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Reviews for Plaything

By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - chauntcy on May 14, 2003
    Please keep going. This is getting good. The rivalry between Lucius and Severus with Hermoine in the middle is getting good.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 14, 2003
    I will definitely keep reading! This is such departure from any SS/HG/LM type story I've ever read. Heck - most slave stories start off, 'ohh I've loved you for so long' type things -se mse men just lust for her *grin* But she's pulling some strings of her own, even if she doesn't see it yet - I wonder how long until she does ;)

    Thanks!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Zee on May 14, 2003
    Oh God! This is wonderful! (I adore Snape, when he is good OR bad!) Please tell me this isn't the end!
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  • From ANON - Severella on May 14, 2003
    This is seriously your first angst-fic? O.o I wouldn't have guessed had you not told me...

    --*Begin Review*--
    Another lovely chapter. I liked the bit about Hermoine and the table--"It's not my place anymore"--a poignant ending to a rather amusing chapter. ( Amusing, I mean, in a good, want-to-read-tons-more sort of way) I also think it swell that you can write so swiftly and still make it coherent. Most people can't do that...
    --*End Review*--

    Anyways, can't wait for the next bit!

    ~Severella Snape
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 14, 2003
    OMG!!! This is really well written. I thought it was going to be just about sex, but it's pretty emotional too. Please continue:)
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on May 14, 2003
    I really like this story. Not a lot of people can write D/S fics very well. You can. I cannot wait to see how Severus is going to dwithwith having to share Hermione with Lucius. And what will happen with Lucius after that. Keep it up, you're good.
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 13, 2003
    So... are we going to get more?! I can just picture Snape and Malfoy fighting over their slave *GRINS EVILLY*

    That was very interesting and well written!
    Thanks!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Meg on May 13, 2003
    I have to say that I'm not really keen on anything with Snape in it, or Hermonie for that matter but I do love this story, could a 17 year old humanise a death eater? Hmmm

    Keep it up, waiting 'patiently' for more...
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  • From ANON - reader on May 13, 2003
    don't you dare stop!! This is so good, I can't wait for more. Hermoine's POV would be an excellent addition to your enthralling story

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  • From ANON - Severella on May 13, 2003
    *Grins* Yet another marvellous chapter, and so soon after the first one! I can't wait to see more of this, especially from the Snape/Hermoine POV.


    It's really amazing how you can take a cruel character like Lucius Malfoy and make him both caring and heartless within the same instance. The ability to make such a dimensional character (from one meant to be so shallow, narcissistic, and sadistic) is truly a testiment to your skill, and as such I'd like to know if you have anything else written that I should be aware of.


    Again, great fic, great beginning, and I'll be checking back for updates soon.
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  • From ANON - Lillyanna on May 13, 2003
    That was just as good as the first chapter. It is perfection! I hope you will write more.
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  • From ANON - Nell on May 12, 2003
    Absolutely! you *have* to write Lucius POV!! and more!
    Lucius my favorite evil man! don't leave him out!

    Keep writing! Great story you have here!
    I'm eagerly waiting for an update!
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  • From ANON - JD on May 12, 2003
    i think you should write a lucius POV
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  • From ANON - Kitty Kat on May 12, 2003
    Great story! I would be great if you did Lucius pov... Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - hurricane on May 12, 2003
    Great Start. I wanted to dislike Snape, but just couldn't, I can't wait to hear Malfoy's POV. Please continure with the story.
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