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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2005
This is absolutely wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! Please, please let Hermione say the words to Draco... "I love you"! This chapter made my heart melt.
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From ANON - moxie on September 12, 2005
TOTALLY and COMPLETELY and UTTERLY worth the wait. Thank you SO much for updating. I loved this chapter. Yay! They get to see each other! I was anxious that they wouldn't get to see one another until after break and that would have sucked. I'm SO glad that Draco finally told her of his experience at Azkaban and what it did to him and how he felt about it and I loved her reaction! And she finally did the deed - how exciting, was wondering when she'd come around to that...AND he told her he loved her! Whoa. And what a realistic way they dealt with it when the words finally came out (no pun intended). I think I just may explose before the next update waiting to read what happens at dinner...
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From ANON - ~Sakurashope7~ on September 12, 2005
That was a good chapter. I'm REALLY glad that Draco said that he loved her...but why didnt hermione say that she loved him? I really hope that she says it in the next chapter and when Draco meets her parents. It would be really cool though if they could show that they like each other like cuddling and holding hands in front of people...maybe not the people at school but her muggle relatives...^_^
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From ANON - Alana on September 12, 2005
I totally love this story, it's bloody fantastic. This chapter was awesome, loved it when Draco accidentally said "I love you" to Hermione in the heat of passion. It was so sweet. Plz update soon...
Alana
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From ANON - curlyq2713 on September 11, 2005
ok so i just read this entire story finally. wow, it's very good! i'm happy you brought up the contraceptive subject, because i was curious about that myself. please update soon, i hate waiting a long time for good stories. keep up the good work!
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From ANON - . on September 11, 2005
obviously you aren't good at regularly updating so i will give you a tip: your story is good dont ruin it by not keeping up, so type it and post it

sorry if i sound like a total cow but i am sick of waiting
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From ANON - rain on September 11, 2005
Of course you deserve to be nominated! This story is brilliant and I voted for it thank you very much.
Isn't the suspense just killing you!
I actually felt very sorry for poor pansy in this chapter. And I loved the heaps of humiliation on poor Hermione with Pringle knowing exactly what they had been up to. And my isn't Dumbledore as clever as Draco said he was. I'm sure he engineered that particular conversation in front of Malfoy to accidently let slip some crucial piece of information that he wanted Draco to hear. He's so sexy and smart in this. Can I have your Draco? I know Hermione thinks he's hers but I can love him better...

Rain
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From ANON - rain on September 11, 2005
Chapter 39

Finally found time to start getting caught up on this story. And got to say that I'm not dissapointed. I love the way they interact together. Just so natural. And the scene up agains the wall of pringles office was very sexy. Have I told you that naming him after a potato chip makes me laugh? Maybe it wasn't intentional but everytime I read his name the pringles them song plays in my head.

Rain
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From ANON - Mary on September 07, 2005
Now for a big long reveiw! Or at least a big long reveiw from my point of veiw. My reveiws are usually a sentance or two long. Ok I love, love, love! your story! I picked it up from littlexblackxbook 's xanga awards. This is so amazing. When I first looked at it, I thought, holy crap, 48 chapters? It took me probably 2 weeks to get to this point. It was two weeks well spent! But the begining with Pansy was gross, I knew it was neccesary. And I'm glad Pansy isn't one of the main people, which was my great fear when it was called Pansy's Volcano. I still can remember thinking "will we ever get to the good dramione action? i need some fluff!" but it was totally fine. I love how long each chapter is. Let's just say, I will be sad when it is over! Update soon! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Joanna on September 06, 2005
I have really come to love the fact that you seem to love words as much as I do. I don't mean just that you are and auther but you use quite a large variety of words and have even managed to stump my extensive vocab so that I would have to look up words on Dictionary.com(one of my fave sights if that is indication as to how much I love words). Anyways I know that this wasn't exactly a reveiw of the story but I had to compliment you on that. Salute!
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From ANON - pyegirl on September 05, 2005
Review part 2

ALSO LOVE: the star wars dance theme; romeo and juliet; the incredible shrinking loveseat; undercover Blaise; "resistance is futile"; ginny; the draco/crookshanks rapprochement; and, last but not least, what I sincerely hope is the nude Tonks/Severus relationship thing. YOU GO!
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From ANON - Pyegirl on September 05, 2005
I have to agree with the other reviewers who say that this is one of -- if not the best -- all-time Draco/Hermione fic -- I LOVE IT!!!! You have created great characters -- you know which lavendar-wand-wielding party planner I mean -- and a very believable romantic progression for our couple. Most importantly, kudos on your extraordinarily fine grasp of the mechanics of writing. Give us more!!

As an aside, I have to say that my favorite scenes involve Hermione leaning against Draco's chest, and ANYTHING to do with Draco and quiditch.
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From ANON - Joanna on September 05, 2005
I am on Chapter 39 at the moment. Aside from the fact that I got a little confused when you replayed the scene leading to the Breath dance twice in two different points of veiw I have quite enjoyed the Social so far. I am glad that Hermione told Draco that she had worn green for him. I had a question that has been plaguing me. I realize that "Mina" is supposed to be short for "Hermione" but I haven't heard it used before. I was wondering where you got it from. Anyways, I really like the fact that Draco calls her Mina when no one else does because it shows there special closeness(if that makes any sense). Great work overall.
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From Provocateur on September 05, 2005
Well, I'm only on the 26th chapter now, but I have been reading this story every chance I can get for the past couple of days and I am deeply impressed with it. The writing is excellent and you've made each and every character believeable and real. One thing that I've always thought would make HP fanfic writing difficult is the fact that the characters, although given personality in the books, are not as well-developed as others who you will come across in the world of fiction. They react to situations and people without giving the reader insight to their deepest thoughts and feelings; which is fine because the books are fantasy/adventure stories and work well as they are. However, I love the depth that you have given to both Hermione and Draco, and the nuances that you have given to the rest of cast as well.

You made me absolutely dread having to read about Hermione and Ron's break-up, as I felt her trepidation and struggle and his profound shock and sadness. You managed to make her speech very realistic too, everything about that chapter was vivid and real. You also make mention of so many events that have happened over the years at Hogwarts that makes your story seem even more plausible. Real people have memories and reminisce to themselves about where they have been and how far they have come, and this aspect has been left out of a lot of HP fanfictions. You have managed to weave together a story about two people who are struggling with their own feelings and the consequences of their actions with an air of striking realism. I've met a lot of girls just like Pansy in the past, and I love how you've given the characters such freshness and dimension.

I also absolutely love your idea of the 7th year social and the magical words appearing upon the invitations, very creative.

I'll continue to read on now, I'm quite excited for the smut to come ;). You've have written an excellent story thus far, and I'll review again once I've gotten a bit further.
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From ANON - Jessica on September 05, 2005
I finally finished reading this story, and can i just say that i LOVE it! please update soon! =)
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