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Reviews for A Gryffindor and A Slytherin

By : Ashley579
  • From ANON - ghypscee on December 29, 2004
    yes, you should continue. everyone hits roadblocks, but something will come to you, just don't make it too long-i am not known for my patience!
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  • From ANON - tygress on December 28, 2004
    I am really enjoying this. I know that blocks can be so frustrating, but you are doing wonders writing after the blocks. Please keep it up as I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - MoMalfoy on December 27, 2004
    pleeeease continue the story! i really like it!
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  • From ANON - ceci58113 on December 27, 2004
    Hey i thought it was great kept on going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2004
    please continue with this story because i want to see how it turns out in the end and if hermione and draco are able to get together properly.

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  • From ANON - chris on December 24, 2004
    think about it, this i a good plot and can be easily continued. if u need help with it, i offer my services. it could use some work yes, but it can go far IF you choose to continue it. write me back ok?
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 24, 2004
    Please keep writing. I really really like it!
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  • From ANON - Kiki Malfoy on December 22, 2004
    I like your story. I truely hope you continue on with it. And the last chapter didn't suck....think of it as a stepping stone in the plot. Everyone hits mental blocks now and then. If need be, take some time, maybe read other fics, get your brain flowing and continue writing at your leisure...
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on December 22, 2004
    This is a good storyline, only it does need polishing. You switch viewpoints alittle much. Try writing in third person only instead of going back and forth. I would enjoy seeing more from you in this little fic.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - pinky on December 22, 2004
    While I admit that last part wasn't the greatest, I think it could get so much better as you continue on. I absolutely love the theme for the story, and I hope that you do continue it.
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  • From ANON - Savannah on December 22, 2004
    Ok here goes...
    That chapter didn't completely suck....
    It looked like you were trying to just fill space....
    It was kinda bad, I know you can do better...
    If your having writers block......
    Go to the last couple of chapters, reread them, and ask yourself what you want the charecters to do.......
    Put them in any situatuation, no matter how ridiculous and then edit....
    Remember it's YOUR story....
    You can make them do anything!...
    I think this story is great and I would like to see more.
    I know how bad writer's block sucks.
    Lotsa Love and Luck
    Savannah

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  • From ANON - Savannah on December 21, 2004
    Um...........

    ok.........

    So what happens next?

    e-mail me when another chappy is up mate.

    inuyasha_zealot16@yahoo.com

    Thanks
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  • From on December 20, 2004
    i thought that ginny was going to make a play for severus, but i guess she had other plans, although a snape/ginny pairing wouldn't be half bad.
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  • From ANON - charlie on December 20, 2004
    good chapter and I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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  • From ANON - Niki on December 13, 2004
    I'm loving this story. Yet another great Hermione/Draco fic for me to get wrapped up into. I always like finding ones I can tag and check for updates and this is definitely one of them. I hope you update soon....especially since the holidays are coming up....GOOD JOB!
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