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Reviews for Plaything

By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - JJ on May 25, 2003
    Very familiar. Very, very familiar. You haven't, by any chance, read any of Amanuensis's fics by any chance? Hmmmm?
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 25, 2003
    AARRGGHHH!!! You are so mean! Leaving her all tied up! I have to tell you I actually went back and looked for your last update date and was worried you weren't going to update anymore. This is one of a few stories I'm following very closely lately; great job!

    Thank you for updating, and can I bride you to update sooner? I'm talking house points here....

    Karena Elizabeth

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  • From ANON - Mionegal on May 21, 2003
    very good so far!!! What happens if one of them says he *killed* her and really kept her to himself???
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  • From ANON - Nell on May 20, 2003
    Ohh!! the story gets complicated! There a lot lot more involved now.. I mean, befit wit was only about Hermione being the plaything of Snape and Malfoy, now add to that, Ron's death and what Harry might have felt knowing that he left Hermione alone when the deatheaters arrived (not by choice, but he left her anyway).. plus her own need to feel useful, intelligent again, not quite getting used to being less than a house elf! (nice touch there! lol!) something more than what she's now.. yeah, there's more to her feelings now, it's like getting the big picture, it's not just being kept captive anymore, it's also knowing that one your best friend died, that you don't have any hope, or that you're less of what you once were.

    Phew! THAT was what I got from that chapter. Pretty intense. and ansgty..ohh and I like it! Keep it up! good work you've done!

    More more more more!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Mogli the Witch on May 20, 2003
    Shocking,

    higly erotic (I'm ashamed to admit),

    and what the most shocking thing is - it is almost believable.

    Especialle fae fact that she is more embarrassed of her reactions to Snape
    because he is so gentle in comparison to Malfoy.

    I think that that is indeed worse to beare (sp?) than the cruelty and sadism of Lucius Malfoy.

    I am only happy that it is only fiction - rape, after all, is rape and in reality,
    NOT erotic, but only violence and an unforgivable crime. I think, you agree.

    Please, write on
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  • From ANON - nocturnali on May 20, 2003
    Oh yeah...still enjoying it. I wish I'd written it, but there you go. More Lucius...and please don't let him fall for her. I'd much prefer him to let Sev have her...or maybe just kill her...out of spite. That way neither get her. LOL
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  • From ANON - Butterfly on May 20, 2003
    I love this fic soooo much. It is kinda how i imagine Sev and Lucius could be. (dark and controlled.). Obviously this fic isn`t about love, but i feel that if someone were placed in this situation they may begin to mistake this obsession for love. Also coming through for me is a sense of insanity about the death eaters, as if the enslavering of Hermione was just normal behaviour for them. A very sensual and erotic fic in ay day dark and disturbed way. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 20, 2003
    That was another magnificent chapter as usual! I noticed that many readers are craving for a Draco POV and I must say that I do too! My fave ship is actually Draco/Hermione but obviously, I also enjoy Lucius/Hermione fics! (especially the dark & sensual ones)
    Could you please make the sex scenes more explicit?

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  • From ANON - Bella the Dark on May 19, 2003
    Cool, I'm enjoying it so far. I love the triangle. I wonder if Voldemort gave her to them just to see what kind of confusion it would cause.
    I don't know about Draco, Have this love/hate thing for his cha. (love the strong misunderstood/hate the winny bratty). anyway, I love whatve rve read so far and will keep watching for more.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 19, 2003
    Power, thy name is woman. If only she could tell how insane he is for her! *grins biggly* Okay, so youintointo torture of innocent readers by not telling us what's going to happen before it happens? I can respect that *VEG* Great story!

    Thanks for the update!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on May 19, 2003
    Please update soon. What an intense story! I'm on tenderhooks.
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  • From ANON - Jaelyss on May 19, 2003
    Ahh, more of a character chapter than anything. Too bad, I like how Severus seduces her, but I did get a bit of that. I know you've got this from the other story, i just hope it doesn't end the same way.
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  • From ANON - Jill on May 19, 2003
    gah! you have me totally hooked I can't stop checking for updates
    the last chapter, just the perfect balance again with Severus, you're writing it well because I find myself wanting Hermione to want him even after all he's done

    excellent work
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  • From ANON - Sing on May 19, 2003
    Wow, you update often. I want more though, and certainly more Lucius. I love Snape-y too, but damn, you write Lucius well. I want him. Er, I want him to be in the next part. *assures herself* Yep, that's what I want. Lucius... in the next part. *nods*

    Cheers,
    Sing
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 19, 2003
    WOW!!!! Another great chapter. Hermione's POV was so intense. I feel bad for her:( Her little outbruith ith Severus was a shock. Would he really hurt her?
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