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Reviews for Pansy's Volcano

By : Bluemidget57

From ANON - Kylara on April 18, 2005
Gosh, by revealing it in the next chapter, I can't decide if that means she IS or ISN'T pregnant. :P You're a tricky, tricky writer.

That was a very spicy love scene ^^ and I'm glad the issue over Tony between D&Hr was resolved smoothly (although I look forward to seeing Tony try to interfere, too :P) - I'm glad that they're truly blossoming into a really solid couple. Hermione's statement at the end of the chapter is just adorable :> I hope they see each other over break!

Lucius seems to be coming back into the picture, so that will be quite scary if that's the case. I'm so happy you updated, I greatly enjoyed this chapter :D until next time!
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From ANON - lorett on April 17, 2005
Well it was a fun little chapter. I am SO happy that you had Hermione and Draco approach the idea of someone trying to come between them as INTELLIGENT and THOUGHTFUL kids. Thoughtful, in regard to the fact that they THINK and can look at things somewhat objectively as well as emotionally.

GOOD JOB! I breathed a sigh of relief.

One hurtle down...I'll just have to wait and see on the whole pregnancy thing. Still crossing my fingers that they will have approached the idea of sex on the same level that they approach all other things; intelligently and yet still passionately.

Lorett
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From ANON - Chrissy on April 17, 2005
Hi I just love your story. Its one of the reason why i come back to adult fanfiction.net to see if the chapter is updated yet. I just can't get enouph of it. I just love it. You are a great author.
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From ANON - missin4mation on April 17, 2005
let 'em freak out for a bit but there must be some kind of potion to bring on mense? infusion of pennyroyal or something...but again this is your universe but personly i don' think the story needs a teenage pegnacy slant.

anyhoo, i ador this story. the deep feelings that herimone and draco feel for eachtother, the involed plot and the truly fleshing out of side characters we hardly ever see. i love a brillent luna for instance.

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From ANON - Bri on April 16, 2005
*whines* I want an update. I check, like, five times a day. *whines* *Pansy's Volcano withdrawal comes back with a vengeance*
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From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
Love it.
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From ANON - lorett on April 12, 2005
OH MY GOD DON'T DO IT!

NO! (Shaking head emphatically) NO! NOT HERMIONE PREGNANT! NOOOOOOOO! Come on now! Hermione and Draco are SMART! She's BRILLIANT! She'd NOT forget to do some kind of spell to pervent pregnancy! I KNOW SHE WOULD NOT! And NO WAY would Draco. He's no dull light bulb either! They're HEAD BOY AND GIRL for heaven's sake! They got there for a reason and it wasn't for overlooking details!

Please, Please, please don't make Hermione all...oops...I forgot about birth control and now I'm pregnant, whatever will we do?

Don't do it!

Sad sigh. Now I have to go back and read where Hermione is thinking about if she's pregnant. I didn't remember getting that warning bell when I was reading it.

Ah well. As Padfoot said, you're the creator of this PV universe, I am just one of your satellites rotating around and waiting to see what you do.

Lorett
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From ANON - Padfoot the Marauder on April 11, 2005
Good lord, did you just freak me out! I never even thought about the possibility of Hermione getting pregnant! I did wonder if she would be getting her period, since you seem to be describing almost every single day and she and Draco have been together for about two weeks now. Jeez, wouldn't it be horrible if she was pregnant after only two weeks of shagging? But you're the creator of the PV-universe, so I suppose if someone knows if there's a bun in the oven that it's you.

Eagerly waiting for the next update,
Padfoot.
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From ANON - Ariana on April 10, 2005
Hey! I just wanted to tell you that I think this a fantastic story and it always leaves me hungry for more. I love it when Draco calls Hermione Mina - I think it's very intimate and it makes me do a inner squee that I didn't know I had in me. Kudos to you for writing such great fiction.

In the coming weeks the winners to the Accio Fanfiction Awards will be announced, of which I am a part of. Not that I would EVER say who's going to win (partly because that would ruin the fun and partly because I don't know yet) but I am glad that you were nominated because it gave me the chance to read a good story. So I guess I owe a thanks to whoever nominated you. I can't wait for another update!
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From ANON - Samurai Leprechaun on April 10, 2005
OH MY GOD!
I never even thought about Hermione getting pregnant!
(smacks myself in the forehead)
i feel like such a tosser
Now im completely in suspense
I am a complete addict
You're story rocks
Cant wait for the next chappie
Luv ya (",)
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From ANON - sweet_euthanasia on April 10, 2005
this is really really good. it's 1:07 right now and i just spent the last hour reading your story. it's addictive!
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From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2005
wonderful story!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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From ANON - Bluemidget on April 09, 2005
I promised to reply to my reviewers today, and I am afraid I very nearly fell off the wagon! But I feel I was lucky they had to change the date of the Wedding otherwise I would have been at work and unable to watch. So now you know what I was doing instead of answering.

I want to thank everyone who voted for this little ditty in the Dangerous Laiasons awards. I am so shocked to have won anything - particularly since this has been ongoing for so long, that I am not quite sure what to do with myself!!!!

Let me address the big questions; Pregnant or not - either in 43 or 44 you will find out. I had hoped for 43, but already it is quite long, and would be even longer if the exposition took place in it also. If I find it won't fit, I promise it will be the opening scene of the next chapter. Snape's ladyfriend will be revealed soon after the christmas break, as will his plans for Pansy's detention.

Draco will get a lot of attention over the Christmas break; after all, he does have the more stressful holiday to look forward to.

To all of you who write such wonderful stories and still spare the time to comment on mine, I apologise for being a Bad Reviewer. I will try better to return the compliment. To everyone else who has taken a moment to pen an opinion, I am truly grateful. I love to hear if a certain phrase or sentence has amused or struck you, and I always compare the things which you comment on to see if they were the occasional ideas I had which I impressed myself with. Oddly enough, they rarely are - it's always something I wouldn't have thought particularly special that you comment on!!! Go figure! Someone asked about the Round Table - not an Arthurian legend although it sounds better like that, but in fact an actual group similar to the Lions or Kiwanis in America, I think. My brother in law was very active in it, although you are expected to retire at 40, so maybe Hermione's parents might have been pushed upstairs by now.

Lastly, I want to say I sent in my money order to help Ayla with the upkeep of this site; it really is a gem in the world of cyber fiction; if everyone who read PV even sent her $1, it would help ensure that I and other - shall we say - less computer savvy writers, still have somewhere to post stuff and reach all you wonderful readers.

I hate to not acknowledge everyone individually, but I know I would forget someone. Yuo are the reason I continue to wrtie; I hope you all know that, and thanks again!
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From ANON - rwink8 on April 08, 2005
I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see what happens with draco and anthony. PLease update soon.
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From ANON - CiraArana on April 08, 2005
Hiho! I've just finished reading the whole fic again (yes, I'm a quick reader) and just wanted to tell you two more things.
First, my favourite scene is the one in the Restricted Section of the library. It's... hot. I have a thing for lemony-scenes in the half-public. Yes, I liked the one in Oringle's office, too, but I like that better.
Second, my favourite part - even at the third reading- is still this: "Hermione shivered, forcefully reminded that this was not a domesticated New Age man in touch with his feminine side, but instead a ruthless, powerful young wizard whose ancestry could be traced back through generations of villains and Dark Arts practitioners." It makes shivers run down my spine. Rrrr, yeah, Draco's a REAL man... *giggles*
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