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Reviews for Spell Master

By : Sminty
  • From Draeconin on February 21, 2007
    Chapter one: "up most" should be "utmost"

    "reared breathless" should be "rendered breathless"

    "rapped" should be "wrapped"

    And the chapter could use a good proof-reading for other, incidental errors.

    Personal opinion? Although I can see Draco being vengeful, I do think you took it 'way over the top. I'm hoping in upcoming chapters that you show what caused him to be so vicious.
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  • From caroll on January 26, 2007
    do not give up yhis fic or AFF!!!
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  • From ANON - Oderint dum metuant on January 13, 2007
    This has got to be one of the BEST Harry/Draco stories I have ever read. Please update soon, I don't know how long I can take the suspence. I was so happy when you updated back in October. I started checking every few days to see if you had added additonal updates. I really hope you update again soon. I really enjoy this story. Thank You, Oderint dum metuant
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  • From ANON - ice witch on January 11, 2007
    ohh i love it poor harry being betrayed by lupin. bad lupin >_<
    plz update this soon plz
    luv ice witch
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  • From ANON - tara on December 31, 2006
    god this is so good. and woefully incomplete. im still waiting for that kiss!! hope all is well! in that last note you seemed surprised it was on aff. is it posted somewhere else as well?
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  • From ANON - AngelTalion on December 29, 2006
    WOW!!! What is happening to Draco? When will we get more of this fic??? I really love this story and wish you would update more! *hugs* Thanks for this update! Fabulous chapter doll face!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 06, 2006
    Hey i really like this story so far. I hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - Anonq on December 01, 2006
    i cant wait for you to update. i bet a hot sex scene is cumming up.
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  • From ANON - Whitethorn on November 24, 2006
    I'd love to see more and soon if possible. :) :) I've always enjoyed this story and the only thing that bothers me about it is the slowness with which it's updated. ;) But other than that. *loves*
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  • From ANON - ForgottenPrincess on November 10, 2006
    it was good! i like it, still no idea what is going to happen to draco, and how the ceremony was to properly take place. Yay! Lupin get a what for. Poor Draco all his stuff is going to get taken. I'd hate that, I
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Princess on November 10, 2006
    YAY! Since you now know that its up does that mean we might get updates at a closer interval??? (is hopefull)I haven't even read this chapter yeat but i was so shocked and happy that i have to review. If you don't rember i am properly smitten with this fiction.
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  • From ANON - ebekah on November 10, 2006
    WOW!

    I love this fic! I love this draco and i can't wait to read more.
    So, please, post the next part soon...

    thaks
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  • From ANON - Sky on November 09, 2006
    I really love this story, I think I already said that many times before. Today, however, I have a question concerning the last 2 parts: In the last chapter Severus says that he acciod the lemon drop before Lucius could tear the head of the doll off, thus sparing Dumbledore's life. But it was Harry who tore the head off, didn't he? I would be greatfull if you could explain this again.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Walker on November 06, 2006
    Am I on the proverbial edge of my seat waiting for another mind-blowing chapter of this story. If you couldn't already guess, this means I loved every moment of it!
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  • From ANON - nobody on November 04, 2006
    hey love this fic. wounderd if you have it posted anywhere else online?
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