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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57
  • From ANON - slyswn on May 08, 2005
    Very clever chapter but then again

    The story is brilliant just as it is so I'm not surprised

    change nothing

    =)
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  • From ANON - Mememe on May 08, 2005
    I think you should keep going so I can keep coming here and just finding the new chapters. ^_^
    Keep going. I want to know what happens! ^_^
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  • From ANON - blaZe on May 07, 2005
    hi--

    I've been following your story for awhile, since near the beginning, as I'm sure you know many many other people have as well. So I thought it was due for me to write something.

    About the question of whether or not your story should be cut into a second story or continued as one long novel... well, it's a tough call. There's no arguing that yeah this has become a monster of a story, not that it's a bad thing -- What I think is it all really depends on the majority of people, and whether or not they're willing to follow it all the way through-- which so far doesn't seem to be a problem. The downside to that of course is that, even if people don't mean it, a lot look through stories superficially and judge how a story's good by its reveiws, or hits, or in your case chapters-- and this story having the number of chapters it has may be intimidating.. even if it does sound silly and which would be a real shame because this story is well worth it. I'm sure either ways good for the readers who already have read this and continued to do so, and I'll be one of them. Good Luck.

    - blaZe
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  • From ANON - Casey on May 07, 2005
    Yeah!!! update Everytime you update its like a mini christmas. This is my favorite fic on the weB!! keep it going
    Casey
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  • From ANON - unknown on May 07, 2005
    I would like it if you just continued adding onto this one, because when I read this story over and over again, I would rather be able to read it all in one place instead of having to switch midway. I also prefer longer stories. Thanks for updating somewhat regularly. I love your story, and this is my favorite D/Hr story, which is saying a lot. =O)
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on May 07, 2005
    Whatever your heart desires, oh great one, we will follow. nine bless.
    Much love,
    please for the love of God don't keep us waiting for so long.
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2005
    This is the absolute best that I've ever read on this website! I don't what link I clicked on to bring me to your story, but I'm glad that I got to read something so amazing. The whole relationship thing between Hermione and Draco has been done so many times that it's very cliche, but you pulled it off flawlessly, with originality. I was so excited to see you had updated. I hope you continue writing and I think splitting it up sounds like a good idea because story is so huge. Anyways, hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Samurai Leprechaun on May 07, 2005
    Wow!
    That was such a brilliant chapter
    Draco loves Hermione how sweet!
    Plus shes not pregnant(whew!)
    Please update as soon as you can
    (",)
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  • From ANON - cheeky on May 07, 2005
    Please keep the story going this way as long as you can! I love this story so much! I don't have many favorites but "Pansy's Volcano" is definatly one of them!!! Keep up the great work!~~~Cheeky

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  • From ANON - Kylara on May 07, 2005
    Sorry for the double review, but I was re-reading the chapter (I can't tell you how many times I've re-read this by now), and I got to this line:

    "Draco closed his eyes, and tried the words out silently in his head. They sounded right, as if he had solved a complicated puzzle and everything had finally fallen into place."

    ;_________________; That was absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Blue, and I can't tell you what a lovely scene that was, with him softly telling her while she slept. Really, really amazing.
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  • From ANON - Kylara on May 07, 2005
    "Of course that was before Draco Malfoy and his damned uniform and his damned arse."

    HAHAHA.

    Anyway! On the topic of splitting this into two.. well, do as you please, I will most certainly read it wherever you put it ^^ This was originally ten chapters? O_O I must say, though, I'm terribly glad that this is a 'monster', as you put it.. all the more to read! I was very pleased when I saw the length of this chapter... so much wealth :> Back to the topic, no matter how or if you decide at all to split it, I look forward to your high quality writing.. whenever, wherever ^^

    I -adored- this chapter. I have to say that I -am- happy that Hermione is not pregnant, although with the way you were leading us on, I had prepared myself for the opposite >_> but yes, it's quite interesting that Hermione went on the pill herself, that wasn't something I was expecting. I was also not expecting Draco to be interested in the idea of her being pregnant (as Draco himself thought unusual), but you wrote it -really- well and very believably. That was a very sweet scene, with Draco thinking of Hermione at Malfoy manor.. it was a very WAFF moment.

    Was a little surprised about Draco planning to convince Hermione to sleep with him during her period (that gave me an ick moment), but I'm sure you can pull it off. It DID make me laugh when Hermione started her "Eww" when Draco told her about the panties ^^ that's so very Hermione to say that during sex.. haha :> Anyway, I once again look greatly forward to the next chapter, and to seeing how the trip home goes.... :>
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  • From ANON - Paschen on May 07, 2005
    I'm desperately in love with this story. I can't wait to read more. I check this site every single day to see if you've updated. I just wanted to cry bittersweet tears when Draco whispered his feelings to Hermione. It was so touching. I love how this story is developing, the way it started out as this passionate, sexual affair and is now progressing into a tentative sort of love. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Krissy on May 06, 2005
    This is, without a doubt, the most erotic chapter yet of this utterly gorgeous story. I just adore Draco - his realization of just how fortunate he and Hermione have been to date was very sweet, as was his not-quite-subconscious desire to see her carrying his child. Just beautiful. This is one story that I drop everything to go read. As far as the length of it, I think you should do what feels right to you, be it a longer story or a sequel to it. Go with the flow, Blue!


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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 06, 2005
    I really loved chapter 44, and I personally don't find anything wrong with leaving it as one story. I find it sometimes a bit daunting to have to track down the sequel, especially if I have the story saved to my favorite's list as this fic is. Hope that helps you make a decision, but whether you keep it one story or split it up, I will be reading! :D

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  • From ANON - Sunshine on May 06, 2005
    I wouldn't mind a Pansy's Volcano part two myself. This last chapter seems like a perfect end to the beginning of their relationship.
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