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By : Malfoywhore

From ANON - Robyn on July 01, 2003
Wow. Good story. You do a good job with the dynamics between the three characters. I really enjoy reading this. Plus, the world just needs more Lucius Malfoy. Generally I'm a Snape fan, but... I think as far as this story goes, I'm cheering for Lucius Malfoy. Snape's just kinda sappy. Not overly so and I think you've done a good job with him, I just prefer Malfoy. I'm so sick and twisted... So yeah. Keep up the good writing and I hope you'll update soon so I can get my Lucius/Hermione fix... (hint hint nudge nudge) As a writer myself (although I have problems finishing things so I don't have any stories posted yet) I appreciate how much effort goes into writing and the effort to keep the characters in character and you're doing a great job. Thanks for providing me with a good story to read. *~Robyn~*
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From ANON - Robyn on July 01, 2003
Wow. Good story. You do a good job with the dynamics between the three characters. I really enjoy reading this. Plus, the world just needs more Lucius Malfoy. Generally I'm a Snape fan, but... I think as far as this story goes, I'm cheering for Lucius Malfoy. Snape's just kinda sappy. Not overly so and I think you've done a good job with him, I just prefer Malfoy. I'm so sick and twisted... So yeah. Keep up the good writing and I hope you'll update soon so I can get my Lucius/Hermione fix... (hint hint nudge nudge) As a writer myself (although I have problems finishing things so I don't have any stories posted yet) I appreciate how much effort goes into writing and the effort to keep the characters in character and you're doing a great job. Thanks for providing me with a good story to read. *~Robyn~*
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From ANON - SharonSnape on June 30, 2003
Girl, you rock! LOVED Hermione taking back control, and wrapping Sev tighter around her finger. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Severella Snape on June 30, 2003
OMFG, I'm soooo sorry I haven't been able to review in so long! Rea life got in the way--college, finals, I graduate on tuesday the 1st of July--and everything just sort of fell down about my head.

Now, onto the story...

I'm afraid I don't have much to say right now...however, I do plan on going back and re-reading this tomorrow morning, upon waking. That way, I may perhaps absorb the chapters I've caught up on. But, from what I did manage to get through the fog of exhaustion was incredible!

Now I will sleep, and return on the morrow to read once more and give a solid, true review.

-Severella Snape
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From ANON - Deanna on June 29, 2003
Oh my god, this is the most awesome story I've read in a long time. I think I like Lucius' side of the story better, and Draco is always a plus when he's in his evil bastard mode. But then again, softie Severus is interesting too. Keep up the EXCELLENT work.
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From ANON - Dame Niamh on June 27, 2003

Stunning. An incredible exploration of the linked mechanics of sexuality and sadism, power
and desire. More!
Blessed be,
Dame Niamh
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From ANON - andie on June 26, 2003
Whew! It's getting very hot and steamy around here LOL! Great HG/SS smut, er, I mean, love scene LOL!
Yes, I think Lucius is an enjoyable character to write, especially since contextually you've placed all 3 of your characters in an A/U, noncanonical situation--more leverage & freedom of interpretation, for reader and author!
really enjoying Hermione, I must say! More please.....as always, Brava!

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From ANON - Fiery Slut on June 25, 2003
WOW! It
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From ANON - The Oracle on June 24, 2003
I know I reviewed before, but I really love this story! It is very refreshing to see Hermione get empowered by these two. I don't think they realise that is what they are doing, so it is interesting to see them play off each other's fears and not realize that they are being played. I admitted before that I adore Severus, especially when we see him being vulnerable every once in a while. I would love to see what happens if Hermione had to choose between the two, and to see if she has any affectionate feelings for them, especially if they start treating her well and like a human being, that would really turn the tables on both of them, and I'm not above seeing either of them get a taste of their own medicine.
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From ANON - Anna Marie on June 24, 2003
I loved this chaper. I like that Hermione is starting to feel a bit more "empowered" (still that lucky woman-Severus and Lucius LOL).

Of course I vote for Sev all the way. Please, pretty please make it a Sev ending! LOL

Great job.
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From ANON - Stacey on June 24, 2003
This is a great chapter. I can't wait to see what else happens. Write more soon.
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From ANON - Evilchick on June 24, 2003
Write more write more write more!
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From ANON - Corazon on June 24, 2003
This was such in, dare I say, erotic chapter yet very
powerful chapter. It is very reassuring that Hermione
is intellectually as strong as she has always been,
knowing exactly what she needs to do. It was bitter
sweet the way she took Severus in the end, but it was
also showed how she could easily over power him.
Excellent job!

Hugs,
Corazon

PS
It is tempting to write more stories about Lucius.
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From singtoangels on June 24, 2003
Hi babe. Yes, I completely agree with your philosophical statements. I believe that she's already having a difficult time separating acting from reality. And I did notice that she said that she didn't feel anything for Lucius BEFORE she came to his house. That implies that she feels somethior hor him now. Heh. And yes, I'm quite well acquainted with BTVS, and Angel is still my favourite show on television. (I only actually watch tele when that show is on. The rest of the time it gathers dust. heh) I actually have a few sites for BTVS/A:ts because it was the fandom I was into before HP. But anyway, I do think Severus is acting rather like Angel. Not that you do it on purpose, just that their characters are inherently similar. The only difference is that Cordelia seemed to have lightened Angel up a bit and he isn't evil anymore. *coughyeahrightcough* And I hated Angel and Buffy together! Ugh. She and Spike were a much better team. Iust ust happy that James Marsters is contracted to be moving to Angel now that Buffy's toast. *does a little dance* Gah! Completely off track here! Right, Plaything . . .

*re-reads bits*

I love how Hermione finally realised that she could control them through sex. Severus is easy to control. Make him think that he's the most gorgeous and precious thing on two legs and he falls at her feet. I think that Hermione already has him where she wants him. If she presses much more, he'll be HER slave. And I don't think that he'll do a damn thing to stop her, either. However, if/when the time comes for her to be killed, Severus just may step down because he'll realise that she wrapped him around her finger and he'll see it as an easy way to dispose of her without havin fee feel guilty himself for doing it. To avoid more pain, etc.

Lucius is pretty much under her spell already, but his personal confidence gives him a better resistance to her charms. I think that he's more intrigued by her mind than anything else. He's different because although he knows that she's still quite young, he doesn't treat her as a child *like Severus does. He even blew on her food!* The gamesweenween the two of them will be soooo exciting once Lucius figures out what angle she's playing. I think he should confront her on it, just to shock the shit out of her and throw everything on another spin. He'll also realise what she's done to Severus soon enough and I think that he'll admire that more than anything else.

I did read the story you got the plot for this from and I have one thing to say - NO! Please don't give us the same ending as that one! I don't want to see Herm thr thrown to Draco *or even Harry if you make him evil* I'm sure that you have a much better, more creative, ending in mirighright? Right? Please? *begs on her hands and knees* Please please please?! I want to see her with one of the guys! *Lucius of course, but I suppose Severus would be all right* And I want more Plaything already. How will I cope for the next however many days it'll take to get here? *cries*

Cheers,
Sing
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From ANON - Jaelyss on June 24, 2003
Back to the smut! This is good. Would love to know what Snape's POV to this was, even if it was obvious. Such a great fic you have here.
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