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By : RainingatNight
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on August 28, 2005
    I'm curious to know which Slytherin is the one who will be helping her.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on August 25, 2005
    WOW. im very impressed by this work, and i hope ill see more.
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  • From ANON - Alice on July 25, 2005
    Please try to continue the story! i very much enjOYEDI T
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  • From ANON - Pastel on July 09, 2005
    Great chapter. I love it. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - JUJI on July 09, 2005
    It's been forever since u've updated. I had actually forgotten about this story all together. Update more often, not once a year.
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  • From ANON - JW on June 12, 2005
    Ch 5 - I hope you expose Ron's cheating ways to every girl in the whole school, so that all the Weasleys hear about it. I don't think I like the way Draco is still embarrassed of being with a Muggleborn/Mudblood - "I
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  • From on December 16, 2004
    i'm sad to hear the story is almost done, but i hope you write more stories. this one is excellent. more love for draco and marcus. more beatings for ron. please.
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  • From Chloe0076 on December 16, 2004
    yay an update! I love this story so far, specially brining in Marcus, he's hott. hope you update soon :-D
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  • From ANON - Betty on December 15, 2004
    Short. Very Short. Chapter five could have been a part of chapter one. You only need to break up paragraphs to separate ideas, not make us go to a new page. Interesting idea though. Try to develop a relationship. Why is Hermione going for a threesome when she was so "frigid" when she was happy in her relationship with Ron? Good start.
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  • From maggie36 on December 04, 2004
    I really like your story. I spotted a couple of mistakes but nothing that couldn't be caught by a beta or a spell/grammer checker. I love the trio (Hermione, Marcus, and Draco) pairing. Hermione is really lucky. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nette on November 29, 2004
    NICE!!!!!!!! My only suggestion as a fellow fan fiction writer is to make the chapters longer. Don't leave cliffhangers so close to eachother. Example, Ch. 3+4 could've been one chapter with a little more added. Explore hermione's feelings a little more. Or perhaps letting the sexual tension rise, like Hermione doesn't clear her throat, they ease up to wait on her and find her watching, blushing. They're kissing on a couch and Marcus invites her to sit down.
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  • From ANON - jeannette on November 28, 2004
    it's a great story, chapters could be a bit longer.
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