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Reviews for In the Dragon\'s Flames

By : pixiezombie
  • From ANON - melina on July 01, 2004
    This is a very good story. It's a little twisted and a little weird. But it works. I've already read these two chapters like 4 times waiting for you to update. So finish this story soon. Please and thank you.
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  • From ANON - Digital Siren on June 12, 2004
    You are fucking brilliant. After reading what you have done of Adamo Fidelitas, I had to see what else you had written. I love how you portray their relationship. It's so sinister, but at the same time sweet and romantic. Normally, I'd never read a fic like this, but it was so well-written and well-planned that it was sexy and at the same time, heart-breaking. Good, good job.
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  • From ANON - Angel # 4 on June 10, 2004
    Very instresting chapter indeed. I completly enjoyed it. You ABSOLUTELY NEED to finish it. I cant wait for the next bit. Hurry.

    Angel # 4
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  • From ANON - firesorceress10 on April 25, 2004
    WOW! I like this fic and the uniqueness of the plot! I still like 'The Game Lovers Play' better, but this one is just in development, so it might just make its way onto the top of my fav. smutty d/hr list! Good job! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bongo on March 18, 2004
    Please Update,
    I love this story. It's by far my favorite. It's the number ONE reason that I check this site. Thank you so much. Bravo and keep writing. Ciao-
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  • From ANON - on March 11, 2004
    keep going..very interesting
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  • From ANON - SeaBlue on March 07, 2004
    So glad you've continued with the series--I hopped up and down when I saw that there was a new chapter. Very nicely done. More, please!
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  • From ANON - Surfer on February 21, 2004
    Great story, I hope it doesn't take you so long to update for the next time. Story suggestions: in the middle of the chapter, Hermione said she was scared of what Draco could do if she ever mad him truly and really mad ~ let's see exactly what will happen. Of course, I don't know what would make him that mad, he's so cool and under control. Maybe Hermione could attempt an escape. Really good story, I know I said that already, but you are an excellent writer and manage to make your stories so enjoyable. I'm liking the dark theme to this story, very creative.
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  • From ANON - Breeze on February 20, 2004
    Oh good, I was so afraid you forgot about this story. Yes it is a very dark fic, but that's probably why I like it so much. I hope there will be a happy ending though, right? With Draco and Hermione together?
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  • From ANON - Automatic Love on February 17, 2004
    Wow! That was so hot and steamy ::fans self:: It's been a long wait for the second chapter, but definately worth it.

    I must say that I was quite skeptical with this story as I generally don't take the rape/BDSM category seriously, but I like that this delves deeper into the characters than most rape fics. This chapter has sealed my interest in the progress of the story whereas I was in it solely for the smut in the first chapter. ::cough:: Hope to see number 3 soon!
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on February 16, 2004
    Wow, that's pretty interesting. I'm usually not into BDSM, but this was very well written. It was interesting to see what they were thinking at vus pus points and how they react to each other. So, I'm curious to see just how this storyline plays out. Please continue to write more.


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  • From ANON - deedee on February 16, 2004
    I love this fic. It's beatifully distrubing:) He's like her nightmare and dream come true all in one package. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Raffy on February 16, 2004
    OMFG! I know I
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  • From ANON - Margaret on February 16, 2004
    That was bloody amazing work! But oh, I don't know if it's just Aff.net acting up right now, but the entire 2nd chapter is underlined. Just thought you should know so you could change it--it made it a slightly difficult read. But anyway, I really love your Draco and the whole sadistic turned tender side of him. Is it bad that it's weirdly erotic to read BDSM... sometimes even more so than normal smut? lWellWell anyway, great work and hope you update soon. Either story, actually. :P
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  • From ANON - LaRoseNoire on February 15, 2004
    First, I would like it noted that this is not a flame, simply an expression of opinion. It should also be noted that I have quite enjoyed this author's work in the past (and, hopefully, will continue to do so in the future) and have no objection to stories containing BDSM (as anyone who has read my own works would know) or the real life expression thereof (being quite knowledgeable about, and experienced in, The Lifestyle, as many are wont to call it).

    I do, however, have a problem with this story and will not read further installments. Though very well written, it does not work for me as a character study (there is no real motivation shown or emotional study provided for anything the characters have done except, perhaps, Hermione's minor efforts at rebellion; there was certainly no emotional insight given into their sexual interactions, beyond the exercise of power in nonconsensual sex), or as erotica (I am not aroused by acts of rape, no matter if pleasure is given as well as received; it is still an act of violence), or as a study of a BDSM relationship (the point of which is power exchange, not taking. Hermione discovering some masochistic tendencies might have been interesting in that context, but not when she is effectively being systematically abused by a kidnapper). The story did not work for me because, at the end of the chapters, I did not feel I had learned anything about the characters, seen them grow in any way or even enjoyed myself vicariously through their experiences; I simply 'watched' while one abused tortured the other in the most intimate of ways for his own selfish pleasure, never understanding WHY, and was not left wanting to know more about them or what would happen next.

    All reviews needn't be good, but they should be thoughtful and honest. Hopefully, I have adequately expressed why I felt this story was lacking and given the author something to think about!
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