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Reviews for De-ageing Draco

By : cathankitten
  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 13, 2005
    Oh wow. That is surprising! Hermione?????? Keep going, it's an interesting plot.
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 13, 2005
    Original and cute. I hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - belelfmir on April 16, 2005
    Hi dear,
    I was reading your wonderful fic De-aging Draco at
    AdultFanFicition.Net and there are some words missing in some chapters
    and chapters than don't exist anymore... anyway could you send the
    whole fic to me or tell me if there is another place to get it?.

    Thanks a lot.
    Besitos
    belelfmir

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  • From ANON - Miko-chan on March 25, 2005
    RELOAD CH 29 PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 16, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! I cant wait to see what happens next, please update soon *jumps up and down happily*
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin (drat..not logged in) on January 14, 2005
    ^^ Hi! I've read 1-28 so far,and I wanted to say that it's really good! But I also think you should know that chapter 28 is missing...I stopped there for now. I'll check back later to see if you fixed it. ^^ Bye!
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  • From ANON - Tink on November 10, 2004
    Very interesting story, I like it, but I hear constructive criticism is good for writers so here's what I Didn't like;
    I thought this was going to be a Draco/Harry story but I guess I could live with that not happening. But Harry and Ron?? I really don't like that pairing and I found myself skipping chapters just to see if they were still together later on. They were...
    I just wish you had put the pairing up in ch 1 so I wouldn't have gotten my hopes up.
    Also, I know Narcissa is often thought of as cold and possibly greedy, but I find it quite unrealistic that she killed her own daughter. She could have put a glamour on her and sent her off to live with someone ewhenwhen Dragon was old enough to be Draco. Heartless or not, killing Cora just seems unnecessary.
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  • From CalmTiger on September 30, 2004
    This is a very cute story. I like it. SO what will happen next? I can't blieve that Draco's mother would do that to him. And Hermione, what a bitch. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - ravenpan on September 23, 2004
    ACK! You can't leave it there - please update soon and pop off an email to me when you do? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Fae on August 27, 2004
    Original story/plot concept. It's funny that Severus is getting a larger family than he ever expected.
    You have a lot of different plot twists that make for an interesting fic. Oh, and I hate Lockhart. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - LadyBlaze25 on July 25, 2004
    Hi. Great concept, but you should really work on your grammar. Is English your native language? Because if it isn't, then maybe you should get a beta to help you translate your work better. But I really like the concept. I don't belive I have ever read one like this before. Usually it is a potions accident that makes them younger, and never Draco before. This is gonna be a great fic I believe.

    LadyBlaze
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  • From ANON - bernadette on May 31, 2004
    Oh you really need to update this story!!! It's great!!!!
    Would you please email me if you update? my email address
    is Bernadette003@sbcglobal.net
    Thanks if you do! =)

    ~B~
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  • From ANON - j on April 04, 2004
    ahhhhhhhh noooooooooo yu are going to finish this story soon!!! or else!!!! lol anyways just fiinish it asap
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on April 03, 2004
    Mmm. I like the plot that you have. It's ingenious. Your grammar is a little off, but it isn't too bad. Lov. Ke. Keep writing. =0)
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  • From ANON - Dee on April 03, 2004
    You have horrible spelling and horrible grammar. It would be best if you got a spell check for thory.ory.

    Your writing is not very god either. Try to be more detailed, more descriptive.

    BNot jusr. 'Lucius walked into the room and saw that Draco was not there. This made him sad."

    it's dull and tiresome.

    Get a beta-reader as well. And if you already have on then get another one.

    good luck with your story
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