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Reviews for A Gryffindor and A Slytherin

By : Ashley579
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Xtina on November 06, 2006
    I liked the idea and plot, but the characters are way too OOC for me to enjoy the story. You should have built it up more instead of thrusting the ideas onto the reader all at once. The best thing about stories is the anticipation, you need to build to the climax. You definitely have potential though.
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  • From ANON - lisa on September 23, 2006
    well i liked it. hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 12, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    update please!
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  • From ANON - Tammie on August 18, 2005
    good good need more keep writing plz!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Blackat on August 12, 2005
    Please update best fanfiction i've read in a long time
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  • From ANON - ? on August 12, 2005
    Is this every to be continued?
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  • From ANON - TJ on July 26, 2005
    need more! plz continue wid it plz thanxz in advance
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  • From ANON - Amanda on June 28, 2005
    OmG! This is so good! I really love this story. I've been trying to write my own story but have been having the same problem as you, everytime I read it, it doesn't sound right. A true writer never likes their work at first. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Mitia on April 25, 2005
    it is good,,, no it doesnt sux. I like the by-play for Ginny and snape. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Charry_Bl0ss0m on April 17, 2005
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that last part was totaly cute. and the part when Ginny asked Snape if he wanted a quick snog was the best i nearly peed my pants laughing so hard update soon
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  • From ANON - casey on March 11, 2005
    great now just keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on March 09, 2005
    Honestly, it needs work. lots and lots of work. great plot, love the way its going, but your grammer errors and misspelled words were rather distracting. also, the chapters lacked detail and organization. but do not give up! it takes a thousand and one failures to produce a masterpiece. as long as you are trying, people will read. -sound fields of dreams-ish-so keep pluging away, try to tighten and edit your work a little more, ask for advice and proof-readers and you will get loads better.
    may the Nine watch and guide your way,
    much love,
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - fiesty30 on March 05, 2005
    I like the twist that you took with this chapter (especially while betaing it as it didn't need any real changes)..keep up the good path and can't wait for the next chapter...and no it doesn't suck....
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