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Reviews for There Was No Light

By : BelledonnaSnape
  • From ANON - WaterSeal on November 29, 2006
    Amazing! Absolutely amazing!! I hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on November 28, 2006
    Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 27, 2006
    This is really great. I can't wait to see how you wrap it up.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Lyliana on November 14, 2006
    Ah, mon Dieu, il est merveilleux ! Veuillez
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  • From ANON - mj on November 14, 2006
    so sad...please continue
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  • From ANON - Meru on November 12, 2006
    This story is really, really, really good. I'm not entirely sure if you did it on purpose, but there are a small handful of grammatical errors. Your writing, in and of itself, is very beautiful and I adore your work. However, I would recommend that you have a beta, either a friend or a volunteer, check over your chapters for those little mistakes. Trust me, it makes a real difference when the grammar is better (I'm speaking from experience - I write, but I can't keep good grammar to save my life).

    I can't wait to see what happens next. I can assure you, I'm hooked.
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  • From vyator on November 10, 2006
    I love it! It's so sad but I love it! Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From KarenLioncourt on November 08, 2006
    There is quality to this one. No doubt about it.
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  • From ANON - Winterineden on November 29, 2005
    Sigh.....even though it is too early for all brain systems to be online (haven't had coffee yet) these two chapters went straight to my heart. Love your writing.
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  • From ANON - ChaoticMayhem on November 29, 2005
    Beautiful. Absolutly exquiste. I love every second reading it. Super job
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  • From ANON - Winterineden on November 19, 2005
    Damn, but you can write! The flow, ideas, waiting til the end to mention it may have been a dream, and the lovers name at the end - perfection. Your story telling abilities are excellent. One or two typos in the first few paragraphs. Also, in the first few paragraphs you use a beautifully expressive word, then in another sentence you may use an ordinary word. With your expressive vocabulary I feel those ordinary words could have been upgraded for more impact. But again - Damn, but you can write! After reading it I feel like I need a cigarette - and I don't smoke! If you had left out names you could actually publish this as your own original work, and it would be up to the reader as to whether it is slash or not. It is hot either way. You are one of the most impressive writers I have had the pleasure to have stumbled across on this site. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - andie on November 19, 2005
    Second and third chapters are very short, but good. I hope you will keep your promise and give us a happy ending... I can enjoy some very angsty and painful stories if I know they will end well, but I hate "bad ends" because they make me depressed. Your dribs of memories are well written. I like your story.
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  • From ANON - freewater on November 18, 2005
    only on the second chapter right now, but this is the greatest! So sad :( Death fics are sweet, but I guess if a happy ending is coming then he's not really dead, right? Still great!
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 18, 2005
    All I want to know is, is Harry dead? Or did Severus leave without knowing the truth. This almost made me cry and I'm about to leave for work. Keep going!


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  • From ANON - Hoshi on November 08, 2005
    Beautiful!
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