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Reviews for Plaything

By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - Elle on May 22, 2016
    I'm aware the last updat for this was nearly 10 years ago but would you ever consider finishing it? This is one of my favourite stories and i always go back to it!
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  • From themusicjewel on January 19, 2015
    why was this fanfiction never continued =(
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  • From ANON - Lea on January 07, 2015
    Wonderful story! I really, really hope it will go on!
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  • From adrianamalfoy on May 22, 2010
    I like the way this is going...can't wait to see how it turns out! I'm hoping for a happier ending than the story it was inspired by, though I realize it's unlikely given the Darkfic designation. But I can see so much potential in it, since Hermione is still brilliant, and not yet broken. Keep it coming!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Pookah on March 01, 2008
    This is an amazing story. I hope you will finish it someday.
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  • From thedarklordspet on February 10, 2008
    please someone update this is a kick ass story dont let it die
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  • From TheShadowsLight on January 15, 2008
    i love this story. its interesting and i am dying to see what kind of plot reveals itself between snape and malfoy. please update soon
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From MaryAnn on August 02, 2007
    I love this story! I'm eagerly awaiting another chapter. And I don't mean that to be pushy or anything for I understand completely if you dont have time to update, dont feel like it or if the story has landed on the backburner for a while or forever, after all it's your story/both your stories. No, it's meant more as to let you know that it is still appreciated, and also appreciated if you've switched gears to like once a year!
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  • From whistadmin on April 04, 2007
    i'm soooo gladd you've finally updated this story! it's really great! keep on updating please!
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  • From sentineljandb2 on March 30, 2007
    I am so glad you decided to take this story form ch.13 onward. Hope you keep this going for a long time; I always wanted to read more of this story.

    Up to now she has only played on their love, hate or jealousies, making them react like she wants them to. Having Hermione say that Lucius told her something in particular can cause trouble if Severus and him compare notes, they could realize that Hermione is manipulating them. As long as you are having them react to her without her lying to them, they have no lies to catch her at.

    But that could be en interesting twist to this story. There is no reason to fallow the same script than the inspiration piece. They could find out her plan and use it against her?

    Or perhaps they are too involved to notice but some third party, (maybe Voldemort checking how his present to the two death eaters is working out), can catch on and alert them. Or this third party, (maybe another death eater like Rudy or his brother), can help Hermione and then keep her for himself.

    Please update soon!

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 16, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From icequeenskadi on March 16, 2007
    update soon! Don't leave us hanging like this!
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  • From CryingCinderella on March 15, 2007
    Fantastic. I've been reading it in bits, with the danger of pulling an all nighter to get to this point, but finally I've achieved "The end" as far as you've gotten, at least. It's wonderful. I fresh breath of P.O.V. shifting that makes sense but isn't androgenous and monotonous. You've crafted your story well and there is a good show of time and effort that has gone into your plot and technique. I do hope that you will continue on, and quite soon, though as an author myself I know what it's like to not be able to post like twice daily as the fans wish. The turn in the story is fantastic, I do hope, for her sake, that she pulls out. The details are exquisite. I feel like I'm there, a voyeristic fly that has inhabited the eyes of each of your muses. Phenomenal. I've probably shamed Vince Vaughn, I'm not sure I spelled that right. No matter, it's still amazing. Keep up the good work. My congratulations.
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