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By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - Persephone on May 18, 2003
    What a cracking read! Love the competition between Severus & Lucius, you write for both charcters quite well! Also liked how you incorporated Hermione's pov. I'm really curious to see where this story will go. PLEASE continue!
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  • From ANON - Arsinoe on May 18, 2003
    One way that Hermione might be able to fight back is by playing them off against each other. Snape and Malfoy are wildly competitive, no more so than in this arrangement. Hermione could plainly express a preference for Snape. Appearing happy to see him would thrill Snape, and reinforce his desire to show her affection. It would absolutely drive Lucius mad. He's so accustomed to being the handsome, desirable one. He (and Voldemort) are convinced that Hermione must find him more attractive. If Hermione seems more attracted to--even fond-- of Snape, it may cause Lucius to modify his behavior in order to compete with Snape. Only this time, Hermione can change the nature of the competition. Instead of who can degrade and abuse her the most, the competition could change into who could win her affections. Captives have to use the weapons at hand. Divide and conquer is the one that has worked most often.
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  • From ANON - Nell on May 18, 2003
    Oh another chapter!! You're making my!!
    !!
    I love how you're building the tension between Snape and Lucius.. very subtle, they're impatient to get their time with Hermione. And now you just 'dropped' Draco in the middle just to complicate it a little bit!! That was perfect!

    I can't wait for the chapter.. I wonder if Hermione will ever know the power she's got over those two.. or if they will notice it.

    Great story! Keep it up. You're doing great!

    Awaiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sing on May 18, 2003
    Wow, this is just brilliant! I love how you have them going back and forth like that. And Lucius, give me more Lucius! Between the two, his dealings with her are much more interesting. Please email me when there's an update? And more Lucius! Now, now, now!

    Cheers,
    Sing
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  • From ANON - em on May 17, 2003
    that was a great pov for lucius!!!!\
    i cant wait for more~
    thanx for emailing me with the chapters!!
    this is da best story eva
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  • From ANON - Severella on May 17, 2003
    *Claps* Dude, at this rate, I have more reason than ever to be online checking for updates! *Grins* I'm liking the way you just belt this out, chapter after chapter--no muss, no fuss, no waiting!

    --*Review*--
    Hmm...very interesting, the way Lucius' subtle emotions are slowly coming into play...that is, if you could *call* them emotions. The same applies for Severus--and frankly, I'm more interested in he than Lucius. (Sorry, but I LoVe my Sevvy!) More and more you pique my curiosity...where, oh where are you going to go with this? After all, this is just my sort of story--perverted virtue, enslaved grace? I'm there!

    *Blinks* Sorry, sleep deprivation causes my though trains to de-rail horribly before I quite have the chance to even *finish* a though, so if this is rather garbled, I apologize.
    --*End Review*--

    Can't wait to read more! Keep 'em coming...

    Salivating impatiently for the next chapter,
    -Severella Snape
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 16, 2003
    OMG! This is amazing! It
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  • From ANON - Stacey on May 16, 2003
    Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 16, 2003
    I am so glad you are continuing with this fabulous story. And seeing inside all three minds is a great angle. Question: Are they giving her anything to keep her from getting pregnant? I haven't seen potions or the like and having sex everyday - well the odds climb sky high, ya' know?

    Thanks for the update!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 16, 2003
    I love it!!! The part with Draco was great. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Jill on May 16, 2003
    I absolutely loved how she moved closer to lucius for protection from draco, classic stockholm syndrome! brilliant
    more severus soon! :D

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  • From ANON - MansonKitty on May 15, 2003
    Cool fic! It's a bit different fromt I t I usually see on here, but I like this type of stuff. I'm glad that you gave Hermione a POV as well. Good luck with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jill on May 15, 2003
    this is rulouulously good! the best thing I've read in MONTHS! I'm hooked like a young kid on pokemon.

    please please keep Severus as the more leniant but none the less masterly one, it's perfect and believable

    look forward to the next installment
    jill
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  • From ANON - Nell on May 14, 2003
    If evil is beautiful, that
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  • From ANON - QR on May 14, 2003
    Heck, I'd choose Snape over Malfoy an (th (the guy is just a bit too evil) :-).
    Anyways - great job, keep it up!
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