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By : Tatiana
  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2005
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - melissah on July 04, 2005
    I had to stop at chapter 2. It's an alright story, but as Harry Potter fanfiction it falls flat. I suggest you speak to someone about characterisation. Keep up the good work, though.
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  • From ANON - mugglemom on June 01, 2005
    You are an amazing writer. You use words to paint vivid images and scenes. You spin your tales like finely made silk. thank you. I have read Forbidden Love on Ashwinder. May whatever God you believe in continue to bless you for caring so much about your students.
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  • From ANON - angel on May 23, 2005
    i loved this story this is th 2nd story of your i have read and this one was every every moving i hope you still read your review and thank you for another great story i hope to read more and thank you and well bye for now .

    angel
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  • From ANON - gigi on March 07, 2005
    Best damn story I've ever read. You have to pat yourself on the back!
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  • From ANON - sl on February 06, 2005
    I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the fact that Hermione turned out all right, and found an endearing love in Snape (don't we wish life was that simple, or that the love was that hot? etc). I really want to emphasize the fact that I admire that you really showed the grooming process that bastards like Malfoy demonstrate on girls like Hermione. I think you captured well, maybe too well, the fact that Lucius is one disturbed man. He's killed, he's raped, he's tortured. This can only be done with enjoyment by the mad, the insane (really, if you enjoy the maliciousness of murder, rape, torture a'la Malfoy, then I might have to share my opinion that there might be one, two or many screws loose). I think that it also shows how vulnerable any person can be. You tapped into a fear I have with Hermione. I often worry that her intelligene hinders her street smarts, her intuition etc. I've always hoped, am hoping that Hermione was not the type of book-smart person who doesn't think they are not susceptible to this horror.

    I love the garden analogy. It really fits life, no? The soil that is the richest in its nutrients is the soil that often has had to deal with a travesty (i.e. forest fire, etc). After such a devestation, some of the most beautiful plants grow from the pain. I really love the ending, and how you show that Hermione has seen the capacity of her inner strength and that she was able to find a love that all of us wish to find in Snape, and that they both have started a family.

    With one last note, Harry and Ron's reactions are priceless. And another last note, Snape is absolutely charming in this story.

    Thank you for writing this story, it has been a real pleasure to read.
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  • From ANON - AngeL X on July 02, 2004
    This...well...I don't know exactly what to say. Normally, I don't really leave a review on this site but when I came across this story, I couldn't help it! This is one of the best Harry Potter fics I have read. I praise you. Hope you writee ste stories like that! A great story from a great authoress. Though I can imagine Lucius escaping from Azkaban (like Sirius) and getting his revenge on both Hermione and Snape. But once again, a great story.
    ~AngeL X
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  • From ANON - ME on June 18, 2004
    What a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Lyra on June 02, 2004
    very, very, very well written! In most Fictions, Albus is portrayed as a dottering old fool, or a kniving asshole. Thank you for making Albus Albus! I like Snape. This is good. Harry and Ron are true to form, also. Really good work!
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  • From ANON - riyo1 on April 29, 2004
    this was the best fanfic I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more. I 've read some of your other stories and enjoyed them as well. I encourage you to keep writing! :)
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  • From on April 24, 2004
    I loved this story, your a great writer.
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  • From Padfoot on April 12, 2004
    HOLY F*****G HELL!

    Sorry
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  • From ANON - Ember on March 16, 2004
    Very good and intense. I didn't expect it to be good, but I was pleasantly surprised.
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  • From ANON - savethebeavers on March 08, 2004
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! That was so sweet! I loved it!
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  • From Grill on January 18, 2004
    Oh wow!
    I just finished reading your story, and it's, I have to say, AMAZING! I just loved it! I'm a huge fan of Snape, obviously, and Snape/Hermione is always an interesting match. I think you picked perfect characters for your story - having Lucius Malfoy being the abuser was brilliant! He's such a mystical, evil character, really fascinating, seeing him the way he was with his victims was really great...! Poor Hermione though, but dearest Snape set th rig right..! ;)
    Anyways, GREAT story, I loved it! I pray t Nor Northern gods you'll write a sequel with Lucius's return or something like that... Haha, well, anyways - BRILLIANT!
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