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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - Maureen on June 19, 2005
holy crap! Its taken me three days of almost non stop reading (and some chapters, re-reading) of this story....

*rubs eyes trying to stifle the blur*

HOLY CRAP! I love love love me some Hermione/Draco....i thought you were gonna have Mione invite Draco to her house....aw pooh. That woulda been kinda cool, but sooo Out of character

Cant wait for you to update (though really you just did)

MAJOR MAJOR PROPS, GIRL!

Mo
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From ANON - Dorothy on June 19, 2005
Well wasn't that convinient? Not a day after I finish this work of art, and what d'you know, another chapter is quietly waiting for me as I return!
This was as usual an excellent chapter; no worries about the lack of Draco, we all know we'll get enough ofthat soon to come. I suppose as a reader I needed Hermione to blurt it out to someone just as much as Hermione herself - eventhough it's driving me crazy seeing her doubting Draco's commitment to their relationship now knowing that he, well, damned well loves her!
Can't wait to read Draco's own little return. Thing that mostly makes me want to get to the next chapter as soon as possible is the young Malfoy's reaction if he finds out about his mother and a certain Head of House, assuming something of that nature could happen over this vacation. Also, can't wait to see how he further elaborates about his feelings towards his lioness, especially when (if) he faces his dear father.
And this is just the first day apart, isn't it? Wonder if they'd both be at such a well balanced mental state after all that time... I wouldn't be surprised if either one of them would just lose it and if necessary walk all the way to the other's residence declaring their undying passion or whatnot they'd like to call it. Or just grab the Knight Bus... or would that tend too much towards another written Christmas ficlet?... Ok that was pretty lame, I know, but excitement is taking over my sensibility at the moment. Who needs canon when you've got THIS?

Again, a lovely read it was,

-Ruth
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From ANON - Stephanie on June 19, 2005
FINALLY an update! Thank u so much! I was dyin here. And it's a fantastic post, as always. Update soon!
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From ANON - blu_babee on June 19, 2005
hi!!! i just came upon your fic and was entranced completerly. *high pitched squeelling here* love it so far. i just finished chapter 10. a bit sad because there isnt much draco/hermione stuff here but its still juicy. i just love severus... dont u? maybe i love him almost as much as i love draco & hermione.... no, maybe not. but still. which leads me to this question: Who is the person snape was with?!?! that ending scene was just impeccable. i was just speechless.

anyways... ur story is just so good!!!! keep it up
(^_^)
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From ANON - LiLiL on June 19, 2005
waiting waiting waiting :P
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From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 19, 2005
It took me a while to get through all the chapters and as you know, the real world does have this horrible habit of getting in the way of all our wonderful stories and fantasies here. I must say, this is a fantastic, well thought out, imaginative, heart felt wonder of a story. I am just impressed with all the detailing, the anxiousness that Hermione and Draco felt and simply enjoying your take on all of the characters. I have not entertained romantic ideals for quite some time but I think you've managed to make me feel like the young girl who wore her rose coloured glasses and still believed in the happily ever after romance stories. I'm totally fascinated as to where this story will go (not that I want it to end any time soon). I can't wait to find out who Sevvie is seeing and what will happen to Pansy and what it is about Blaise that makes him so mysterious and of course, I want to know what's going to happen to the gang but most especially what's going to happen with Hermione and Draco. I saw this story on the recommended reading list of another author I admire and I am certainly pleased I took up her suggestion and read your story. Well done and I look forward to much more of your wonderful tale.
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From ANON - selene on June 19, 2005
I just have to let you know that I read all of this in one enormously long sitting! I couldn't even stop to review each chapter as I was so anxious to read on! :D

You are extremely talented and I really appreciate the fact that you are sticking to this story when it has gone beyond what you originally planned (chapter wise). Their relationship is written so well. I adore the way that you have let it grow into itself.

I love this work... I am eagerly awaiting an update!
Thank you for sharing it!
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From ANON - Dorothy on June 18, 2005
I'm pretty much speechless as I'm typing this up right now - so you'd have to excuse my to come rant. Thing is, you have no idea how much I've taken the likes of your story over the past... shall we say month? Yes, seems unlikely as I seen some people claim they've read it in two days - well I'm just not that quick, I'm afraid.
I've dedicated about a day for every chapter or two, taking my time to swoon over every single chapter, and I've absolutely fallen completely in love with the plot. Most wonderful of it all was how you took your time, and how unbareably painful it may have been - the actual moment of admitting (and ravashing) was so perfectly inclined with, well, the reader's own urging will for them to get it good and well darned on. I remember sitting right here (when was it? Chapter 28? 29?) with a nice big lump in my throat biting into my knuckles after their first intimite rendezvous.

Your humour had me on the floor at times, not to mention other talents of yours that had me on the floor. My favourite chapter of all I must admit was chapter 30, 'the Eruption' of Pansy's little toy. I can't say I have ever enjoyed a written piece more than I have reading that chapter... adored every word of it, and even though the smut isn't wasted on me - that was really a master piece. We all expected it to happen of couse, but it caught me so off-guard it was delighting (revising my own facial expression afterwards) to read every major character's reaction to the girl's 'Sezual Szpewing Devizce'.

