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Reviews for Criminal Ravishment

By : Tatiana
  • From ANON - Sarah on May 27, 2003
    I am very impressed with your story. I was a little worried at the begining, but it has developed very good characterization and *gasp* an actual plot!!! (Although I do not mind PWP all the time, i a n a nice change). I hope you keep going, it is very well written and keeps you involved auriourious about the Hermione's character and her reactions to things.
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  • From ANON - Giova on May 27, 2003
    loved this chapter! It did seem just a little fast, but then, it didint bother me too much. I would think a lot of girsl in Hermione's situation would be prone to falling in love with a man who helped theter ter such an ordeal. I love this story and am anxiously awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - Bree on May 27, 2003
    The story is excellent!!! I hope that you keep planning on having updated.
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  • From ANON - Jen on May 27, 2003
    I love this story. I could not stop reading it. im waiting for more though! :) It has been awhile since ive ready any thing with mr. malfoy in it! May your hand be quick, and the death be fast! Thats when wellw, iw, its going to last. Jen
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  • From ANON - Bree on May 27, 2003
    I'll admit that when I first started reading this story I was a little skeptical about the outcome and I wasn't too sure that I wanted to continue reading. But I just had to know what happened so I kept reading. I am so happy to know that she is safe with Snape (who doesn't love Snape?) Now I cannot wait to see what happens!! Is Snape going to end up with Hermione???
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  • From ANON - Quwinntessa Starber on May 27, 2003
    First off, this is an incredible plot idea! Wow! Wish I'd thought of it myself.

    Second, snaps for studying your psychology before attempting this story. Too many authors try to wing it on what they "think" should happen in this type of situation, you ally lly nailed it.

    Third, consider the choice of wording you use for your charaters. For example, I don't think I've ever heard Albus use the words "Okay" before, he would say "alright" or "Understand". Also, to make your diologue more believable, use contractions, most people don't always us things like "that is" they use "that's". Just an idea to make your diologe a little bit smoother.

    Fourth, thank you so much for writting this! It's original, and I love how you managed to get Malfoy into Hogwarts, it's VERY believable. If you chose not to write another story after this one, be sure to pass your excellent plot ideas onto other ing ing writters, your story ideas deserve to be written.

    Desperate for the next chapter,

    Quwinntessa Starber
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 26, 2003
    I think it is a great idea to have her plant flowers..
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  • From ANON - Amelia on May 26, 2003
    Great story, letting us seeing the slightly softer side of Snape through a lens different to both Hermione's and everyone else's. Will follow with interest!
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  • From ANON - Mogli The Witch on May 26, 2003
    Hello,

    this is sooo great!!!

    I really like such really dark stories - and this is one of the best I've ever read.

    I think Severus has to be very, very troubled - what I mean, is that he is falling in love with a Death Eater's victim while having caused such terrible things himself...

    And she has to be very afraid of everything in regards of a new relationship - even if she begins to trust Severus. He has to be very cautious with his new feelings for her - after all, Lucius Malfoy told her that he loved her all the time, I don't think that she will be able to trust anyone enough to let them come near her (both emotionally and physically)

    I really look forward to the next chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - Giova on May 24, 2003
    Cool chapter! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 24, 2003
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 23, 2003
    I like how you are teaching us the reader, about how to help some one going through this .Youare doing a great job keep it up..
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  • From ANON - Macy Gray on May 23, 2003
    Go Severus! I love this story and hope Hermione catches a clue soon and realizes she's been used and abused.
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  • From ANON - good on May 23, 2003
    good good good *aah*
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 23, 2003
    Very intense stuff .Good writing though.
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