Click Here!

Reviews for Adamo Fidelitas

By : pixiezombie
  • From ANON - RaffyV on October 08, 2003
    That was very touching, Pixy.*sniffs* This chapter got me all misty-eyed. It was terrible seeing Hermione suffer so much while Draco was being so stubborn and was obviously trying to make her jealous. It
    Report Review

  • From ANON - littlelo on October 08, 2003
    Wow.

    What a wonderful story. The plot is delightfully well thought out. The characterization is right on target. I absolutely love this story! I think it's one of the best fanfics I've ever read! The sex scenes were BEAUTIFUL! What a clever use of wizard sweets!! I'm truly impressed with your story, Pixyzombie! Its fresh and well written...I just can't praise you enough!

    Well Done!
    -Yvii
    Report Review

  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 08, 2003
    I am one of the biggest haters of Draco/Hermione fanfiction, but I was bored one day and decided to read your story.....I was stunned by how good it was...I am still checking daily to see if this story has been updated.....your are an amazing storyteller.....I found myself holding my breath when Draco was yelling at Hermione........and this last chapter made me cry....please please make things ok between Draco and Hermione....I suspect that they love each other.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - arbitrary on October 08, 2003
    oh, it's just too much! okay, so now they're reconciledrt ort of) but what about the trust issue? I'm sure Hermione will think of something to win it back... by the way, loved the owls. what a great idea! and the inclusion of the WWN story... brilliant!
    update soon (well, actually, update when you're ready... I just hope it isn't too long)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jules on October 08, 2003
    Wow -- As I read the confrontation scene between Hermione & Draco all I could do is hold my breath. The emotions ran so high & fierce. I wanted to cry for both of them. Also, I love seeing how Dumbledore is manipulating the D&Hr relationship. He's being so cagey!

    The depth you bring to Draco & Hermione is tremendous. I apprecite your faithfullnto cto cannon while maintaining their growth andractraction. Interesting how Draco is the first one to realize that something more than the lust potion is afoot.

    I look forward to reading about the ball and the Helios Apple. Update soon please ;D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sharon on October 08, 2003
    Chapter 12 is just brilliant! I always love getting online and finding a new chapter for AF.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Laerai on October 08, 2003
    Oh my lord. That was so busy. So full of emotions and events. Definitely not a thrown together chapter. It shows and it was fantastic. I'm very much anxious to read more of the Helios Apple. And the Ball should be... interesting to say the least. Great job!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michelline on October 08, 2003
    Sounds like this will be something they can resolve. why should Draco trust Hermione? But he also needs to understand why she did that. Please make everything alright... AND GET RID OF THAT PAIN POTION!! LOL
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Adriana on October 08, 2003
    In a previous review I stated that I was happy that Hermione put Draco in his place, but once I read how he'd suffered under the hex, I felt really badly for him. The past two chapters have been heartbreaking because it's obvious that they care about each other, but are much too angry to admit it. I love that this is Smut with Plot . . . it's so rare and not only that, but the relationships between the chaers ers are so in keeping with canon. This is very well written and I'm incredibly happy that you've picked it up again. I can't wait to see what happens next.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - genrou on October 08, 2003
    (you know its kinda weird writing this review in nothing but underwear having come straight from the bath and thus being super warm and wetish but super dry and having Duran Duran's "girls on film" playing in the background) well anyway i prininted out the previous chap and this one to read while i end a d a nice bath but once i finished, i so had to get out of the tub, ignoring what else i had planned to read so that i could come straight heere to write a review. my god, this fic is just absolutely brilliant and i cant help but get comepletely absorbed into it. man, i just absolutely love this fic. and that catfight was definately hilarious as was the organized cheese. poor ron, but soon he'll relize what's infront of him so its he's okay. i so wonder what's to happen at the ball and if other people besides pansy realize more of what's going on. and of course that trophy room scene was just so sweet and heartbreaking. but things are somewhat mended ad i cant wait for whats to occur next. thanks and please, please write more soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - jenn on October 08, 2003
    I am so glad you updated. I just love this st Too Too many times authors make Draco so OOC. I know it is hard to get Hermione and Draco together without taking them out of character, but you have done a wonderful job at keeping them true to their characteristics and having a plausible relationship. Usually I wait until a fic is complete before reading, but I couldnt resist this one. I cannot wait for more. Update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kiristeen on October 08, 2003
    oh! Thank goodness! I was truly despairing after that last chapter. ::whimpers in remembrance:: This chapter was great! Lovee owe owls, and Draco's eventual exasperated 'defeat'. LOL Her rant at him was great too -- that whole trophy room scene, in fact, I loved.


    Kiri -- eagerly waiting to see how this unfolds.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - beachlemon on October 06, 2003
    awesome!! I've been following this story from the beginnign and i LOVE it. Please, please, please update, man!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - insanity on October 05, 2003
    Ahhh.... nooo.... Must have more to read. *sob*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - missingthecat on October 05, 2003
    oh my goodness *runs around pulling hair out*
    what are they doing to each other, what was Hermione thinking?
    What is Draco thinking, please, oh please, let them work things out.
    He was so gentle with herowinowing more of him than with anyone else,
    why did she have to be so bitter?
    Thanks.
    the cat
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!