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Reviews for The Erotic Adventures of Potter And Malfoy

By : Keshu
  • From shibby510 on January 24, 2013
    I really loved this story. I'm a completely straight female but I love reading about the two hottest guys from the Harry Potter series lol. I just didn't understand why Draco seemed scared that it wasn't real and then turned around and acted like he wanted nothing to do with Harry.
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  • From BubblesFreak15 on October 29, 2012
    I love this. There are some confusing letters that I belied are supposed to be words but your ideas and the way they are written is beautiful.
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  • From BubblesFreak15 on October 29, 2012
    That was so hot. But then wtf!
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  • From Jags on September 16, 2009
    oh that was entirely wonderful!!! and i just love the slip-up with snape mwahaha
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  • From callistianstar on October 26, 2008
    Woah. This was really good. I hadn't honestly been expecting a plot, but it was interesting enough. Although what exactly happened to Snape does escape me since you last mentioned him with bloodly knees walking through Hogwarts. Nice job with this. Original.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Ravenwolf on June 18, 2006
    OMG....this is such a hot story! *drools* I luv me some Draco/Harry

    Your fantastic....
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  • From PrincessLizzie on May 14, 2005
    This is an awesome fic. Amazingly well written and one of the most original plots I've come across here on AFF. Great job!

    xoxox,
    Liz
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  • From ANON - Krista on October 18, 2004
    After these many years (and it has been more than one year) I still absolutely love this. This was the story that introduced me to the world of Harry Potter fanfic, and more importantly, slash.

    Thank you, Keshu. Thank you :)
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  • From ANON - dedmun on April 03, 2004
    cute. very very cute. and quite surprising. great hints about the book there, btw. stupendous job.
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  • From ANON - Outpatient04 on March 31, 2004
    Few works of fanfiction, whatever the subject inspires them, have a scope similar to The Erotic Adventures of Potter and Malfoy. The twelve chapters of this novella are exceptionally well crafted, and the plot is well-sustained throughout and driven by realistic characters and dialogue. The reader is expertly led into the minds of both Potter and Malfoy which allows the plot to play out with a massive depth, and the reader is soon immersed in the story. Secondary characters are well fleshed out and also "feel" realistic and the appearance of other protagonists always serves the passage of the plot well - they do not hinder proceedings in any way. The writer shows great skill in communicating thelinelings of the characters and the dramatic nature of the plot is equally well served by her ability to use humour at the proper moment in a manner that does not seem forced and is also realistic.

    The writer demonstrates great ability in the usage of her plot devices, most notably the use of the Book - to say more would, I feel spoil the story - and the almost Romeo and Julietesque relationship between the houses of Gryffindor and Slytherin, both of which are well-integrated into the story. Indeed, little if any of the work feels as if it is present as an afterthought and this either shows meticulous planning or an exceedingly vivid and complex imagination. Whether intentional or not, this is clearly an evolution and expansion of the themes contained within Firelight by the same author, and it is a demonstration of her skill and emotional fortitude that she was able to delve so deeply and so widely into the themes of that story to create this work. It is my contention that this is one the premier pieces of creative reinterpretation of the Harry Potter series by one of the better writers of the genre, so much so that it stands head and shoulders above thet. t.
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  • From ANON - Nick on March 23, 2004
    What a fantasic story! Amazingly written, the last few chapters in particular had me glued to the screen. Very good plot, too. I liked the ideas in it as well as the pure sex. And it was more than pure sex, too. Finding slash that is as emotional as it is hot is very difficult. A lot of effort has been put into this story, and I thank the author for doing so!

    Fantc enc ending, too :D
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  • From ANON - Jass on February 22, 2004
    OMG,that fat bunny of yours was a very good one.I just love this fic I'm going to read it over and over again.The plot was excellent and the idea and all and your writing was of course exquisite.Great job.I still suck at summaries.Sorry.
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  • From ANON - alexis skye on January 31, 2004
    cool story
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  • From ANON - Wolf on November 29, 2003
    Oh! *chants* happy ending, happy ending! Oh that was so sweet, placed a smile on my face. I'm sorry I didn't review in quite awhile! This was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it, kind of sad that this fab story had to end. But every beginning has an ending, right? And you did great on it, hope you never stop writing more Harry Potter stories!
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  • From ANON - Leah on November 21, 2003
    *reads chapter one* NO! evil, evil Severus! poor Harry, i hope things go a bit better for him...
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