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Reviews for De-ageing Draco

By : cathankitten
  • From ANON - Laerai on May 13, 2003
    The *new* version is cleaned up much. I am still loving this concept! It doesnt seem all that predictable to me, and I really like it. Just when I thought that I had it all figured out, it switches up again! And I like the different points of view. Its handled pretty good, and its cleaned up pretty well!
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  • From ANON - MistressoftheCane on May 13, 2003
    That was wonderfuleaslease update soon, I am dying in suspense!
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  • From ANON - jamie dee on May 12, 2003
    hey how cone hermione wasn't watched him any yet, she is draco's "mother"
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on May 12, 2003
    Please have Harry meet up with Cora. And who raped Draco? Pls don't let it be Hagrid or Moony! It sounds
    like a male teacher to me... Draco mentioned it was a teacher, prehaps Lockhart... It cannot be Dumbledore since he doesn't teach a class... And pls have Dumbledore agree to Harry staying with Lucius! Harry deserves a guardian that would give him the love he deseves besides the Weasleys...
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  • From ANON - Raija on May 12, 2003
    Poor Draco something always happening to him.
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  • From ANON - Tabbi on May 12, 2003
    I really really like this! I hope you update it again soon! I wonder who it was that raped Draco. I've been thinking and it has to be one of the DADA teachers so that leaves Lockhart, Lupin and Moody. I hope its not Lupin though. The only other possibility would be Hagrid but I don't see him doing it. Though you did make Hermione mean in this so I guess its possible. Anyway, I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - reanne080 on May 12, 2003
    Wow. That was a shocker. I love this story. It's very intresting. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Brent on May 12, 2003
    Your story is really good and i cant wait until you get some more chapters in =)

    thank you very much! =p
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  • From ANON - Velvet_Satin on May 11, 2003
    CathanKitten: Don't let those people upset you when they talk about your grammar. They are just trying to make you angry because they are jealous of your creativity talent. I am really enjoying this story and hope that you don't just stop posting it because of the others out there who like to spoil everyth The They need to realize that this isn't a college English class and that these stories aren't going to get published (unless if some want them to) grammar does NOT have to be perfect! This is a fan fiction site where you can unleash your creativity and if *some* people are going to analyze everything to pieces just to get a rise out of someone, then they obviously don't have anything else better to do with their time. Again, your story is great, I overlook grammar issues, it's not a major deal to me. What I look at is the plot and the ability to carry on a story, and you have done that beautifully. You have mastered this quite well, and I always look forward to reading more from you. There are so many "writers" out there who write a plot as if it's a cheap 1980's movie. Their stories sound very immature and high schoolish, but your story has substance and creativity, and for that you should be damn proud! :D
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  • From ANON - madhatter on May 11, 2003
    Uh, I really think that draco is going to regret that when he's old enough to be told abit bit by Harry or Ron*Ha ha ha*
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  • From ANON - liorajean on May 11, 2003
    Unfortunately, ratings do not always reflect the value of a story.

    I didn't mean to say that having a beta meant that your story was inherently flawed. Most good writers have betas. Every writer, even the most professional, need editors.

    Like I said - if they don't respond, send your request to more betas. You're bound to hit on a few.
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  • From ANON - liorajean on May 11, 2003
    About your review response-

    Stop getting fed up. Deal with it, you have weaknesses as a writer and if you refuse to try and make yourself stronger in that area, it'll be pointed out. If you don't want to make the effort required to make this a good piece, then don't post at all.

    The idiot who said people calling you out for grammar and spelling errors were just "picky pricks" is way too obvious. Look at how s/he spells. I wouldn't take encouragement on spelling from someone like that.

    This can be a great story. The concept is original and interesting. Why are you posting this story? Is it to enter an an audience? If so, stop being so bitchy. Accept the fact that not everyone is going to enjoy your story if the grammar and spelling isn't at least decent. If you aren't out to entertain anyone but yourself, then don't post the story. Write it and keep it to yourself.

    Horrible spelling and grammar is easily fixable. Just read your story over again a few times. You'll catch many errors that way. If some betas don't respond to you (chances are they're just taking their time correcting it), send it to more.

    Here. This site should help:

    http://joyce.jteers.net/hpwritersguild/directory.html

    It's the Harry Potter Writers' Guild.

    Good luck. I know you can be a wonderful writer if you learn to take even bad reviews as learning experiences.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on May 11, 2003
    Hey Cathan, I see a couple of things I missed, but your readers would have to have a Masters in English Grammar to catch them. This is a lot of fun.

    Sandy
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  • From ANON - Velvet_Satin on May 11, 2003
    AHHH I WANT MORE!! MORE!! I am totally addicted to your story now! I can't stop thinking about it! This is just of tof the best plots I ever read! Please tell me that more is coming up?! I need my De-aging fix! hehehehe
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  • From ANON - reanne080 on May 09, 2003
    I don't think I have ever read a story like this one. It is very unique. I can't wait to see ehat happens. Good job.
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