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Reviews for The Erotic Adventures of Potter And Malfoy

By : Keshu
  • From on May 16, 2003
    Bah, I do the beta reading around here! :P

    Excellent story, as always. It does things to me that I can't describe without feeling hellz embarassed.
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  • From ANON - Helmione on May 16, 2003
    I think the argument did work, you can see that Harry would take Malfoy's side bse tse there's getting to be a real sense of division, and kind of Ron and Hermione in reality versus Harry and Draco in crazy surreal fantasy kind of thing. I mean, Hermione's being open minded and Harry still wants to be friends and stuff, but there's still a real sense of separation between them.

    Also, I love Draco not wanting tse tse the marks - it's like the perfect mingling of corrupt sex and sentimentality!

    Helen x

    p.s. I think I'm up to date now, so if you send me the next chapter when it's done, I'm happy to beta.
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  • From ANON - Helmione on May 16, 2003
    Chapter Five

    I really liked the opening paragraph
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  • From ANON - Helmione on May 16, 2003
    Chapter Three


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  • From ANON - Takaro on May 15, 2003
    awww! KAWAII! Draco not wanting to lose any of Harry's 'love' marks. *grins wildly* I love it!
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  • From ANON - Helmione on May 15, 2003
    I liked that this chapter was a little bit longer - I do get annoyed with paragraph chapters. Do you know if there's anyway to justify the text? Persoanlly, I find it easier to read that way, dunno about you.

    Loved Ron's "must be polyjuice" thing - deluded fool. Doesn't he know that Draco is irresistable to men and women alike (but hopefully not children)?!? And Draco just drips cool - the "hard anal fucking" comment and the "you think you're the only one who gets arroused by this?" were lol-worthy, and the mirroring between the book and the action at the end worked really well. I thought when you described it it might be difficult to make work in practise, but you acheived it well.

    Also, it's nice to know that Draco wouldn't go all the way on a first date, after all, he's just not that sort of boy, is he?? *grins* He's definately in control in the relationship so far - hope to see Harry "getting his groove back" a little in future.

    Anyway, I'm afraid I must sleep now, but I'll attempt to read the rest tomorrow and should be ready to beta ch 6. Helen x
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  • From ANON - Helmione on May 15, 2003
    LOL. I'm shocked by Snape's references to sex - I thought he was much more uptight than that! Nice little semi-twist at the end with the "silver eyes," and I'm glad that Hermione and the Gryffindors are suitable shocked. So - to chapter two - and beyond! Helen x
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on May 15, 2003
    AGH! You went all romantic on us! haha. I loved it. Typical Ron, but the twins made me laugh! I love it when innocents like Ron and Hermione get told stuff like that. Their faces are priceless. *snickers at memory* Anyway, waiting impatiently for the next bit.
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  • From ANON - Venecian Summer on May 15, 2003
    the italics are quotes from the book right? (was kinda getting bit confused between the book part and reality part ^^;)
    cool, =) it's beautiful to see draco and harry together

    oh, the the shock!horror! on the virginally innocent hermios fas face while listening to the twins' vast knowledge of s*x books and, hmph, if ron can't accept harry is happy with someone who loves him, screw his 'best friend' friendship!
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  • From on May 13, 2003
    This is fantastic slash. I love it like I would love another slash, but moreso. Well structured, well written, well everything :)

    *worships*
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  • From ANON - Rachel on May 13, 2003
    *poke*
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  • From ANON - Black Rose on May 13, 2003
    omg the boys did it, finally! X)
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  • From ANON - Rune on May 12, 2003
    Wow! This is getting to sound intresting! *drool* grea plot by the way and even greater lemons! keep up super duper great job! cant wait for the next chappie! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on May 10, 2003
    AH HAHA H you you horny little sod! Draco you cock tease! I absolutely LOVE this fic! Such an original idea, makes a lovely change to have a new idea every now and again! I applaud you! LOL at myself getting all silly. Waiting for next bit! I wanna see the reciprocation! Spoonie.
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on May 10, 2003
    ^^;;;;...
    omg i've been laughing so hard my roommate's asking if i'm ok

    Snape reading that lurid book aloud, addin his own comments, was just sooo funny!
    not to mention that it created a perfect deja vu for the scene where he reads and quotes from the Daily Prophet in GoF..+)

    do hope there's more coming!! X)
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