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Reviews for The Mother

By : TornAsunder
  • From miakitty on October 05, 2007
    please tell me u have more!!!i need more!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - tabbycat on July 11, 2006
    great story. update soon
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  • From ANON - loony lovegood on October 27, 2005
    so are you going to update or what? i like this fic. not lik the others you see here....continue the fic
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  • From ANON - Beedge on March 15, 2005
    Not great, not original. Bad actaually. It's like every other fic on here. You have the potential; what are you going to do with it?
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  • From ANON - Lyttylyst on February 24, 2005
    i thought it was very good. please email me when you get a new chapter up. but you said she had pink nipples and then turned around in the next paragraph saying she had brown nipples. with hermione's complexion and all her nipples should be pink. not brown.
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  • From ANON - Angel # 4 on December 22, 2004
    Not bad at all, especially for your first fic. It does, however have a few typos in it. Perhaps thinking about a beta would be a good idea. Other than that keep it up.


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  • From ANON - Jess on December 14, 2004
    Please continue, I'm curious to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Luva on November 29, 2004
    I couldn't remember if I reviewed this story or not. But don't you think that Hermione would have first been a little hesitant about the idea?? Oh well, that's just my opinion... Update soon. Pretty good so far!
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  • From ANON - robin on November 24, 2004
    it makes sesnce but it needs more elabaration. maby talk about the thought put in to chosing HG or waht pansy's reaction was. perhaps include repeated atempts at conseption. this is a good story for your first time and if you wanted it has the potental to be more than a one shot.
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on November 22, 2004
    your story was a change of pace. i really liked it. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - FireSnake on November 22, 2004
    Very unique plot you got here. I
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  • From ANON - James Black on November 22, 2004
    It was twistedly good. You have a very good imagination and a gift at writting. Pity though, you seem like you do not wish to pursue with this plot...
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  • From ANON - slytherinswn on November 22, 2004
    It's different,interesting,odd and oddly enough I hope you will continue this um fic I guess.
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