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By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - naughtypixie on May 04, 2003
    can you please please put Draco with Herm, since Harry doesn't deserve her? or better yet, put the 3 of them together!
    yeah, have them fight over her and then end up in bed together. and her walking in on them or something.. and Ginny is irritating.
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  • From ANON - Tourniquette on May 04, 2003
    I don't see why she has to "choose" at all...she should have some fun with both! SCrew Ginny and Ron. They should hook up with each other and save us troutrouble of using them as plot device.
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  • From ANON - Dem on May 04, 2003
    I am loving this!!! write more! and the interp of draco's characyou you have created is fabulous. =) keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Indir on May 04, 2003
    It's okay. Take you up on that Malfoy offer, though.

    On a totally unrelated topic, I think I may soon succeed in recruiting a friend into the addictive world of fanfiction. *just wanted everyone in the whole damn world to know* Muahahahaha... add one to the count of lost souls...
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  • From ANON - nc_kat2002 on May 03, 2003
    I really like this! Hermione should end up with Draco. LOL Seriously, thought, this is a good story, better-written than a lot of others I've read. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 03, 2003
    Ohhh! I like this little story quiet a lot!! I hope you update soon, because she has GOT to sleep with Draco - Harry is being a bit of a prat - what with having a girlfirend and all *grin*

    Great start!

    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Aranel on May 03, 2003
    I forgot to ask--would you mind telling me some stuff aboou, ou, like how old you are and how long you've been writing?
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  • From ANON - Aranel on May 03, 2003
    Just found your story today and read the first six chapters. As a rule I prefer slash fic but this is good enough to make me forget about that! You seem to do a really good job of staying true to the characters while allowing them to grow beyond what they were in the book (since they are so much older in your story.)

    The only thing I could suggest as improvement are little picky technicaingsings like some spelling typos, uses of "your" when you mean "you're", that sort of thing. You have an awful lot of talent, though, so when you're a famous writer you'll have an editor for stuff like that:)

    I'm positively DYING to see how you're going to end it. I can't decide if I want Hermione to choose Harry or Draco, honestly! More soon, please!

    Aranel
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  • From ANON - Aires on May 03, 2003
    oh i love this story!! so cute and witty, =)

    well as much as we all know how attractive our Go Boy Boy can be, it's time Hermione let herself be pampered and adored by someone who'll always place her in the first place, not as a replacement or a last thought.

    And who better than the s*x god Malfoy to seduce and show her the rope?!
    Once he opens his heart to 'Granger Miss Perfect', he'll ensure, under his family name, she deserve only the best! X)

    and yeah, Mr. Potter can't have everything in life, now can he?
    He should have seen it and made his move long time ago...hmph
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  • From ANON - Evil Orange Crayon on May 03, 2003
    Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy!
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  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on May 03, 2003
    Oh, just make it a threesome and call it good enough huh? Give both of the boys some action.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on May 03, 2003
    I have to agree with two of your reviewers you should really do one where she gets both boys (personally I think there's too many stories where it's the boy who gets the girl, it's the girl's turn to get what she wants darn it!). Very well written story, I very much like your concept. All of your characters are not only well thought out and written but entirely beliveable. I also like the idea of a 'Mile High Club' on broomstick.
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  • From ANON - Indir on May 03, 2003
    You've broken my heart; I was going to offer to be your beta! *pout* Just as well, I suppose... I've got a lot on my plate as it is. But you'd damn well better keep the updates coming.

    Oh, and in my opinion two endings would be a great idea. After all, that's what fanfiction is all about, right? New versions of old favorites, and alternate versions of unended versions that version off into versiondom...
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  • From ANON - shelia on May 03, 2003
    If I count I want the Harry ending. Good story
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  • From ANON - MJ on May 02, 2003
    Ue upe update update!
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