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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

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  • From ANON - Yaua on May 06, 2005
    great story...very creative =o)
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 06, 2005
    Please leave it as it is! It's only too unwieldly if the story is dragging on...which it most definitely is not. Keep that chappies coming, please.

    Thank goodness she's not pregnant! Daddy Draco...not until later (I hope).
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  • From ANON - cheryl on May 06, 2005
    Love the story.. keep it going. You're an excellent author, and I'm fairly well read, and don't say that too often. Professionally, have you done any writting? If you haven't, then you should definatly should. I anticipate you next chapter as soon as I read the current one!

    P.S. If JKR gets ill, you can write the last few!

    Good luck, and keep writing.
    Cheryl
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  • From ANON - Kristina Malfoy on May 06, 2005
    Please just keep adding. It's much more convenient if you want to go back to a chapter to reread something.
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on May 06, 2005
    oooo im sooo happy for the update, except now that im done im going to have to wait another month :( I absolutely love your story, I dont think you should split it into two parts its fine the way it is and its just wouldn't be the same if it wasn't Pansy's Volcano. But if your not going to write past the end of school you might want to write a sequel describing their life after hogwarts, Im sure everyone would love that i know I would
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  • From ANON - nique on May 06, 2005
    I like it this way. I loved this chapter by the way, good way to put everyones worries to rest.
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on May 06, 2005
    Re: Author's note at end of Ch. 44

    No, don't make it another story. It's not too unweildy and it wouldn't make much sense unless you've written it so that there is a clear break between Christmas and post-Christmas.
    It's still one of the best stories out there and I admit to looking for your updates with much anticipation.
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  • From ANON - Bree on May 06, 2005
    I'm happy with the story the way it is. As long as you continue and eventually have an ending I don't care how you set up the story. JUST DON'T STOP WRITING!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on May 06, 2005
    I haven't reviewed this before, but I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this, and I've been following it for several months. I really like Hermione/Draco, but I don't read too much because it takes so long to find the good stuff among the mounds of stories by fourteen-year-olds who try to write smut but don't know where the clitoris is *rolls eyes*, so this is really fantastic. Also, on the sequel/continuation, I vote sequel. Maybe it's my ADD, but I have a lot of trouble following really long stories and staying interested, so a sequel would be better for me.
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  • From ANON - mel on May 06, 2005
    I LOVE this story! I read chapters 1-43 in 3 sittings. You are a very talented author and manage to actaully get a plot in between all the smut. Part two is a good idea. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - kat on May 06, 2005
    Lovely chapter; you've finally updated! I enjoyed it immensely...don't get too preoccupied with reading other fanfics, you've made my day with your update!!
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  • From ANON - alemap on May 06, 2005
    I just noticed that the story is up to chapter 44. I can't believe I haven't reviewed before now, seeing as I've been reading it from your first post. And here I am always happy when I see an update, because I get a kick out of your characterizations. How ungrateful of me. Dramatic but with enough purpose to keep the plot moving and the consistent humor make this one of my favorite stories, published or not. I also adore your wording style; slightly sarcastic at times, genuine, and just put together in ways I find engaging. I really hope you know that you are a very good writer, plot and language wise, and that your contributions are appreciated.

    As to breaking the story into parts: I think that if you're going to have more of the story revolve around or if there is a significant portion of the climax concerning Pansy or her Volcano then keep going on as you are. However, if those two elements are dead I would make a Part 2. You may even consider putting the break earlier on in the story, maybe ending the volcano arc just before Tony starts to show too much interest in Hermione. One arc for Pansy, another for Tony, and maybe one for clean-up of other sub plots like Draco's handling of his father and the war. Just a suggestion.

    Ta'
    Map

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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 06, 2005
    Hey, great chapter. Educating Draco is more fun then having Snape explain about sex to Harry. And trust me those stories are damn entertaining.^.^
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  • From ANON - Arien on May 06, 2005
    I love this chapter (44) and I love Draco. This was cute about the whole period thing. And as for the length of the fic, I think you should just continue with this, and not make a part two. You never see any good 80-chapter fics any more. :D

    Hope the next update comes soon!

    --Arien
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 06, 2005
    My vote is to keep it all together. This is such a monumental achievement, I think it should be complete, in all its glory. Do you have any idea how disappointed I will be if JK doesn't make Draco Head Boy?

    BTW, I think you should add in that orgasm is the best cramp medicine in the world. Draco is not the only one who's OK with a little blood, but it would be nice if it were a little more prevalent.
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