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By : Tatiana
  • From Teri1211 on April 06, 2017

    This made me cry.  I also thought I would never enjoy sex, but oh I do.  Making love, to be sappy, is NOTHING like being forced and hurt and humiliated.  I can never have a baby which breaks my heart,too much damage and no magic. Again thank you,this story was am unexpected gift


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  • From Teri1211 on April 06, 2017

    This is a very well written story.  I am deeply touched by it because on 12-12-12 i left 24 years of sadistic abusive hell. I understand Hermione's thinking no one will ever love her.  I understand her nightmares and fears.  I am happy she has her Severus.  I am blessed with my own. His name is Ben.  I am still shocked that he loves me.  We will marry sometime in 2018.  The additonal joy is I will be Mrs. Ben Potter, yes I am serious.  Thank you for writing this.  You are talented and your writing is full of passion and real emotion.  Blessings to you


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  • From ANON - eri on June 05, 2016
    god . give the dumb bitch some veritaserum and be done with it
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  • From ANON - SL on December 29, 2014
    I very much enjoy this dark and well-thought story!

    One nitpick is that I feel using Severus as the one who helps the recovery is borderline-believeable given the situation.

    Once getting over this issue, I'd love to see some more treatment about how Hermione (as well as the people in her support circle) develops and realizes Severus is really a right partner. Given the story as written, while no one would argue Severus is not Lucius, he might still be a healthier-yet-remaining-problematic version: an all-encompassing-lover-and-father-figure for the orphaned Hermione.

    Lastly, I think the story would be even more interesting (and challenging-to-write) if Lucius discovers that Hermione has a submissive side (e.g., getting off with certain pain, humiliation, etc.). In such a plot, while Lucius would still be the villan, Hermione would remain be a victim, but one with more gray area. Furthermore, it'd be even more challenging during recovery, how to deprogram (from being dependent on Lucius) while allowing Hermione to retain her natural submissive.

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 07, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 23, 2006
    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just sat down and read the whole thing tonight. All I can say is WOW!!!!!!! This was an amazing story. It took guts to write and you did it beautifully. It was amazing to watch her reach bottom and then rise to the greatest of highs. Thank you for writing such an amazing story.

    My one and only compliant is that some of your words are combined or cut off. I have noticed it in other stories so it could just be a formatting thing.

    I cant wait to read more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on December 30, 2005
    Wow Corozon, this story was fantastic! I've read a lot your stories and have enjoyed them all. Glad that bastard Lucius got what he deserved. I await your next story.
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  • From ANON - Mary on December 17, 2005
    I Loved this story. But I think there is something wrong with it. Some of the words are like....
    "svr, svr, Severus"

    It's odd.
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  • From ANON - Sakura on December 09, 2005
    I thought this story was alright in the long run. Now I usually listen to music while I read and I heard this song that I though just went so well with this story, it's called 'Innocent'. Here are the lyrics:

    Satin, you know where I lay,
    Gently I go, into that good night.
    All our loves get complicated,
    Serves from pleasures overrated.
    Never armed our souls,
    For what the future would hold.
    When we were innocent.
    Innocent...
    Angels, lend me your might,
    Forgive all my lies, to get just one ride.
    All those colors long since faded,
    And all our smiles are confinscated,
    Never were we told, that we'd be bought and sold,
    When we were innocent.
    Yhea...
    Yhea this prayer, has brought me tonight,
    Whisper down that line, you still ain't got it right. (I think that's what the line is)
    All confessions long since faded,
    All this shit is contemplated (I think that's what the line is)
    Never did we know, What the future would hold,
    Or if we'd be bought and sold,
    no oh, no oh,
    When we were innocent,
    Innocent...
    When we were innocent...

    I'm really not going to go into a long explaination as to why i thought this song went with the story because i'm just lazy.

    Sakura
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  • From ANON - sbrande on November 26, 2005
    Thanks for writing another wonderful story.. Go Hermione and Severus...
    Cheers, Sonia
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  • From ANON - Jacky on October 12, 2005
    This story was truly one of the best that I have ever read. Your writing skills amaze me. You know someone is a truly fabulous writer if they can captivate you in their story. Good job.
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  • From ANON - xx on October 01, 2005
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  • From ANON - heather on September 02, 2005
    WOW! this was an amazing story! it brought me to tears! you have a wonderful gift!
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