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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - Siobhan on June 07, 2005
I could wait forever for this story! I love it so much, it's brilliant!!
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From ANON - Angel4ever on June 06, 2005
yeah! u updated! this has got to be by far my most favorite draco/hermione stori i've read...okay, the wait was kinda long but hey, it was worth it. i luv ur stori and plz update REALLY soon! ^_^
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From ANON - Rosa on June 06, 2005
Excellent! You are a Fab. writer and I would glady beg for more! Oh no-- wait.. I am begging for more. ;P
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From ANON - LiLiL on June 06, 2005
aowww my fav song is Patience.
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From ANON - LiLiL on June 06, 2005
Im reading this chap while im listening my fav song Oh My! Its so right! Espectly this ..." They stared for an intense moment at each other, and then Hermione raised her fingers to her lips and blew a solitary kiss in his direction, before turning quickly on her heels and rushing away to catch up with the entourage" its go with this song perfectly!

PS.Damn Tony for being an ass++ :P:P

Please update as soon as you can.

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From ANON - Kitty Kat on June 06, 2005
aww! Draco's so cute^_^

**sigh** what will they do with themselves over Christmas break? Lmao, geez, I can't even imagine what they're gonna be like once they can finally be along again*-^

Waiting for ur next!

~Cheers~
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From ANON - Crown V-Lyn on June 05, 2005
hey gurl, luv the story but lookin forward to some slight suspicion in the air round Hogwarts. dont know if that will happen an dont know when but im lookin forwand to it so if u would b so kind as to add a little tinsy bit more of it in. again i really really really really looooovvvvee this fic so so i beg of u to hrry and update. xoxoxo. ~Crown V-Lyn
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From ANON - Know-It-All on June 05, 2005
What a wonderful fanfic! I knew that it must have been good to have gotten so many reviews, but the title did throw me off a bit. Now, reading the story, I love the title! It fits so perfectly! This is probably one of the best D/HR fics I've ever read. It has it's serious parts, but also parts so funny I died laughing! And the lemony scenes are incredibly well written. I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - Th3_MoL3 on June 04, 2005
Fantastic as usual can't wait for the next installment. This is actually the best HP fanfiction story i have ever read. This is because it is so in depth and completly believable. The way the characters act and feel are so true to the way there are in the JKR books. So fanfiction stories are great but change the personality of the character to fit with there story. I must admit this can work very well in some cases, which is why i enjoy thier stories a lot. However your story is above them in all aspects, because it feels right that your story could actually happen, if the JKR books were for a more mature audience, due to sexual description and swearing etc. So as a final note keep up the good work, i hope this story carries on as long as possible or make a sequel when this story is finished. 10/10 want to give you more but is is not possible mathematically, ahh whatever 1000000/10. :D

Kolawole Alaba, Streatham, London, UK ( just incase you want to know where i live approximately, maybe to see how spaced out your fans are:D)
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From ANON - MadamDragon on June 03, 2005
I'm going to summarize your story, in songs, up to chapter 45.

1st part/disturbance in their liking each other: totally Daniel Beddingfied-Gotta get through this
I gotta get through this...I gotta take my mind off of you, give me just a second then I'll be alright. Surely one more moment couldn't break my heart. Give me till tomorrow, then I'll be ok, just another day, and then I'll hold you tight.
When your love is pouring like the rain, I close my eyes and it's gone again. When will I get the chance to say I love you? I pretend that you're already mine, that my heart ain't breaking everytime I look into your eyes.

2nd part/ on and off and undicisive:Selena-dreaming of you
Late at night when all the world is sleeping, I stay up and think of you...Cause I'm dreaming of you tonight...If you looked in my eyes, would you see what's inside? Would you even care? I just wanna hold you close, but so far, all I have are dreams of you...I can't stop dreaming of you...I need you...

3rd part/ Malfoy accepts defeat:Offspring-can't get my head around you
Every single day what you say makes no sense to me, even though I try I can't get my head around you...even though I try I fall in the river of you, you've managed to bring me down too...don't mess with me, I never really know what's really going on inside you, I can't get my head around you

4th part/ Hermione comes into realization:Christna Aguilera-Obvious
Can you hear it in my voice, Was it something I let slip, Does the whole world know, Isn't it obvious? I'm the one who's in control, Now i'm acting like a fool, Do my feelings show, Is my face aglow, Isn't it obvious? That I don't know what I'm doing anymore, I'm feeling like a little girl. Caught up in emotions, I'm out of control.
Isn't it obvious?
Do you see my hands, they tremble. Wonder why I can't look you in the eyes? Don't know how long I can keep this inside. Isn't it obvious? Suddenly these emotions are in control of my heart. Can you see it in my eyes? Every glance, every smile must give me away. And I feel so much I can't hide

5th part/ Hermione and Draco start going at it:DJ Tiesto-Touch me
Touch me in the morning and last thing at night, keep my body warm baby, u know it feels right. Take it a little higher, I'm takin it too. Tell me what your feeling, I'll feel it with you. You touch my mind in special places, my heart races with you. I'll take your love and i'll take my chances. I'll take them with you.

6th part/ Getting kinky about it:Ludacris-What's your fantasy
Give it to me now...I wanna lick you from your head to your toes, and I wanna move from the bed down to the floor, I wanna ah ah you make it so good I don't wanna leave, but I got to know what's your fantasy...I wanna get you in the bath tub with the candles lit you give it up till they go out...how 'bout in the library on top of books
but you can't be too loud...

This particular sex theme also gave me another 2 songs from Draco's POV:Kevin Little-turn me on ~and~ Kevin Little-tempted to touch
Pushing everything right back on top of me...Let me hold you, Girl caress my body. You got me going crazy, You turn me on...Whining hard on me, Got the Python hollerin' for mercy...
I lose all control when i see you Standing there in front to me. Your style, your clothes, your hair, you flair; Woman, you look so sexy. Before the end of the night I wanna hold you so tight. You know i want you so much, And i'm so tempted to touch.

Btw: the Faith Hill song was oddly appropriate for the X-mas party/discussion activity.
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From ANON - Elspeth Evans on June 03, 2005
Please!!! Don't leave me here. I don't know how much one review can do to change the course of your life, but PLEASE!!!! UPDATE!!!! I can hardly believe that this story could be so intoxicating. Even though I've never been a Hermione/Draco shipper, this story changed my point of view. It's in my blood now. I need to know what's next. I read the whole story (well, up till this point, since I have no more to read) in less than 8 hours. I've read too much to go back now. If you don't update soon I might burst into tears and cry for days and days until you update. Please... You need to update more frequently to keep the sanity of your fans... Please...
Elspeth Evans
P.S. I love the way you changed Draco around like that. It makes him SOOOOOO much more wantable than he already was.
P.P.S. Thank you for writing such an amazingly realistic story.
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From ANON - Alexia on June 02, 2005
Hi havent rewieved in ages anyways love the chapter I was wondering when you were going to update so I was pleasently suprised.
It was reaaly sweet to have Hermione blow a kiss to Draco.
Please Im begging you update soon.
BYE

COMPLETELY I LOVE WITH PV
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on June 02, 2005
A great chapter... no problem with the wait, a fic as good as this takes time. I can't wait for the next chapter. Time apart is always so difficult....
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From ANON - missin4mation on June 01, 2005
{nerd alert} haHA! a red dwarf refferance!
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From ANON - CiraArana on June 01, 2005
Wonderful chapter!!
That little scene on the train was... hot!
Oh, and Hermione blowing Draco as kiss was SO SWEET!
Interesting to see Hermione from her mother's point of view.
I'm really looking forward to next chapters. ^-^
Cira
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