But it's also (I think) amazing how you kept the readers interest all the way through long after the two smuldering teenagers went about and did it; it wasn't even a question of getting there any longer once you got there, because by then the question of how will they and others deal with it, and how far will they go generally was much more bugging me than the actual question of 'when are we getting there already?' I especially can't wait to see Snape's reaction, whether he's oblivious to the very fact or not, when facing Dumbledore or Draco. Oh, and of course, Pansy's own reaction... just in thought it's priceless.
And Anthony, the git, he should be the one oblivioused here. Or just put away, simply like that. Preferrebly in a hermitically closed room with fluffy walls. He's going to ruin it for all of them, isn't he? Gosh, and just when we were having so much fun. Though Ron, the poor idiot. Eh, his reaction is one I won't mind fast-forward-ing through. Especially now that Draco has these new found pit of an emotion regarding Hermione... oh, that was so chockingly heart-warming! It was the perfect moment how ever, for him to realise such. And the flashes of the Gryffindore with a swollen stomach, oy, what this story is doing to my hormones! I don't know how they are going to make it through the Christmas vacation with out one another, because I for sure couldn't make it two straight weeks without this story. Not that I have a choice now, having finished all 45 chapters, and after reading the elaborate comments ending every chapter helping me realise that you're more than stacked at the moment only made me dreading the moment I finished more. But we all know it'll be worth it anyway :)

Right, I think this would be a nice place to stop babbling on, and let you get on with your work. I literally can not wait until the next chapter, (here would go a sentence along the lines of take your time, but I simply couldn't bring it up to type such, please forgive me), and you're truely a brilliant - BRILLIANT - writer. My jealously is literally dripping off every word of this rant.

Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
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From ANON - aphid on June 18, 2005
WOW i'm liking it
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From ANON - CiraArana on June 17, 2005
Hey, it's me again!
I'm reading the fic again from the start and I still absolutely love it! I'm still detecting details I haven't spotted before (or re-detecting them?). Really a wonderful story. The charaters seem so real and the way you write is so lively I can see the things you describe happen like I was watching a movie (and, whoa, Draco is HOT! *g*)
And I still love the scene where Pansy's Volcano goes off. *lolz*
I hope you update soon - I'm waiting (not with baitd breath, because I noticed a blue complexion doesn't suit, me but impatiently).
Cya, Cira
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From ANON - Natalie (natyslacks) on June 15, 2005
I honestly do love this story to bits! It took about 2 days for me to read it all, and some heated arguments with my brother when he wanted to use the computer...I was relativly addicted! Thank you for writing such a wondeful story! *gives you loads of cookies* And I have just finished chapter 45 in time as my brother wants acces to the computer *Sighs* Little brothers are rather tedious.
I just wanted to say how glad I am at how you have brought Hermione and Draco together so wonderfully, and I though when Draco declared his love for Hermione..It was possitivly addorable...though at the begining of the story when Draco was masturbating over Hermione, his fantasy...did infact come true, with the whole 'mina' thingy...and when he recently masturbated he had another fantasy and that I suppose leads me to puzzle wether that will come true...or if infact your hinting to the future of the couple in your story. Because how cute would a mini Draco/hermione be :D
I think though, it would be ever so sweet if Draco came to visit her over the holidays, she could show him Muggle life as he's very intrested in it ^.^ It would be so kwaii!

I also love the new twist of Draco's love rival... However could Tony join forces with Pansy to ensue the break up of Hermione and Draco, far fetched I know.

I do love this story its so well written and you have a certain way with words! I'll just tell you now I'm very looking forward to the next chapter of this story with baited breath! So please update soon! When ever you get time ^_^
Luv Naty
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From ANON - Amber on June 15, 2005
I just wanted to tell you how much i have enjoyed reading your story. This is probably one of the best fanfiction stories I have read. I am also glad to hear that you won't be spliting the story up as I like to go back and read it all over at times. I really look forward to your new chapters. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Amber
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From ANON - rebecca on June 13, 2005
this is the first time i've reviewed this story, but i've been reading it for weeks. It would be an understatement to say i've enjoyed it. During the past two weeks, reading this fanfic has become part of my life. When i at first saw there were 45 chapters i almolst gave up immediatley, but instead i read on. I fell in love with your work. There are bits and peices of this story all around my house because i'd print out a chapter or two when i had to go to class, because i couldnt bear the suspence of not reading it. You are a great writer, and throughout, i've noticed (and this could just be my obsession talking) alot of spike in draco's characterization. its weird, and i'm prolly off base here, but buffy fans can usually sense each other because of style of writing adopted from second hand joss, and i got the impression you were a fan. anyways, i really think you should update, because i love reading this story, and miss pulling up this page and having multitudes to read.
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From ANON - Lea on June 12, 2005
Pansy's Volcano is utterly the best d/hr story I've read to date. I've been reading it slowly because its the only thing that's kept my interest for so long and I wanted to stretch it out until July 16th because obviously its the only thing that actually keeps my mind off the upcoming book. Blue, it's amazing.
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From ANON - Chongyang Ke on June 10, 2005
Hello, I just wanted to say that your story is great and so well written! Don't worry about the 'dragginess', the storyline is interesting enough! People are just horny and want to read the 'smutty' bits. (Some Chinese living in New Zealand).
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