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Reviews for Unexpected Obsessions

By : jillianw
  • From ANON - Sandy on May 06, 2003
    Hi, I really liked this. I just had a couple of comments that you might want to correct. The first is; in Chapter 5, you refer to Severus' sister as Valeria, but in Chapter 14, she's called Viscera.

    Secondly, you repeated several paragraphs from the end of Chapter 11, in the beginning of chapter 12.

    Other than that, it's is definitely a great story. How about a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Alia on May 05, 2003
    I first found your story at the restricted section website, and you have no idea how dissapointed I was when it only went up through nine chapters! I was so happy to find it here and being updated. I love the story, please keep writing! I think my favorite part has to be the humor that you manage to subtly put in. Its hard to do that with Snape, so congrats!

    ~Alia :)
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  • From ANON - Stacey on May 04, 2003
    Please write more!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Demonic Angel on May 04, 2003
    Wonderful story, read it all the way through today. Although when I started you only had 3 chapters posted, imagine my surprise when you updated so quickly causing me to get lost in it and not finishing up my own story.
    Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

    BB
    Demonic Angel
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  • From ANON - Demonic Angel on May 04, 2003
    Wonderful story, read it all the way through today. Although when I started you only had 3 chapters posted, imagine my surprise when you updated so quickly causing me to get lost in it and not finishing up my own story.
    Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

    BB
    Demonic Angel
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