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By : Tatiana
  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on May 30, 2003
    Wow, another fantasic chapter. Im glad that Hary and Ron finally accepted Severus as Hermione's love, and the lovemaking was wonderfully well written. I look forward to the next chapter...

    Loads of kids ahead...I hope...

    hehe

    RWH

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  • From ANON - Mogli The Witch on May 30, 2003
    WOW
    Really great chapter! Do you plan to become an author?
    Or are you one?
    Excellent!
    Thank you so much for putting this on the internet, so that we can read this
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on May 30, 2003
    Awww...I need to hear a few I love you's from those two...Such a bittersweet love connetion...cant wait for more.

    RWH
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  • From ANON - Evee on May 30, 2003
    Oh! I didn't realise I didn't have to have a user name to review! I've been following this fic up for a while, and I have to admit that I'm obsessed! i love the way that your fic isn't the as as everyone else's! The whole thing with Lucius was a unique I've never seen before. When Snape started helping Hermione out, I felt a bit betrayed- a little too cliche`- but then how Ses pus pushed her away and they both went back to their lives- it was wonderful. It wasn't the stereotypical Sev and Herm instantly shag up- it is kind of a slow progression. My favourite bit has to be the part when Hermione looks up at Snape with big brown eyes in Potions and his heart melts. Aww! Schoenes! Oh, just so you know- I'm not supposed to be looking at these things, strictly speaking (too many young siblings and strict parents- though I;m old enough, the prunes...) and it MAY ruin my rep if anyone found me out. ;-) I'd be appreciative if you didn't tell anyone I've been here... not that we know the same people.... *shrugs* Nice fic!
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  • From ANON - Rayya on May 30, 2003
    I have just finished reading all nine chapters. I found the story to be very well written and it handled the subject matter well. It provided deep insights into mind control from the victim's point of view and clearly illuminated the processes involved in both brainwashing and overcoming it.

    I really felt for Hermione and I could understand her confusion and fear. I really enjoyed seeing a more gentle side of Snape. The characterizations were accurate and Malfoy was a complete bastard (excuse my language). It also allowed me to see deeper into Malfoy's character (I always have him as a baddie too - would love to kill him off but then I'd have to find another to take his place. D'oh!)

    If you want to return the favour I have stories at: www.hpfanfiction.nexcess.net/storyline/authors.php?no=810

    Malfoy's not nice in those either - but I don't think he's as mean - I could take lessons from you.

    Thanks for the reading pleasure.

    Rayya
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  • From ANON - MoD on May 29, 2003
    Wow That was heavy. I read all nine chapters. I t was so good and sad. Will there be an end? Or was that the end? I hoped to see an ending for Severus and Hermoine.
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  • From ANON - lala on May 29, 2003
    hi love this story ur a really gr8 writer im not normaly a ss/hg fan but i love this story anyway keep writin
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 28, 2003
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  • From ANON - Leigh on May 28, 2003
    I figured out how to post a review!!! I just wanted to stress what a wonderful job I think you are doing with this story. I don't think it seems rushed at all, it seems like everything is happening at a natural (and tantilizing) pace! Thank you for keeping up with the story... I check up on it several times a day for updates! You are doing an amazing job and you have incredible talent, thank you for all your work!!! ~Leigh~
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  • From ANON - Mogli The Witch on May 28, 2003
    Great Chapter!

    I agree, it is only natural for her to see him as her hero... (Besides, you really managed to describe the kisses in a way... wow!) They are really falling in love with each other, aren't they?

    But I think it will still be difficult for her... And, excuse my stupid searching for difficulties, could it be that she looks for a kind of substitute for the love she thought she had found with Lucius Malfoy? Naturally not consciously, but she is still recovering from a brainwash and the de-programming is not easy. After all, she thought of Malfoy as of her only love...

    I think there will at least be flashbacks, even if she loves Severus Snape dearly there will be moments in which she remembers the abuse through Malfoy. Victims of rape and abusal are traumatized and their greatest problem is that, when it comes to a romantic relationship, they are sometimes afraid of the person they love (and who would never hurt them purposefully). I know someone who was sexually abused by relatives, it happened over 30 years ago and she sometimes is still afraid...

    I read somewhere that rape is a kind of killing - the killing of the soul of the victim.

    Let's see if Sev and Hermione are able to cope with her emotional injuries.

    Please go on writing, I hope you aren't angry about my writing - it is certainly not a flame!!! I wish I could write like that (but I don't think my English is good enough, besides, I would never be able create a really good plot...) I have rarely thought so much like I did about your story... So I hope you will forgive me if I state my doubts that 'Mione will be able to establish a relationship with the Potions master without having some difficulties.
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  • From ANON - Raija on May 28, 2003
    OOOOHHH!!! ok I am tired but this story is great anyways.

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  • From ANON - shuli on May 28, 2003
    I am in love with this fic ^_^ I love SnapexHermione ... Meh, I'm a perv. So will they have sex now, the kind of I-love-you-for-reals sex? Or is this the end? o.O; Pleeeeeaaaaase write more?
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  • From ANON - Raven on May 28, 2003
    I was wondering if you were thinking of adding Draco interacting with Hermione somehow? Since Lucius abused Hermione, I was thinking that maybe Draco should talk with Hermione. Who knows, maybe he will be nice for a change? Or perhaps treat her like his father did?.....
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  • From ANON - Kellis on May 28, 2003
    Great story that's quite addicting! I'm completely hooked and pairg H/S is always cool.
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on May 27, 2003
    Hallo! When I first started reading this it was so depressing. I found that it was hard to beleive such a strong willed girl like Hermione would fall for the manipulating schemes of Lucius Malfoy. Then I was sad because I wondered if even the happiest ending could make up for what Malfoy had done to her. But her relationship with Severus gives me hope! Good job, I am waiting for the next chp!!!
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