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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - bessorla on May 11, 2005
    Hi, Blue!

    I've been enjoying your story greatly for quite some time. I don't have much time for fandom anymore, but your fic is one that I have to keep up with, for the brilliant writing, plot, and yes, smut. I really liked the latest chapter with Draco being completely surprised by the appearance of Hermione's period, and her explanations that she'd already taken care of it. I was a bit surprised at Draco's desires for her to be the mother of his children, but I suppose that would naturally follow with his possessiveness and love for her (though he may not show that quite so obviously).

    As for breaking this into two stories - though I understand that the number of chapters is a bit daunting, I don't think it would be cohesive to just cut this one off and pick up in another story. There are still a lot of loose ends, and starting a new story would still require new readers to have to read PV before moving to the next one. Perhaps reformatting some of the chapters by putting a few into one later on might make it seem a bit more organized. :)

    Looking forward to the next installment, and please take your time with it. I'd rather have a good chapter than a rushed chapter. Plus I've got finals coming up. ;)
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  • From ANON - kunthea on May 10, 2005
    wow! a very unique story from what i've read so far, butot in a bad way. very fluffy, but it still is good. thou pansy's suggestion with snape kindda terrified me, it really is a disturbing idea, but everything else is perfectly fine. it's well written, and i gotta say that i like your style of mentioning a scene, come back and explain how it happens later. have a few questions for you,there gonna be more interactions between tonk and her cousin, since i really like her a lot, and her interaction wiith snape is interesting, and is hermione gonna get pregnant soon? once agian the story is wonderful and just keep continue on with the story, you don't need to divide it into two parts. good luck.
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  • From ANON - Paige on May 10, 2005
    I must admit, I want more, faster. :P

    But so does everyone. I am impatient to see what happens, and yours is one of the first to do this to me. The other (adamo fidelitas) seems like it will never be finished... and thusly, my hope rests on you, blue! ^_~

    I'm just giving you a hard time, but really... I love this story. I've been following it for ages, and can't get enough.

    As for whether you should do a part two or not... I say keep it one story. I love it the way it is, though I do fantasize about more frequent updates. ^_^;

    Thanks for this one, and can't wait for the next! :D If you have a mailinglist for when you do update, could you add me?

    Anyway, blessed be, and I cant wait for more!

    Paige
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  • From ANON - jongirl on May 10, 2005
    This story is fucking awesome! Keep it as one! It is killer! Draco needs to break down and visit Hermionie over Christmas ans tell her while she is concious that he loves her.
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  • From ANON - karnythia on May 09, 2005
    I just read your entire story in one day (much to the detriment of studying for my finals) and I just wanted you to know it was great. I hate reading fics with no plot, and you actually managed to keep me sucked in through all the chapters. I'd suggest you posting it just the way you have been, even though it's really long, it's always a pain to figure out where the 2nd part of a series is, in an archive laid out like this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2005
    good
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  • From ANON - Shaney on May 09, 2005
    I, for one, am happy with it this way. Please update soon, don't keep me in the dark. I love this story so much.
    Awaiting the new chapies,
    ~Shaney
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  • From ANON - Erin on May 08, 2005
    PLEASE leave it just as one, this is like my favorite story ever, im the most faithfull reader of it ever, and putting in apart two just wouldnt be the same!!!!
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  • From ANON - Allison on May 08, 2005
    Hey, I really love your story. I've been reading it since the start of the last summer. It's so amazing. I think I've commented before around September, so I thought it should be time that I should add another one. I like how the story is progressing, and how there are some chapters without smut for character development and coversation outside the sheets, even though I do miss it.

    Yes, I really like chapter 43 as well. I'm glad that Hermione is not pregnant. It's a little too quick, and ruins the fun too early!!! My personal preference is for you to keep it as one long novel-like fiction, but it's not a big deal or a very strong opinion. I just like having other chapters to umm...refer to (^_-), without having to click on a different link.

    I was wondering the same thing myself, for a while. Also, I may be weird, but I think that the potential for sex with Hermione having her period is sexy, not icky. Have you read, "Lights Out?" It featured something of the sort, and it was written really well about the meaning behind it as well. Also, I liked the fact that I think, you described Hermione, as having "a slightly rounded tummy." I'm not sure if I'm reading too much into it, but it seems to say at least, she does not have the perfect, most gorgeous body ever, but Draco still loves her. Because in so many fan fics I've read about them, Hermione has huge breasts and this tiny little waist, etc . . . and it seems really out-of-character and too Playboy-y. Anyway, keep up the great work. I think I've thoroughly embarrassed myself here and revealed a little too much of my kinky side, but Pansy's Volcano is one of the best and most realistic fics out there.
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  • From ANON - keiko on May 08, 2005
    I'd say just add chapters and keep it one story. It's nice to have it all in one place.

    I love ch. 44! Draco fantasizing about Hermione being pregnant was inexplicably hot.
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  • From ANON - Kitty Kat on May 08, 2005
    I really don't care what you do, cuz either way I will still be *absolutely* enchanted with this!

    Omg! I award you with the gold cup for most and best lemons I have ever read in a story!!!

    ^_^

    for
    now:

    ~Cherrs~

    ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anu on May 08, 2005
    Once again a great chapter. Your writing is consistently good, I can't believe it's been 44 chapters already and each and every one of them is a gem. You've made my day many times by updating during the past year. I sometimes wish I hadn't read this story so I could discover its fabulousness and read it for the first time now, but in that case I wouldn't have had the joy of following its progress chapter by chapter. As to the one story or two stories question, I'm afraid I'm not very helpful, because it doesn't really matter to me. Whatever you write, I will read, period. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - TwistedAngel9 on May 08, 2005
    ^_^ I love the story as it is! This is my absolute favorite Harry Potter fanfic! It is rather long, but it's still a great story. I do think branching it off into a Part Two might make it easier to read, however. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!!
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  • From ANON - BBAnimeAngel91 on May 08, 2005
    Yeah! u updated! great stori, as always. And i just wanted 2 say that i think u should just continue 2 add chapters instead of startin fresh cuz i like it right now...but if u do a part 2 i wouldn't mind either...so neways...plz update again soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lorett on May 08, 2005
    WELL - Firstly, I must say HALLELUJA and THANK YOU for NOT having Hermione and Draco become preganant teens. OH, I was SMILING a mile wide. I KNEW that Hermione wouldn't let something like THAT slip by her. She's too smart. She's too prepared. She's too cautious and intuitive. BRAVO! Even though my brilliant Draco got lost in the moment (Maybe subconsciously - he did that on purpose? Especially after just thinking about her carrying his child got him so...er...happy? - GRIN.)

    And, about continuing on with this story - why not? You're already where you are. We're all here with you. Keep going. Unless you wrap it up somehow and start a BOOK 2 - the next phase of their relationship. Everyone finds out...Daddy Death is hot on her heels, they need to flee...Draco has to save her...more hot sex, etc. etc. or something like that.

    But, otherwise, don't worry. I think it's going great and it's an enjoyable read. I'm very pleased.

    KUDOS!

    Lorett
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