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Reviews for A Gryffindor and A Slytherin

By : Ashley579
  • From ANON - Drey on March 04, 2005
    This is a very good story! I think you should continue it and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Lady of the Realm on March 02, 2005
    Oh, hardy har har indeed! Fabulous, darling. I know about blockage, and I have to say, it's gotten a lot better since you've gotten past it. It's a great story, and I like where it's going. I hope to see some ACTION soon, please, but take it at your own pace. I'll check back on it.
    -Kat
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  • From ANON - Elle Felton on February 28, 2005
    I liked it!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - nikki on February 25, 2005
    omg that was soo good and well worth the wait, and i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jessie on February 24, 2005
    i really like this story but i wish that you would update sooner
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  • From ANON - Wendy on February 23, 2005
    Love this! Keep up the great work and update when you can. Don't worry about writers block it happens to the best of us. If all else fails ask the readers to give you some imput on what they would like to see happen and roll with it.

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2005
    Only on the first chapter, not too bad, I would say that you need a beta, to help you clean up some of the tense and word usage errors... You also need to think about how the characters talk in the books... Hermione is an English girl... She isnt GONNA go to a store, she is going to go to a store.... Things like that stick out at me, and make it hard to believe that these are situations that the characters of JK could be in.... Not a bad first start though. Everyone starts somewhere..
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  • From ANON - katie on February 03, 2005
    I thought it was very good and I hope you write more on this story.

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  • From ANON - nikki on January 28, 2005
    ok i love the story, but if you are going to end with a cliffy, then you at least have to do one more chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - tygress on January 21, 2005
    Yeah, your back. Oh I can't wait to see what was in her letter. Please hurry!
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  • From ANON - hermionebrowneyes on January 20, 2005
    hey your doing great dont be so hard on your self i think the chapter was very good
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on January 20, 2005
    yay, finally more of this. this part was good, I especially loved it when Ginny confessed what she did. *g* Never read a G/S one before. what'd Lucius write to Hermione? Now i'm all curious and can't wait for more.
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  • From on January 11, 2005
    I don't think you shoud stop writing this, as i think you are going somewhere good with this story. If you re having writers block, what I suggest you do is either get a 'beta' reader, so they can go over your work to check it or you find a author that you respect their writing for, and ask them if they would help you with a few brainstorming ideas. That's what I have done when I used to get writers block, and now if is no longer a problem for me :) Anyway, good story, plot etc.
    ~ Mercika
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  • From ANON - briana on December 31, 2004
    i really really like the story and the last chapter didnt suck. you should keep writing it please!!!
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  • From ANON - briana on December 31, 2004
    i really really like the story and the last chapter didnt suck. you should keep writing it please!!!
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