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Reviews for Criminal Ravishment

By : Tatiana
  • From ANON - Piggie on June 10, 2003
    This was a really good story. I loved the development of snapes tenderness towards Hermione. It was a difficult and yet touching story to read. Having survivored a childhood of sexual abuse, my boyfriend is helping me now deal with the pain. It was beautiful to read how much severus loved and wanted to protect Hermione. I feel that - know I know that - that is is how my boyfriend must feel.

    Thank you for writing this story, you don't know wit hit has done for me.

    Piggie.
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  • From ANON - GeekGirl on June 10, 2003
    excellent story....I found the sexual abuse a little intense and disturbing, but i stuck to it and eventually was able to enjoy a good read...as always your writing was excellent.
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on June 10, 2003
    Corazon,

    I have always loved your writing. This was a very emotional ride for me. Being a survivor of abuse myself I could relate to most of what Hermione was going through. It helped that she had someone to coach her through her turmoil. I wish I had someone like Severus during my trials...Thanks for writing this...it was a great and emotional story.

    RWH

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  • From ANON - arcee on June 10, 2003
    Congrats on a good story I throughly enjoyed it ..
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  • From ANON - Potions Mistress on June 10, 2003
    Ok, i have spent almost 2 and a half hours reading this story, and i must say, it is a million times better than i thought it would be. Even though i know what a wonderful writer you are, you surprise me everytime. i'm sorry to hear that you are having surgery. Is it on your ankle? surely not. Are you gonna be okay? I hope so. YOu are my favorite author on ff.net, whispers, and here, and i couldn't bto tto think you were being hindered by surgery. There are a few questions i have though. Ok, why did you choose the name of the tower to be Priapusum (did i spell it right?) Have you read the story, the Fourth Unforgivable? because in that story, the fourth unforgivable is Priapus, and i obviously don't have to explain to you what it means. I am so very pleased with this story. BTW, did you know i updated my story? Email me before your surgery. Or i'll worry about you. Ok well, it's almost 2a.m. here. i've been reading since 11:30. lol bye. Potions Mistress
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  • From ANON - Saria on June 09, 2003
    What a wonderful story. It's been a while since I've really got into a story,but this one reeled me in. Great job, and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Evee on June 03, 2003
    Aww! I loved that! It's not one of those PWPs you always see, where it's wham bam thank you ma'am, but there's emotion and love- and I love how Severus is suchentlentleman that he'll stop if she wants to. Excellent.
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on June 02, 2003
    Ooooh
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  • From ANON - Penthesilea on June 02, 2003
    this is a really good premise for a fic. i can see why you have so many reviews. the darkness of it is very realistic. i think that the transitions that Hermione goes through are a little rough, and the way that lucius plants thoughts in her mind a a little choppy, but other than that you've done a great job.
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on June 01, 2003
    Yay! I
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  • From ANON - Trina on June 01, 2003
    Oh dear, I am afraid that I have lost intt int in your story now :( I was really getting into it but the last few chapters just didn't do a thing for me. I just think the whole Severus/Hermione thing isn't right. In your summary you say it is with Lucius/Hermione but it has turned into a Sev/Her story and well to be honest it isn't my cup of tea. Oh dear I hate to be so negative but I don't think I will be reading any furthur.
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  • From ANON - JJ BattleX on June 01, 2003
    As I read the "Jaws of Death" scene (as I've come to call it) I couldn't help but think that somewhere out there, in this great big world, some poor guy is going to read this fic, and when he gets to the part where Hermoine bites Lucious...he's just giong to double over at the meer thought of that happening. In fact I'm sure that chapter doubled over a lot of poor guys. But on the upside Lucious got exactly what he deserved. Kudo's to Hermoine for finally ::cough:: taking a bite out of crime.
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  • From ANON - marianne on June 01, 2003
    AWWWWW OOOOO I loved it!! Absolutly well written.. Wonderfully put together... YOu must either know alot about these particular issues that were put in this story or you did some magnificant research.. having been a victim myself of such abuse.. I think you wrote it in every detail perfectly.. .. Sounded like you knew exactly what you were talking about and you knew exactly what to write.. Which makes for the best writers. I hope you continue to share you perfect works with us your fans.
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  • From ANON - Amy on May 31, 2003
    i love this story i cant wait to read more of your work
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  • From ANON - emily on May 31, 2003
    this was the best three chapters ever!!!
    i have been waiting so long for that to happen!!
    is this the end?
    please dont let it be!

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