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Reviews for Punishment and Play

By : cathankitten
  • From ANON - jadethereaper on October 11, 2006
    One of the better fanfictions I have read
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  • From ANON - Demon Goddess on October 25, 2005
    I knew it! OMG! This is such a great story. I thought that I had some sick thoughts for my original story, but now I realized that you have the bakery for torture as well.
    When you described some of those scenes, my legs automatically locked tight and my boobs hurt. OMG! I'm happy that I was right, knowing me, I would have forgotten who I put where, unless the story was prevously thought out. This is the first happy ending threesome I have ever read. I will definatly put this story under my reccomended readings.

    This story is SO DAMN JUCY! Like jucy fruit! You should really read my story, I would like to know your opinion on my stories.

    Demon Goddess
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  • From ANON - Demon Goddess on October 25, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!! This is the best fic I have ever read!! OMG!
    I just can't stop saying that. While I was reading the story, I had to stop reading every once in a while just to make sure that what I was reading was really written down and not just another one of my sick fantasys. I would love to collaborate with you on a story, if i'm not being to forward.
    I used to think that my story's (including the one's not published yet) took the incest cake, but this this takes the incest bakery! This fic is amazing, completly what I like to see in a story. I could go on ranting for pages, but I will just sum it up in one word: magnificant.

    P.S: Who exacly is this a paring of, it sounds kind of Draco/Lucius to me, i'm dying to know!

    P.P.S: maybe you could check out some of my work: Demon Goddess
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  • From ANON - PhoenixAngel on October 03, 2005
    I liked the fic Love what u did 2 Narcissa. The bitch deserved it. I couldn't have done any better. The only thing was a little bit of grammer problems but nothing a little tweeking cant fix. All in all I give the fic a 9.5 on the fic-o-meter. (fic-o-meter range 1-10)
    muah keep writting.

    PhoenixAngel,
    Roxy
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  • From ANON - Lidra on October 07, 2003
    No! You can't stop now! Write more! Write more!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 30, 2003
    Very strange
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  • From ANON - Dr. Angelicus on July 03, 2003
    Hi! I just have to say that your fic it's great, I've loking for a fic like this for a while, I love the way you wrote it with out names or age in that way you leave a lot of work for imagination and that's very exciting; about the relationship between Lucius and draco I love it, it's so lovely but sitill so hot, and the sex scenes were wonderful I was imagining the little Draco (in my pervert mind he was 7 to 8 years old) moaning and wanting more. An too I really think you must have made suffer more to Narcisa while she was dying, that fucking bitch must have died skinned, crying and screaming!!!!!
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  • From ANON - me on May 28, 2003
    LOL orginizing... hehe spell check went to far!!! Actually I dont like reading these fics.. but this one called out to me so I read it.. Actually pretty good.. well written.. and it didnt seem wrong that they were doing that.. it seemed right.. only a good writer can make a bad thing right.
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  • From ANON - . on May 21, 2003
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 20, 2003
    Thank you for writing a wonderful story ..I can't wait for others ..
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  • From Anath on May 20, 2003
    This is coming along nicely... the murder scene was squicky but well written. Normally I don't like men being violent to women - in real life or in fics - but as the rest of the story is so lovely I'll overlook that part (anyway the father would have done the same if a male character had raped his son...) I'm looking forward to the sweet, tender stuff! You do that part nicely!

    Love & serpents' Kisses,
    Anath.
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 19, 2003
    Grammer is important but you are doing a good job writing so i'll forgive..
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  • From ANON - Imma on May 19, 2003
    Hi

    Interesting story but entirely too many spelling and grammar errors - they disturb the reading immensely - please go through your fics more thoroughly before posting them.
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 12, 2003
    I forgot to complement you on the scratching feeling dirty factor it makes the story more detailed also good writing for this chapter not that incest is good or anything but you seem to be doing this subject with alot of sentivity and care .Good luck in writing..
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 11, 2003
    Interesting stuff.
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