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Reviews for Adamo Fidelitas

By : pixiezombie
  • From ANON - SchuylerD on May 27, 2003
    You're right about the vagina -- I mean I've never felt ANYTHING from those "Ribbed for her Pleasure" condoms. But at the same time I can feel ejaculation about 95% of the time. The penis pulses, and that I can definitely feel. I don't feel a "splash" or anything though, so if that's the myth you're shattering, it's good that you did. I have felt warmth, though. I think sometimes people couple the pulplusplus the warmth and just say they can feel the semen "hitting" their cervix when tliteliterally can't differentiate that exact sensation from mere temperature or pressure as the shaft pulses. But yeah, I DO feel it when a guy comes. This sounds like an interesting discussion for my live journal! Interesting chapter, too. I am also wondering just how far inside the vagina the hymen is. How far can one put their finger inside? When I was a virgin I could use tampons with no problem, and when I first had sex, I still had my hymen. Now that it's gone, i'm not sure where exactly it WAS. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Newromantic on May 27, 2003
    Wonderful story with an extremely cunning plot direction! I love the fact that you have managed to write erotica without resorting to gratuity.
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  • From ANON - liz on May 27, 2003
    yay! fantabulous. want more.
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 27, 2003
    I love your story. It's my favorite. I wonder if Snape gave them their little push on purpose. I guess they just needed a reason to go through with it. The sex scene was very wwritwritten. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please writee soe soon.
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  • From ANON - DEM on May 27, 2003
    Most excellent! please continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - Stained Lips on May 26, 2003
    I absolutley love this fic! Wonderful job. Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on May 26, 2003
    Considering D/H fics are not exactly top of my fave pairings list, I love this. Well done you!
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  • From ANON - Red Angel on May 26, 2003
    BRAVO~! I usually avoid Harry Potter fanfiction because there's just so much of it that's horribly written.. but thie hae has captured my attention and is holding on. Very nicely done. In character from the start and continues that way. I wait, impatiently, for the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Freya on May 26, 2003
    This story is perfect. Hurry please with the update!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on May 26, 2003
    I found your story under "latest" and am heartily glad for it. The premise of a love/lust potion as a start point for Dr/H has been explored, but it really is very difficult to find one of your writing calibre. This is especially so, in the light of your ability to keep both Draco and Hermione in character. Having read all 5 chapters at a go, I am quite sure that you will do the genre justice in the continuation of the story. I really enjoyed the way Snape figured out the situation that the protangonist got themselves into, as well as how Dumbledore handled the situation. After all, there really isn't much that they could do without the Helio Apples, now could they? *grins*

    The consummation of Draco and Hermione in Chapter 5 was well-written. It is apt that Draco chose the Dragon's Keep for Hermione's deflowering. Here's hoping Hermione will get to "keep the Dragon". heh.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Might it be too much to ask if you'd email me when you upload Chapter 6?

    Campy Capybara
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  • From ANON - Nick Dipalma hater on May 26, 2003
    VERY GOOOD!!!!!! Only one flaw though...you don' thave enough chapters!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO WRITE MORE TO YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sorceress on May 26, 2003
    Wonderful! Marvelous! I think you did an excellent job of portraying all the complex, conflicting emotions between Draco and Hermione in all of this! I can't wait to see how you build up the coming chapters! Great work!
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  • From ANON - Nick Dipalma hater on May 26, 2003
    I HATE you! I truly and copletely DISLIKE cliffies!
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on May 26, 2003
    MmmMmmm Godd smut! I am throughly enjoying this little adventure into your potion mix up. I want to hear more about more nasty things happening to Crabbe and Goyle!

    I can't wait for more!
    Karena Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - Nick Dipalma hater on May 26, 2003
    I know, I know i'm suppossed to feel bad for Ron but I admire Draco's cunning. Well, bye bye! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
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