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Reviews for When the Magic's Gone

By : Avrild
  • From ANON - Midnight Tiger on February 29, 2004
    oh my....that was wonderful...and so sweet! i wish i could find a guy who would treat me good and ask my mom for permission to marry me. LOL (though i could do without the whole dungeon sex scene....until later that is. ::wink wink::)
    i really enjoyed 'mat the bat' and harry's part in the story. wished you would have shown fred ged george alive and maybe a bit more of the others but i truly loved the 'doomes day clock' and well...the entire story. :)
    thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - chibidaima on February 24, 2004
    This story was really fantastic. And it was original... I loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - innerfeline on January 09, 2004
    I just started re-reading this story after your latest chapter of "Mirror, Mirror" (which I'm also really enjoying). I don't think this was finished when I read it the first time, and I never reviewed, but I found it really entertaining and memorable. Once again, that sudden leap from the drama to the rescue to the "Can I call you Russ?" line choked a chuckle out of me! I can't wait to get into this story all over again! :)
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  • From ANON - fervesco on September 12, 2003
    That was bloody brilliant! I can't belive I haven't read this before. Such an original plot and I love the way you portrayed Hermione and Snape's characters. I've just read the entire thing from start to finish and I must say that I can no longer see anything more than a foot away, but it was sooo worth it!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on July 11, 2003
    That was excellant!
    That's the most original idea I've seen on this site for a good long while. I liked your Snape very much, especially living as a muggle, and not being able to make coffee!! I also liked the idea of Hermione having tempers when she was younger and everything shattering around her, very Carrie!!!
    Thanks for a really great story.
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - Katharina on July 07, 2003
    Okay, so I liked this. In a way, it was really sad, but it was fun, too. Geez, though. Talk about a lecherous Sev... :o)
    Tee hee. This story positively reeks lemons.

    Love and giggles,
    ~Kate~
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  • From ANON - a? a on June 23, 2003
    I'm finally back and got to catch up on this story. I just wanted to say I loved it- it is definitly one of the most orriginal fics I've read. I hope to read more of your work in the future!
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  • From ANON - Mod on June 13, 2003
    That wasa happy ending. I hope you write more stories
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  • From ANON - -E- on June 12, 2003
    Great Story! I like the premise of a 'doomsday clock' and the relationship Harry has with the same woman in both timelines--that, to me, was so Harry Potter (sweet teen-aged kid/wizard). Snape geg hig his hair cut and his teeth fixed was -- brilliant. And for Snape to go to St. Mungo's, well... he took the kind of responsibility that if you think about it IS canon. He is an honorable, very principled man. The reason for his bad temper was brilliant--overdosing on sleeping draughts, and whiskey, great! I like the story would probably be considered AU but I never felt the characters were OOC. I like your stories. You're brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Tegan on June 12, 2003
    What a sweet, happy ending! sigh... This was a very original and intriguing story. I know I've told you a few times, but the way you mesh angst with humor and romance is fantastic!

    I loved Snape's line: "That would guarantee msingsing you; in case you weren
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on June 12, 2003
    Yay for your completion of fic!

    The Harry Arc was nicely tied up; and although the final bits of Severus were a tad OOC, the conclusion was fine. I liked how Severus appeared at the Granger house in the suit and charmed her parents. That was a good scene.


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  • From ANON - GeekGirl on June 11, 2003
    WOW...that was an awesome ending....i loved your story and I can't wait to read your next project....your Hermione was sweet, kind and flawed....just like most girls her age....and your Snape was also interesting...i often wondered if maybe he was some kind of an addict with all those potions...thank you for a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Tevkins on June 11, 2003
    hmm ... the end left me with a sad feeling in my heart ... cant explain why as it is supposed to be happy. but other than that, good!
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  • From ANON - trachyte on June 11, 2003
    I really love your story. I'm so impressed with your plotting ability. Love your characterization of Hermione...seems so close to canon compared to most in fanfic. (When I'm writing, I never feel that I'm getting Hermione right). I hope you write more...this kind of originality is a pleasure to read.
    Jen
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on June 11, 2003
    I don't understand! Why would Dumbledore fire him for an AU action! Poor Hermione! *sniffles* Update soon! *P*L*E*A*S*E*!!

    Karena ELizabeth
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