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Reviews for Yin and Yang

By : SkidRow
  • From ANON - Madison on June 03, 2003
    Wonderful fic! I love all the sexual tension... great job keep it up!disodison
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  • From ANON - Anya on June 03, 2003
    Keep going!!! This is good. I wanna be STORM lol
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  • From ANON - Gina Virtov on May 26, 2003
    You must continue! It would be so interesting, funny, and wicked cool to see how the teachers react to Storm. Especially Professor Snape...mwahahaha...and you cant just let the thing with Sirius hang. Even besides all that, shes the Dark Lord's daughter there has to be a war/battle of some sort where she makes the rather huge decision of Dark or Light. Than you have all the delicious details that go with that...you can always add tragedy. Make her go insane for a while, make her have some unique and amazing power, whatever you want. It'll be great, but in order for that to happen you must CONTINUE!!
    One more thing PLEASE LET SEVERUS FUCK HER! *rabid fan girl for Severus Snape and Lucius Malfoy*
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2003
    wonderful work, i really like Storm, she's got spunk!
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  • From ANON - lasair on May 24, 2003
    Please let storm hex pansy and hermione!!!!
    Maybe a " I wanna have an orgy with everyone in slytherin and to remeber" hex for hermione or a hex that'd cause her to be fucked by something out of the forest in hagrids class or something along that line. obviously storm's gotta have draco,harry and sirius, but who else? ron? snape? dumbledore? minerva?
    in case you didn't notice I love this story and it has just the right amount of innuendo and sex with a kicking plot as well. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on May 23, 2003
    Wow. =-O I REALLY enjoyed that. I didn't really ex to; to; dunno what made me read it, but I just felt like I should. *shrugs* Actually, despite the fact (or maybe BECAUSE of it ;) hahaha) that Storm's a complete and utter slut, this is enjoyable. Maybe it's the forbiddenness of her lovers, or the fact that she'll do anyone... we don't have to wait around for certain characters. ;) This oughta be *interesting*, to say the least ;) rofl. I can't wait to read more. Please keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - kya on May 23, 2003
    Well.
    I like it a lot. But I don't like Storm. Actually I like her but not how she treats Hermione. I usually hate Hermione but Storm irritates me. The Mary Sue gets all is really a put off. Can't wait for more but holy crap, I dno if I can ret ift if I can't stand your main character...especially since you're in her head 24/7. Gave you five but we'll see fi my stamina can take anymore of her =P hehe

    - kya
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  • From ANON - hibouette on May 23, 2003
    i love your story ! Especially the part with Lucius and Storm ! I Hope Storm 'll do some nasty things to Hermione;-)
    Write some more please cause this is great !
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  • From ANON - arcee on May 23, 2003
    I see why she is named storm because trouble is awin win when she is around...
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  • From ANON - Honey on May 21, 2003
    This story is hot! Do some more!
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  • From ANON - Butterfly on May 20, 2003
    I really enjoyed reading your fic. Lucius is different to how i usually imagine him and it was fun reading about him from a different angle. Will there be any Draco/Storm. please write some more soon.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on May 20, 2003
    Good story but I just think that the sex parts came a little too quick (pardon the pun..LOL) I think if you would have had more sexual tension building up and left the sex for later that the story would have been better. I am not really complaining, just offering my advice. I love to read a good story dealing with sexual tension. I just thought the sexual acts came too quick in the story. Other than that, you did a good job!
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