31972 on July 24, 2003
    Great story, keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Mys Duende on July 13, 2003
    You really hit your stride in the last two chapters. I'm happy to
    see that is Snape is in-character and has that wonderfully untouchable mystique surrounding him. When Liz was a student,
    I like that fact that you kept him indifferent and cold to her teenage angst. He certainly wouldn't soften up just for
    melodramatics of teenage girl's attempt to end it all. Now that she's a woman and therefore considered bedroom worthy, he's
    still the one calling the shots - though she pleas indifference: he knows different. That all it takes is a few calculated touches
    here and there to make her turn toward him again - and then once he has her rapt attention, he'll make her beg for him until he sees fit to reward her with what she's always secretly desired of him.

    You gave a slight background to Liz. She has an attraction for nasty men (ala the Death Eater she had a rotten marriage with ) that don't seem to give her the sort of attention she's craving inside. Though an adult, shes an incomplete woman looking for completeness -- will she find this by making her fantasy come true with Snape? This could be interesting. The formatting of your text
    is off and wraps oddly. You may want to clean this up as it's a bit difficult to read. But I think you have the basis for
    a very interesting storyline and do hope you allow your Snape Muse to continue.
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  • From ANON - kim on June 13, 2003
    Help I want MORE PLEASE! I have been waiting please don't tell me that was the end??
    Thanks, Kim I followed you over from fanfic.net
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  • From ANON - Zee on June 02, 2003
    HEY! THis isn't the end is it?

    This is wonderful! More! MOre! More!

    Zee
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  • From ANON - Kim on May 25, 2003
    Great! Much better chapter, hope it is not the end. Glad to see you are back. Thanks for update
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  • From enlightenedkitty on May 23, 2003
    OMG!!!! MORE MORE MORE! I cannot wait to read more!!! Please!!!
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  • From enlightenedkitty on May 23, 2003
    I was in the middle of chapter 7 when I read the part about pasty legs sticking out of shorts and I couldn't stop laughing! I like it so far, very well written. I need to go to sleep now, but I CAN'T STOP READING!
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  • From ANON - Messenger on May 19, 2003
    You know me from FanFic. Glad your here and I am waiting for update. You know I think your story is wonderful and your are doing a great job. Keep it up. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Anya on May 14, 2003
    OMG keep goign! Yes! update it plzzz this si so neat. damn i wanna be her! lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2003
    This is great. can't wait for ch :) :)
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