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Reviews for Plaything

By : Malfoywhore
  • From ANON - deedee on October 09, 2003
    OMG!!!You're finally back!!! And OMG Hermione is pregnant!!! Right? I mean she has fuller breasts and "..her stomach is slightly rounded.." and she has the glow, she is SO pregnant. I wonder who the father is: Severus, Lucius, or maybe Draco (j/k I don't think he actually finished.). I loved the part when she almost said Lucius' s name. I know she did it on purpose, but he really shouldn't blame her. I mean she is being switched back and forth between the two of them and being screwed senseless, it could be hard to even remember what day it is.
    Severus is not stupid, but if she not careful, he's going to figure something out. Then again, he seems to be a bit unfocused when she is around. I wonder if she used the owl to send a note to Harry. I can't wait to read more. I hope you don't wait too long to update.
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on October 08, 2003
    Go Hermione, Go! Show those SOB's who's the boss :)
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  • From ANON - AnaNg on October 08, 2003
    I just found this yesterday and I'm really digging it! Please update soon, it's addictive! I was late to school last night because I was so hooked! :)

    Ana
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on October 08, 2003
    WOOHOO! You
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  • From ANON - dryade on October 08, 2003
    this is one of the best stories i've ever read. it's so full of emotion. one moment you turn me on and the next moment i'm so close to tears i can hardly read on. it's a wonderful s! dr!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on October 07, 2003
    Wow.... I've missed reading this story...
    Brilliant as always.
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  • From ANON - Andrian on October 07, 2003
    Finally you updated. and whew...fans face...by the way would Hermione be more rounded because of a oops we didnt take precautions thing
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on October 07, 2003
    Ohh Hermione did the on purpose didn't she? The little bitch! That is so cool. Please don't wait so long before updating again. I need my Plaything.
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  • From ANON - Lidra on October 07, 2003
    This a great fic. When I read the rape parts, I said "Shit, this is really fucked up". Not the story itself, the rape. But it was great. Severus was always a prick, but to return to the dark side? And take his own (former?) student as a sex slave? Then he was always the bastard everyone thought hi be. be.
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  • From ANON - white raven on October 07, 2003
    Excellent! Thrilled to hear you updated. You and I share the same editor and she made my day by informing me you had put a new chapter out here. Brilliant read. The balance of power has indeed shifted. One thing I've enjoyed in particular with this chapter is the undercurrent of erratic behaviour from Snape. It isn't overt, which makes him even more unpredictable and keeps the reader guessing as to what he will do or say next. Perfectly Snape in my opinion. Only a few spots where I felt he may have softened somewhat more than necessary, but understandable. We are privy to his inner thoughts, as well as his outer actions so we see what he doesn't show on the surface.

    Well done! And I hope there isn't as long of a wait for chapter 13.
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  • From ANON - Corazon on October 07, 2003
    Oh shit! I hope you update soon!

    BTW, I am glad to see you back!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From ANON - SillyLily on October 07, 2003
    Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank YOU for updating!!! Please continue to do so!!!
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  • From ANON - Galuwen on October 07, 2003
    Damn, she almost slipped, but I think she did it on purpose. This story rocks! I have to admit that I'm a big Lucius fan. I think he's gorgous. I also like Snape, but not as much. This story is really interesting. I wonder what will happen now. It seems she's got them almost were shnts nts them. A little more and they just might be putty in her hands if she plays her cards right. I am really looking forward to reading what will happen next. I wonder if Hermoine will start to care for them even in the slightest. I really looking forward to find out. Please keep up the great writing, and update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Laerai on October 07, 2003
    Hermione has almost become like Snape in some respects with the careful plotting and watching. But at least for her it is for the right reasons. A great chapter. Glad you picked this up again!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 07, 2003
    I had thought that you gave up writing this amazing story! I am always torn when I read it. On one hand the HG/SS fan in me wants her to love her captor and kill Lucius, but on the other hand I want her to be free. *sigh* I hope this means you will be finishing this story! I look forward to reading more!
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