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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - darkkit_2000 on July 23, 2005
OMG ok for those of you who have NOT read the 6th book do not continue reading this review!! Can you believe Rowling killed Dumbledore off. I was so depressed I like couldn't look at the book for like 2 days because off that. I loved Dumbledore and she killed him(Rowling of course), it's all her fault! Ok sry for that anyway, another really really great chapter, keep it up! I would also be happy if Ron and Hermione got togather and I agree with the hurrying up part.

Love Lots,
Darkkit
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From ANON - nat on July 23, 2005
ohmigod i just finished and all i can say is update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

please update i cant wait to see what happens when hermione and draco reunite (wink wink)
and i think that when they get back to hogwarts draco and anthony should fight nothing is better than reading that, he he
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From ANON - Ning on July 21, 2005
Nice fillers. Although a bit tedious to read, I understand why it's necessary to have this. It would be too .. "unrealistic" if they were just having sex all the time. Anyway. I have yet to read Book6, but I know what's going on already. Hah, I can't stay away from anything that's in caps lock and says SPOILER ALERT!! All I have to say is.. I hope there's smut in the next chapter. ;D
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From ANON - genrou on July 21, 2005
thanks for the warning on top.

very amused by his reaction to the wrapping paper and santa. even more amused at his disguise. though gee, the song again? i guess im not as much as a romantic, but your following remarks on it helped alot and made me feel less huffy.

thanks.

i cant wait for christmas with lucius.
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From ANON - steph on July 21, 2005
ahh youre killing me. im so sucked into your story. i cant wait until the next chapter, update soon and have fun on your vacaction!

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From ANON - Shannon on July 21, 2005
Hi ya Blue! It has been a while! lol. I loved finding a new chapter though. I agree with you about the 6th book! I loved it and I for one knew that there was no canon chance for Draco/Hermione. But I am so glad you are going to finish your fic!! It seems alot of Dramione fans are shocked by the events of HBP. Why, I have no idea. Enjoy your vacation and I hope to read more chapters soon. Again, this is one of my favorite Dramione fics of all time!! You totally fucking rock, my friend!!
Peace,
Shannon
P.S. I am just now getting into the Buffy shows, I never watched them the first time around and I have never read a Buffy fanfic. I am a huge Spike fan(must be evil, naughty blonde men for me! ;) Lets see...Lucius, Draco, Spike, Eminem, hmmmm I see a disturbing pattern here), and I guess I should thank you. I figured Spike and Buffy where going to get together. Thanks for the warning! LOL! I would have been a bit ill. Any way I am rambling and Buffy comes on in 20 mins., so I am out! See ya and cheers!
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From ANON - lorett on July 21, 2005
Well Blue!

Firstly, I must say that this was a NICE little birthday surprise for me! Today, the 20th is my birthday and I was very happy to see you'd updated.

I really like your version of Draco and his insights and his thought process as to why and how he changed to become who HE is in your story.

I also like the idea that Narcissa loves Lucius and Draco loves them both.

I think that in the book, HBP (IF YOU'VE NOT READ HBP STOP READING THIS REVIEW HERE! BE WARNED!) We're finally given a clear picture that Draco does indeed love his family. As a matter of fact, we're given a clear picture that both Narcissa and Draco love Lucius. Draco loves his family so much so that he takes on (albeit forced) a near impossible task in order to secure their very lives, not to mention his own.

So, in that respect, I'm pleased with JKR. Now, I agree with you that we only see things through Harry's eyes, and we often find out in retrospect how VERY skewed his view of things really are. So, I've learned to take what he sees and what he reacts to with a grain of salt. Now, regarding Draco in this book, I think that JKR has put Draco in the best possible situation for an ultimate final retribution for him. I think if she'd left him as he was, he'd most assuredly turn Death Eater and follow suit as Lucius. But NOW, oh now, Draco can hold NO ILLUSIONS as to the monster that his father (and now he) serves. He was torn up and tormented and it was heartbreaking. BUT, he's got an ace in the hole...he's got Snape. And, Snape will save him, I'm sure of it. If anyone can redeem our Draco, it's him. So, although I was heart-broken at all that happened, I'm left feeling somewhat hopeful in the idea that now Draco is positioned to become a turn-about hero..if that's his lot.

