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By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - SillyLily on June 04, 2003
    Keep 'em coming!!!! Great work!!
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  • From ANON - Nell on June 03, 2003
    OMG!! that Draco interlude! (lol!) that was intense and then Lucius defending Hermione to then punish her for making him do it (he he he! evilly clever of you!) I loved that!!

    Oh I hope Lucius will get redeemed to Hermione's eyes.. yeah, yeah, he almost killed her, but he regreted then, he was sorry; not that he would ever admitt it, but still, let's stick with primal emotions and he attacked Draco so, no everythign is lose with him... lol! yeah I know, he's my favorite evil character, can't help it. HE even gave her clothes and tried to make her feel better!! you have to give him credit for it!!

    ikediked that Snape healed her, and I'm keep on liking how you're writing Hermione. It's so real and believable. Your whole scenario, despite the millions of fics with the same theme, it's different.

    Update soon, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ultrapuella on June 03, 2003
    This really is quite fantastic. I look forward to seeing more of Hermione's first person narration--I think it balances the stort, gt, genderwise, and also--she appears to be the focal point of your piece, motivating both Lucius and Severus, manipulating their actions (however unconciously at this point). I'm interested to see how she puts her cynicism to good use. Bravo!

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  • From ANON - Gina on June 03, 2003
    OOOooohhh I love this. Where's chapter 9? o.o gimme more.
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  • From ANON - Anna Marie on June 02, 2003
    I'm really enjoying your story! Great points of view.

    I'm 100% for Severus!!!!!!!

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Zee on June 02, 2003
    OMG! I am loving this. You know, I don't care HOW gorgeous Lucius is, I would rather have Snape anyday! Although, I would REALLY like to see Hermoine knock the stuffing out of BOTH of them!

    YUMMY YUMMY! More please!

    Zee
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  • From ANON - LadyJet on June 02, 2003
    Amazing story. One of the few very VERY good smutfics that its.....just awesome. Update soon! *gets on knees and begs*You are a ver good writer, The characterizations are perfect given what has happened and the changes in the characters themselves *tries to sound smart* and while the smut pieces are interesting to read, you do them so that its a part of the story rather than than *plot* *smut* *plot/dialogue* *smut* etc. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Corazon on June 02, 2003
    The changing back and forth between Lucius' and Severus' point of view was perfect
    since there was a lot of emotion happening with the near death of Hermione. I am
    highly anticipating Hermione's 'empowerment!' She is clearly a very strong souled
    woman to have survived to so much. Your story has been amazing!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From ANON - MoD on June 02, 2003
    This story is written so well and i am just as much intrigued now as i was with the first chapter. I can't wait for more chapters
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  • From ANON - Lillyanna on June 02, 2003
    This is even better than expected. I didn't think she would be returned to Lucius! Excellent as usual.
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  • From ANON - de¦ on June 02, 2003
    I loved your solution. This chapter totally made me cry:( Especially when she said "I am nothing". I can't wait for Hermione's POV. Now that she knows how they feel about her, I wonder what kind of plan she's going to come up with. Please update soon:)
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  • From ANON - sexykitten on June 02, 2003
    I swear, you truly have a gift for writing. I am in so much suspense, waiting to see what will happen next between Lucius, Snape, and Hermione. Please update quickly-- this is SO good.
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  • From TheLadyFeylene on June 02, 2003
    It's almost like watching a sporting event. I've found myself rooting for Severus, but then he's always been a favorite. Another chapter with more psychological twists. Really, psychological damage is far worse then physical. :-) Bravo! Please keep with the quick updates!
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on June 02, 2003
    Yes! You are my best friend now! And if you update quickly again, I'll give you house points! I can't wait to see how she plays these two men against each other and what happens in the end! Do youo know what the ending will be or is this a fly by the seat of your pants, whaever sounds good, sort of story? Just wondering *GRIN*

    Thanks,
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Chaos on May 31, 2003
    You end it there? *claws her face* Aie!! This is torture!is sis story is amazing! I'm completely drawn into this *goes fangirl and squeals excitedly like her deranged self*
    So what's gonna happen? Is he gonna give he Sev Severus? She gonna die? huh? huh? *laughs at her own weirdness*
    I should stop before I get too weird.
    But seriously I adore this story! You have to update soon!
    What can I say? I'm a screwy fan. ^:^'
    Keep writing (please!)
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