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Reviews for De-ageing Draco

By : cathankitten
  • From ANON - asaroth69 on April 24, 2003
    phewww! nothing evil happened again to poor little draco.
    the look on snape's face while recieving a muggle toy must've been something!^-^
    argh! you evil author, letting us on such a cliffy! what does he sees?!!!
    update soon curiosity is eating me alive! help!
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  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on April 24, 2003
    My mistake. But, O.K. now your getting goofy: you temporaraly lost Draco again, you gave Sev a "wolf", and please tell me that poor little Draco doesn't walk in on a smooch session. All I can really say is, at least you personally reply to my reviews and this is a really good story anyway. buh-bye
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on April 24, 2003
    *winces* Poor Lucius! Now he knows how we muggles feel when kids our charges get lost. It happened to me one time back when I was not much older than Draco and my brother was around his age. We lost our mom one time at Walmart. A stranger came up to us. I didn't know what to tell him, my brother was silent. Shortly we found her. Well hopefully Draco wasnkidnkidnapped. If he was, we know it's not Ron and Harry since they have an alibi. So Draco and Harry are like brothers, eh? Good! Harry needs a family. He's lost so much already... How did Ginny know Hermione's plan? Did Hermione tell her? And how old are Harry and Co? U said this is an AU? So how old???
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  • From ANON - kim on April 24, 2003
    I think ure story is gr8, i dont personally care about spelling and grammactical mistakes, i mean its only a fan fic! if people wanna submit help for you for YOUR story they can atleast do it nicely. Like i said it has a gr8 plot and i'm enjoying it so pls write more. :)
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  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on April 24, 2003
    Uh, major gramatical errors in this one. I could barely understand parts of it. And I thought that this was going to be a Harry/Draco fic, what's up with the Ron action? I'd still like to read more though, if you update this. I do like the way you made Herm so nasty. And when is Draco going to the Zoo?
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on April 24, 2003
    *sigh* I want to start out by saying that this is not a flame. I don't want to tell you how to *write* your story. That is your job, and you are doing it *more* than quite well. But you did say in your chapter 14 set of notes that only one [erson had specifically mentioned constructive criticism, and you are right. Just saying spelling and grammar means nothing. Frankly, I agree with what is mostly said about spelling and grammar. If it's at least recognizable, it doesn't really matter. Spelling has never been my strong point, and typos occur. The only thing I have to say about it is the lack of punctuation at the end of sentences. That, I believe, is what can make it hard to read and decipher as far as certain emotions go. It leaves a sort of.... left hanging feel, I suppose.
    As far as plot goes, I think you have exent ent talent. The plot twists are incredible and surprising, especially the way that you built up Ron as being the supposed guilty one, and then having Hermione being driven to it by jealousy. And the original concept of a sister and aging potion... very beautifully thought out. I am impressed.
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 24, 2003
    Excuse me for being polite. I think you need to get over yourself. Twisting my words does not help anyone. I was simply putting a comment, and how am i to comment on your fiction? at least that is how that came across. Oh and by the way - try spelling peoples names right, it helps. The reason you hadnt seen my name before is because that was the first time I had read it. I did not yell or scream or use rudeness in my response and you can be sure I will not be reading your fic anymore.
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  • From ANON - chibikaos on April 23, 2003
    I'm enjoying your fanfiction and i even volunteer to be a beta tester if your getting annoyed at people for less than perfect grammer and spelling (so what)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2003
    Hey! I absolutly luv ur story! I say to hell w/ what others say about ur spelling and grammer, I think they r just being picky pricks. Anyway, I luv ur story and had a good laugh over ur notes. I like how u made Lucius a nice person and Draco a little kid (KAWAII!). I agree w/ u when people shouldn't demand who u put together in ur story, they should go make their own story w/ who ever they want paired up. Please continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - Sandy on April 23, 2003
    Hi Cathankitten,

    Just got through reading your 'Notes'. I know that some people just don't understand the niceties of good manners, but don't let them bug you. I can relate to where you're coming from, just please don't let them give you a stroke over it, or we'll miss out on what I expect to be a hell of an ending.

    Cheers...and Peace.

    Sandy.

    BTW, I don't give a damn about the spelling OR the grammer. If they can't get past the flaws to the wonderful story, they should go elsewhere.

    Bye for now.
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  • From ANON - asaroth69 on April 23, 2003
    oh nooo!! baby draco is lost in muggle zoo! with lucius not familiar with muggle ways to retrieve lost kids!
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 23, 2003
    Ok, I am liking your story. But I wish to point shinghing out to you. Slagging off your readers and reviewers is NOT a good idea. I will continue to read this, as I am enjoying the story so far. I agree with you that as it is a fanfiction, you have licence to do whatever you wish, I know I have in some of mine. However, if you continue to insult people who are taking time out to read AND review your fictions, I wiot bot be reading it any longer. We live in a civilized world where it is expected of us to be polite to one another - why should this change just because it is over the Internet?
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  • From ANON - Pam on April 23, 2003
    I really like this fic. It is one of the one's that I look forward too. I wouldn't worry so much about ignorant people and their remarks. Do what you want. And personally I am glad that you made Hermione evil. She is one character that I can't stand. Looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - vampireneko on April 22, 2003
    Personally I agree with you, people shouldn't tell you parings or tell you what a charactes personality is like. It is your story and in the Harry Potter books are generally Harry's view on what is going on, and JKR leaves people to come up with their own conclusions. As for spelling errors why should it matter if they occur in your fics? the words are easily recognisable and I am sure most people make silly mistakes occasionally (I known I do!). I don't really see why people get so annoyed when others have a few errors here and there, the only errors whichoy moy me are if someone messes up the title, summary or character names.
    Anyway, I have enjoyed reading your fic and can't wait for more. It is a very intersting plot line and very original, personally I like fics with Lucius a good person as there are too few good ones out there.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on April 22, 2003
    Hey Cathankitten,
    If you would like, I have time to do spelling corrections.an'an't say much for the grammar problem as I go by the feel of each sentence.

    I've been doing the same for Hogwartsoracle at fanfiction.net for the last six months.
    You can get me either at this email or at charyspotter@yahoo.com
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