And, I agree too that Hermione and Ron are cast to be in canon. Sigh. Although I just think it would be so delicious and SO amazing if Hermione even LOOKED at Draco...which she NEVER does...at least that we see through Harry's eyes. That I'm resigned to the fact that she's his and he's hers. sigh.

So, even though your story is AU...as are my two. WHO CARES! I love your Draco and the wonderfully complicated web that you're weaving of their love story. So, keep going and though this book has shot most of our plots to hell, I'm still here and still reading faithfully and will continue to do so!

Cheers,

Lorett
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From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
great chapter keep on updating!!! oh and......DRAMIONE 4 LIFE!!!! ;)
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From ANON - Kylara on July 21, 2005
Awww, only 50 times or so? The poor, Faith Hill-deprived child :D

"Cissy" is a nutcake. Paroled.. yeargh. I do dread Lucius interrupting this happy world.. hm, I wonder when or if you'll have him find out about them? (Or when everyone will, for that matter.) I'm so very glad you updated; until next chapter ^^
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From ANON - Amura on July 21, 2005
Hey, long time devoted fan here. First time to review.

Not really a review even...just want to say I am a formal Spuffy too ;) Always ship the "wrong" ship, haha...I still think as far as the story goes, Spuffy was fun while it lasted, especially in season 5. I don't hate Joss because he really considered and played with the idea. Can't say the same to JKR.

Book 6 isn't bad at all...based on the fact that the door never opened. the H/Hr ship faced worst luck this time around, and she did not even warn them. (sighs)

Anyway, glad to see another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - brownpaperbag on July 21, 2005
Hello!
Glad to see you updated. It seemed too short though, but I like how you showed how Draco and Hermione's X-mas break differed. Some people say book 6 sank the H/Dr ship, but I'd like to think it's just a little leaky. To me, they're still sailing, and though in canon, there is probably no chance (because the authoress said so) of them getting together, I can't help but see little things like how Draco likes to tease Hermione, but he's not particularly malicious about it. Like in Madam Malkin's, he calls her a name and teases her about her black eye. It's like he really wants to know who injured her. I don't think he'd care if Harry or Ron had a black eye. She's curious about what he does in Borgin and Burke's, and takes it upon herself to investigate when neither Harry nor Ron are willing. Malfoy stalks the trio in the library and gets ideas from Hermione. Obviously he has some sort of respect for her because he copies her ideas, such as with the coins and the poison. They do say imitation is the best form of flattery right?
Well I hope you keep writing the story even though it's officially AU, it's still good! I will grab a flotation device and continue sailing!
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From ANON - slyswn on July 21, 2005
brilliant chapter and nice job on sharing your thoughts about book 6 ~ Long live fan fiction

rock on!
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From ANON - Paranoia on July 20, 2005
I have read all the 47 chapters and I find the story fantastic. It has everyhing in it. Who ever wrote this is very talented.
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From ANON - moxie on July 20, 2005
This is the best story eve. Thank you SO much for updating, though I am quite upset that the next chapter will be equally delayed. Have fun on your vaca though! I was a little confused by Narcissa. She's proud that Draco thinks his father deserved to get thrown in jail yet she's trying to get him parolled and expects him to be happy about it? Does she disagree or agree with Lucius' choices? Or does she thin , like Draco, that he did something wrong/stupid? I miss Draco/Hermione together. I wonder what he got her for x-mas...? Absence does make the heart grow fonder...
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From ANON - Kaye on July 20, 2005
Nice chapter. I liked how you portrayed Narcissa, since I was beginning to think that you were making her go on a wild goose chase, since I had forgotten what Dumbledore had said before hand, about Lucius and his parole. Very good chapter, and Hermione got him his CD. *smiles all happy like* It was sweet. Love how it's going, even if it is now AU. But we all knew it would be. It would be too much to hope that Harry would walk in and just see Hermione and Draco snogging, but that's besides the point. Great story so far. Love it!
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