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Reviews for Spell Master

By : Sminty
  • From ANON - nouveau on September 22, 2003
    Oh my...WHAT in the world happened to Harry?! What's Snape going to do when he gets there? Is Drgoingoing to follow his Shin traditions. Is Harry going to wake up married ;) I guess I'll have to see when you post the next chapter! Please ge out out soon!
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  • From ANON - Ezekiel on September 19, 2003
    you are such a tease......I want some D/H!!! Tease, Tease, Tease......continue though......you better.......
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  • From ANON - Barbarella on September 19, 2003
    That... Rocked. No seriously, that is the only way I can think to describe it. I've read so many h/d fics and I think this one has become my new favorite. I've been up for hours reading it, probably should have been to bed a long ass time ago but I just couldn't stop. Please update soon... I am very impatient and I *need* to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Hawthorn on September 09, 2003
    C'mon Give us just a bit more. Even a few sentences would be fine. *pleads cutely* PLEASEEEEEE!!!!! Just a bit.
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  • From ANON - Makuri on September 08, 2003
    hey babychan! i love your story as you already know and i was just wondering why you haven't updated? i really want to read more of your story!! it's awesome!!!!!!!!! i've never been more hooked on a story!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - rosa on August 12, 2003
    I like your story and can't wait to read what happens next. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kia on August 01, 2003
    Hi! Mm... Really enjoyed your fic! Many valid points, lovely characterisation of the Slytherin House and politics. *grins* And I'm fascinated by the interesting three-way marriage between the Malfoys and Snape. Like your background details too, especially the Veela heritage. Do you have a website or any update feature, coz it's a bit of a hassle to check adultfanfiction.net for updates, especially since HP turns out so many fics...
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  • From ANON - dmalfoy_fan on July 22, 2003
    Hi!!!!!

    Sorry, I'm not very good at reviews... - -' But I'll give it a try!!

    First things first; your fic is amaaaaaazing!!!!! I love it!!! I couldn't believe when I saw that THAT was the last chapter posted... I almost had a heart atack! MOre like a heart failure, but well. That isn't important now.

    Your thoughts on how the pureblood are discrimanated and why they are so vicious really explained a lot...

    I love how you can make Draco be a demon and still have an angel's appearence!!! *sigh* I think I'm in love with your Draco!!!!

    Oh! And please, pl, do, don't do like so many writers and change Draco to hush things between Harry and him. It usually makes no sense and people not not only confused but really put-out because of it... The way you are doing is the way to find yourself in the h/d shippers' hearts.

    Just one more thing: don't forget to post as fast as you can. Or you are going to regret it, young (I don't know if you are a girl or a boy, so you can just imagine Mrs. Weasley talking to the twins as if it was me talking to you, ok? ^_^).


    Bye-bye!!!! Keep the good work, please!!!!!


    -dmalfoy_fan.
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    I see you are trying to intergrate some of the OotP factors, bravo but don't contradict yourself by adding facts that would otherwise go against the story so far.

    Well Draco still seems very against Harry, how will that be resolved?
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Well you were lucky with OotP, the dead body was someone you killed off too.
    I know, I'm still a tad bitter, Siri is my favourite. I want to find a stuffed dog so I can name it Padfoot. I ship Harry/Sirius as my first favourite ship (followed by Harry/Voldemort). You can see why I had problems.
    On the other hand I do like the fic, even with all the things I object to & the grammatical & spelling problems it's still a good story.
    *Sighs & heads for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Page 19: Chapter 18.
    Well that was enlightening! The pureblood prejudice was to blame for Voldemort! How many past Dark Lords were created by the prejudice? Grindlewald probably was, Voldemort was, Albus worried that Harry could be the next & the irony is Voldemort wants to destroy the purebloods.
    *Shakes head*
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Page 18: Chapter 17.
    Again I see that spelling mistake, it's 'sense' not 'since'.
    The bond is having it's effect on Draco.

    Oh well I never had a problem with Slytherin!Lily, the only thing I wonder is that in a House of people who are so pro-pureblood wouldn't a muggleborn be a pariah? It would explain part of Tom Riddle'sblemblem.
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Page 17: Chapter 16.
    Harry has so many expectations put on him. He's just as opressed as Slytherins are only for almost opposite reasons.
    Oh Harry, your tendency to put up with things that are unbearable will bury you!
    All the favouritism given to Harry is unfair, the staff is merely making things worse for him by doing it.
    Well at least Harry & Neville got some repreive over that test.

    I know my reviews are getting shorter, take it well, it means I'm not jumping on my soapbox as much.
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Page 16: Chapter 15.
    So his time in Gryffindor had some good effect.
    Oooh Harry has just witnessed t-hat-hand the Headmaster's anti-Slyth prejudice.
    It's not like Harry wanted to be resorted into Slytherin.
    Oh so both side want to use the bond for their own gain? *Snorts*
    Well it's not like Harry's all to blame, he was manipulated by Fumbledork.
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on July 22, 2003
    Page 15: Chapter 14.
    Oh Remy! Did you have to? *pouts*
    Yes, the prince is self-centred!
    Reality has hit!
    Well at least Remus disaproves of Dumbledore's using Harry. I have never had problems with manipulative!Dumbledore stories.
    Ah so my guess of the cause of Siri's attempt on Sev was right! Not to mention Lucius was being posessive too.
    No, Albus did not handle this well! Putting Harry in Slytherin against his will? Can anyone say Dark Lord Harry in the making?
    So Albus was a fool for not having enough forsight. If Harry had been placed in Slytherin alot of the current inter-House ed wed wouldn't have existed, Slytherin may not have been as bad as it is at the moment & Harry would be far better off.
    So Dumbledore was to blame. I hope he gets torn to shreds for his stupidity. He could have made great strides in redeeming Slytherin but he who is suposed to be so wise blinblinded by his own prejudice therefore ruining everything. Turn Harry against him.
    *Snarls* You do NOT know best you stupid old manipulative fart!
    Not to mention the unfair treatment they get from everyone else makes them evil.
    Well that answers part of Musagets' thing, he had just as big a dose of Slytherin pureblood prejudice because he was a Slyth!
    Oh great exuse Fumbledork, you practically ruin Harry's life & then turn it on him by saying he didn't ask? You need to go down!
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